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steps

123 its what we see
123 its what we try to be
231back to front
231im all done

» Posted By Mouse On 10.19.2016 @ 4:11 pm

protest

I huddle in the crowd, not knowing what is about to happen. In front of the crowd the mayors house lys. People are shouting and shaking there fists. I was just swept into there, mistakenly put in a place of distress and restlessness. I snake away from the mayors house, but the crown seems to go on forever.

» Posted By Mouse On 04.30.2015 @ 4:52 pm

badge

C’mon. Hurry up. I said to myself . I pushed my self harder and harder, and pushed past the finish line in 5th place. Sheesh not very good. Ugh. Coulda done better. Coulda woulda shoulda.

» Posted By Mouse On 04.29.2015 @ 3:55 pm

pepper

Aux pouvre, said the spidery recipe, and I had to face with another sigh the fact that my grandmother’s language was still completely inaccessible to me. It had been a source of sadness for me, to some time, that I could not communicate with my mother’s recently European family, but had to silently watch them across the kitchen table, hands wrapped around cooling mint tea, as they whispered indecipherable sentences to each other in a hush, eyeing me from the side.

» Posted By mouse On 12.12.2014 @ 6:51 pm

freezer

cold burning ice
your words mean nothing
take me away
thoughts breed nothing but fire when
you speak
don’t talk
ive found someone new
younger but more mature
take a breath
take a break
let the frost build up while you smile and wait
i’m not the one
just afraid to be alone
take me now
i’m too drunk to regret

» Posted By mouse On 01.08.2014 @ 3:54 am

creativity

swells
grows
crumbles
beneath
simple
sicken
drunken
splutter
sizzle
fizzle
forget it all
drunken
drizzle
paint over it
tomorrow
forget.

» Posted By mouse On 11.17.2013 @ 4:53 am

stampede

truth glides
fearful calm
slow seductive
lips
panicked words
rush out- wild
small feet move quickly
stifle trample dust

» Posted By mouse On 10.15.2013 @ 7:19 pm

hoping

she’s floating still
distilled
down a river
or lake
you never can tell
maybe she stopped
drinking hoping
there was another way
to cope

» Posted By mouse On 10.03.2013 @ 4:28 pm

piano

fingers slide over
pale flesh, beautiful
rhythm; your forte

» Posted By mouse On 09.23.2013 @ 10:34 pm

hell

arriving
was not what i’d expected
empty
no fire, no demons or such
this day
very similar to those before
still living
the same, except
empty.

this life is
hell
without you.

» Posted By mouse On 09.22.2013 @ 4:04 pm

senator

empty words
promises
pockets

the world
they’ll give it to you
if you

trust
but how can they all
have the world to give?

» Posted By mouse On 09.15.2013 @ 4:45 pm

complexity

i’m always lost
there’s complex after complex
small winding roads
a tiny city
complex with avenues on left and right

» Posted By mouse On 09.08.2013 @ 6:23 pm

ravenous

flesh fresh
birds circle
ravens roving
craving carving
starve cut
rip ravenous
raven fresh
flesh raving
squawk squeal

» Posted By mouse On 09.03.2013 @ 5:33 pm

chivalry

chivalry is dead…

but women killed it.

» Posted By mouse On 08.13.2013 @ 9:35 pm

distress

wearing a nervous nice dress
shoes shine teeth white
thirty minutes early
wait
in a dark chair
feet tapping
fingers pick at cotton threads
fumbling
thumbing through magazines
eyes glaze over glossy faces
stress distress confess
never done this before

» Posted By mouse On 08.11.2013 @ 5:30 pm

sundried

tomatoes
wrinkly
sweet

summer clothes
wrinkled
torn

one of those
wrinkling
brown bodies

all drying
changed
wasting

» Posted By mouse On 08.08.2013 @ 5:24 pm

fasting

grumble gripping, ill
inhale your fill
see their smiles
see you’re full

» Posted By mouse On 08.05.2013 @ 9:54 pm

delve

deeper into under
through
questions

delusion deluge
delving into someplace
i shouldn’t

» Posted By mouse On 08.04.2013 @ 3:16 pm

wrought

iron
an iron fist
beating, beaten
misshaped
perfectly
listen follow

» Posted By mouse On 07.17.2013 @ 9:33 pm

backlit

silhouettes writhing
slowly
one candle and the moon
i shiver silent
not like me to watch but
i’ve been alone for days

» Posted By mouse On 07.16.2013 @ 5:39 pm

gamer

a game
he plays
plucking
strings
guitars,hearts.

a game
i lost
heart in his hands
playing, plucking
letting go

» Posted By mouse On 07.16.2013 @ 3:16 am

steady

his
shaky hands
hold steadfast
steady
nervous trigger
finger quivers.
shouting out
apologies
in a voice
not his own

» Posted By mouse On 06.30.2013 @ 3:39 pm

decoy

took me by the hand
led me astray-
not what i wanted.
destroy me with a decoy
of what i thought
she might be.

» Posted By mouse On 06.27.2013 @ 3:43 pm

joyous

joyous rejoice
stress test rest
depress
joy
study test test
soon we’ll be lawyers,
join us
joyous stress
test rest
stress

» Posted By mouse On 06.26.2013 @ 3:46 pm

blamed

I stood
watching flames lick at the side of my house
yellow blue brown black

I wept
feeling blame creep into each part of my brain
young beautiful boy black

» Posted By mouse On 06.25.2013 @ 4:11 pm

arthritis

barely moving, stuck
stuck together, in this place
old and weary
but we’re both so young

it’s stale, cold
groceries, dinners
easier than loneliness
i can hardly move

» Posted By mouse On 06.24.2013 @ 3:47 pm

stilts

high above the silt,
sand, coloured people
splashing playing
should look like fun
not today
i’m happy here
high above, on stilts

» Posted By mouse On 06.23.2013 @ 3:49 pm

adorned

adorned with some silver,
a little gold and a smile
she came to me
a ring on her finger
heart on her sleeve
and a knife in her hand

» Posted By mouse On 06.20.2013 @ 7:37 pm

shells

the shells he’d given her still made the same sounds
the ocean
a whisper
a kiss, which lingered

the sound of a fight echoes
around her neck
she cries a little
and rips them off

» Posted By mouse On 06.19.2013 @ 8:06 pm

tumble

thoughts tumble around like clothes drying,
over each other,
tossing, laughing
and words tumble out like that sock you don’t own

» Posted By mouse On 06.18.2013 @ 4:54 pm

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