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stampede

and there i was, in the middle of it all.
the deafening roar of meaningless noise, people swarmed all around me.
breathing became more and more difficult to the point where, with every step, i was being dragged down. and there was no coming back up.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 10.16.2013 @ 10:38 am

aura

There was something about her, something incredibly intriguing. Almost difficult to pinpoint, and so beautiful.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 09.07.2013 @ 8:50 am

strung

She was so far gone, so high up in these false clouds.
Every day, waiting for something. Waiting for a sign, waiting for him.
So far gone,
she couldn’t see how far she was about to fall.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 08.29.2013 @ 9:20 am

narrative

What makes a narrative?
A train of honest thoughts, pouring out onto the page?
A silent observer, carefully watching and saving their breath for a blank canvas?
An imperfectly perfect human, full of flaws; breathing, living, thinking.
Freedom, with the world encased in a single page.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 08.23.2013 @ 11:09 pm

footage

He held the tape in his hands, palms sweating as he gripped it with every ounce of his being.
“You wouldn’t.” she snarled.
“Oh yes, I most definitely w-would.” he uttered, licking his lips and glancing over the edge.
Suddenly, she lunged forwards, hand outstretched.
And with a single breath, he let go.
Falling.
Falling.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 08.26.2013 @ 3:52 am

antithesis

All of my thoughts contradicted each other, nothing made any sense. I found myself slipping, unable to determine the difference between reality and false facts and ideals. My mind is poison, and there is no escaping the constant question:
Who am I?

» Posted By saachosaurus On 06.04.2013 @ 11:57 pm

homeless

Abandoned. Hurt. Alone.
Loneliness.
That’s a hard place to be. In the depths of loneliness.
Sort of like there’s this great big looming grey cloud over you just nagging and pulling at you. Never quite letting you enjoy the shards of serenity you’re able to scrape at.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 06.04.2013 @ 1:18 am

bowling

The smiles, the laughter, the cheers and shouts. No real way to describe the feeling of sharing those victories, teasing the losses. The sense of unity, of familiar belonging, found only within the smallest of pleasures.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 04.26.2013 @ 9:01 am

flailing

“H-help!” she yelled, the salty water splashing into her mouth. “C-c-can’t swim! P-please!” she struggled to shout, shivering and spluttering.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 02.19.2013 @ 6:49 am

sound

All around him, there was no escaping it. His head pounded incessantly, refusing to stop. There was a ringing in his ears, growing louder and louder.
“PLEASE! STOP IT!” he screamed, hysterical. There was no end, and nothing he could do.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 01.19.2013 @ 6:19 am

choose

The time had come, I had to make my decision now. Either me, or her. What other choice was there?
With trembling hands, I lifted it in the air, and let go.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 01.18.2013 @ 11:05 am

lord

From all around me, they chanted. Again and again, repeating the same words, like these pointless words were going to change anything.
I caught eyes with him, and quickly looked away, almost intimidated by the amount of power he held. As I turned to leave, every one of them got to their knees and chanted
‘Our lord.’

» Posted By saachosaurus On 01.05.2013 @ 3:12 am

fire

I could feel it seeping through my blood, slowly setting every part of me alight. It hurt, but in a good way. I didn’t want it to stop, there was a rush that came with it. It was becoming a part of me, and I was afraid of what was yet to come.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 12.25.2012 @ 11:51 pm

procedure

The word procedure, reminds me of this horrific operation, where the doctors go: “let’s hope for a smooth procedure” or “the procedure will be short and quick”.
You know it won’t.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 12.25.2012 @ 8:43 am

sate

I needed it. I wanted it, oh so badly. My heart yearned for it, and yet for some reason I couldn’t quite bring myself to just reach out. The hunger grew more and more prominent, as it dangled aggressively in front of me.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 12.19.2012 @ 10:35 pm

game

The game was up. There was nothing left to do. No more options. What more could she possibly attempt? There was no way out. She slowly stepped out from her hiding place, hands raised. Time was up. The chase had come to an end.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 12.19.2012 @ 7:05 am

stir

The more she thought, the more she could feel the visions being stirred around in her head, consuming her entirely. She tried to distract herself, focus on something that wouldn’t hurt as much, but she couldn’t. It enveloped her entirely, the thoughts stirring around constantly.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 12.15.2012 @ 9:32 pm

himself

He was completely alone, with nobody but himself. Alone, but in the best possible way. He sat there, by the river, collecting his thoughts. Completely at peace with himself and the world.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 11.30.2012 @ 7:10 pm

rise

Rise against the negativity, the hate and despair. Rise against the people who try to bring you down, show them you’re better than that. Prove to them that you are strong, you can overcome the hardest of struggles. Even when they try to shoot you down, rise against them. Rise up against.

» Posted By saachosaurus On 11.30.2012 @ 7:22 am

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