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instill

In me.

A fear.

A reprehensible fear.

A white wash. Deep, entrenched and seared.

Holding tight was is near and dear.

To me.

In me.

An unshakeable. Fear

» Posted By visage On 03.02.2013 @ 5:07 pm

steps

12. Pushed. Machine. 1000. Foot. Sisters.

» Posted By visage On 11.02.2012 @ 2:11 am

entrance

She squeezed her hand between the rockface entrance scraping the skin off her knuckles

» Posted By visage On 10.18.2012 @ 5:02 am

fractures

FracTures
In her personality
Allow the rain in
Cooling and soothing
The rush of blood

» Posted By visage On 06.22.2012 @ 5:48 am

racket

A racketeer by way of debauched adolescent. It was the only forseeable at the time. It’s easy to cast blame, sure. But it was a them or me. I’m a simple animal. I chose to meet my immediate needs. It had to be done… Really. Admiteddly, if had a choice, I’d probably do it again.

» Posted By visage On 06.10.2012 @ 10:47 pm

disregard

Hunched in
Feotal, Ignored
Craving for touch
Some acknowledgement
Look me in the eyes
Show us our humanity
Give me one look,
Cmon…

» Posted By visage On 05.13.2012 @ 10:17 pm

flood

My eyes were closed but I could feel her flood me with light. I am saturated by the constant and unnerving desire to kill her.

» Posted By visage On 12.21.2011 @ 4:09 pm

thunder

Her vitality hit me with a thunderous slap; moving from revolt to must have now to holding.

» Posted By visage On 12.20.2011 @ 4:54 am

hearts

“winning the hearts and minds” – early wounding.

» Posted By visage On 11.16.2011 @ 3:31 pm

awakening

i close me oyos the spots of light n me mind becum a ComBUSTion ov st*rs spirallllllllllllling in and out of its3lf – a glimpse of it all n its Glory!

» Posted By visage On 10.23.2011 @ 8:41 pm

castle

A kiss upon the shoulder,
Grants entry into my castle.
So simple this bequest,
But you should know –
You’ll be imprisoned in fear
And darkness. You’ll find no rest.

» Posted By visage On 10.19.2011 @ 3:54 pm

mutual

Shared
Feeling
Close
Near
Similar

» Posted By visage On 10.18.2011 @ 5:11 pm

iron

Iron heart clangs
Fistful of tears
Winds up the rain
Braving the storm
Yet not capable
Relentless
Not withstanding
The tide, the tumultuous
Fucking tide

» Posted By visage On 10.09.2011 @ 5:48 pm

morality

Proper bullshit,
Wrapped all the way round,
Twisted and defaming
A wretched and blaming
Archaic bastardization of ideal standards
Shove your morality
Replace it with my self righteous wank

» Posted By visage On 10.04.2011 @ 7:24 pm

playground

The foreground
Sound
Sand mound
Found
Round and round
Ground

» Posted By visage On 09.27.2011 @ 6:17 pm

port

The port has sailed. Swept by hurricane winds, lifting it clear off the shore. Ships caught in it’s wake clink and crumple against the crashing waves, like tin cans on the back of a newly wed car bound for a beginning.

» Posted By visage On 09.22.2011 @ 7:08 pm

ant

Ants follow one by one collect into deep crevices preparing for wind and rain.

» Posted By visage On 09.06.2011 @ 5:14 am

offer

An astute bargain perhaps?

» Posted By visage On 08.30.2011 @ 6:56 pm

mist

A mist of thoughts each flickering and zip around the edges of his mind vying for spotlight. As he turns his attention they drop into the thinness of air merging with him entirely.

» Posted By visage On 08.29.2011 @ 6:23 pm

chance

Chance; a self revelation to an opportunity awaiting recognition and deliberation.

» Posted By visage On 08.28.2011 @ 8:09 pm

destruction

¡EXPLOSION!

Slow it down.
Dismantle it with care
Let it gently collapse
As you Pull the last
Threaded screw

» Posted By visage On 08.27.2011 @ 8:26 am

umbrella

Drop the umbrella
Let the rain seep in
To your hair and clothes
Let the elements
Slide down your skin
Allow the dream
To live

» Posted By visage On 08.24.2011 @ 7:45 pm

silk

Silk worms plucked
From earth
Wound tight
Weaves light
By fingers
Already worked
By the fields

» Posted By visage On 08.23.2011 @ 9:13 pm

sinking

My heart is sinking into places it hasn’t been in a while. Filling spaces and rising to the surface like a sponge dipped into a hot steamy bath. Releasing slowly and steadily.

» Posted By visage On 08.23.2011 @ 6:33 am

succeed

To succeed is to have your expectations met. The opposite is disappointment? To have your expectation + a gain is to have exceeded…Maybe?

» Posted By visage On 08.18.2011 @ 1:52 am

repeat

Could you repeat that please? I cant hear through your Bullshit!

» Posted By visage On 08.16.2011 @ 9:59 pm

thread

Thoroughbred. That’s how it reads. Well to me anyway. What on earth does it mean. Of course I know what it means but it’s origins are from a darker time. Does that mean we’re a little more enlightened now? Can we claim that. Well of course, we’ve evolved some. But by how much? And by whose yard stick?

» Posted By visage On 08.16.2011 @ 8:27 am

punishment

Redundant and ineffective; Unimaginative laziness. A short-lived outcome. I despise the term, it’s meaning and it’s manifestations. Punishment when handed out lacks foresight. It cannot rehabilitate it only perpetuates what it believes it tries to protect or prevent.

» Posted By visage On 08.14.2011 @ 7:00 pm

near

You’re too close. Move back. Open a window. I can’t breathe in here.

» Posted By visage On 08.13.2011 @ 7:02 pm

brick

The architectural blueprints for this house
Lie beneath layer upon layer of brick
Draftsman elbow deep in concrete filling
Spaces cracked by expansion

» Posted By visage On 08.09.2011 @ 8:55 am

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