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she left my heart
laying there
a puddle of yuck
and hurt and love
and sorrow and joy
and pain and beauty
all jumbled up into a
giant, messy, gross, disgusting
how will i ever
clean up this mess?

» Posted By karmachik On 04.10.2012 @ 7:10 pm


Tthe demonstration he was giving was so boring, it nearly put me to sleep. That is, until the handsome demonstrator looked right at me and gave a me a smile and a wink, and did a little call me sign. Hmm…maybe I should have listened to what he was saying after all.

» Posted By karmachik On 03.07.2012 @ 9:00 pm


i haven’t got a clue
as to how this life
is supposed to play out
i do know
that i’m really tired, though
of trying to figure it out

» Posted By karmachik On 02.14.2012 @ 7:45 pm


this journey has been epic
the paths we have traveled were
interesting, difficult, fun, adventurous
not always happy, we journeyed together
i’d hoped for a love affair just as epic
as our journey together
but alas,
a friendship was all there was,
at best
i tried to make it enough
i failed
left without love nor friend
sometimes i miss our journey
i miss my friend

» Posted By karmachik On 02.02.2012 @ 8:38 pm


I watched the little girl pull her wagon down the sidewalk
the summer sun blushing her cheeks and dancing in her eyes.
She stopped every few feet, bent over, and stared
then perhaps would pick something up,
examine it, and deem it worthy of a ride in her wagon.
When she came near, I shouted to her,
“little girl, what are you collecting?”
She smiled big and held her open palm
up to the sky so I could see them.
“Treasures!” she exclaimed.
“I’m collecting treasures!”
she turned back toward her destination
and went about her way
her and her wagon-full of treasures.

» Posted By karmachik On 02.01.2012 @ 7:08 pm


dance little puppet
jump little minion
through the hoops
do what i say
and perhaps i will give you
the attention that you crave
i do as she asks
eager for my reward
but instead she gives
me more of the same
and i realize that this
clown mask
has permanently
stained my face

» Posted By karmachik On 01.28.2012 @ 11:51 pm


she laughed a joyous laugh
her wrinkled skin
decorated in brilliant colors
the yellow-ish gold beehive
spun carefully about her tiny head
looked like a crown
she was the queen of her universe
how wonderfully
life must have treated her
i felt pride and envy
what a beautiful soul

» Posted By karmachik On 01.25.2012 @ 10:21 pm


mending fences
broken fences
picket fences
jumping fences
pipe dreams
all of them
i’ll stick to the fences of
i’ve constructed around
my heart

» Posted By karmachik On 01.22.2012 @ 9:28 pm


she put herself below me
no matter how hard i tried
to bring up next to me
what i was
who i am
what i did
was always too much for her
constantly comparing herself
feeling smaller and smaller
so she fell farther and farther
below me
until the only way i could help her
was to leave

» Posted By karmachik On 01.17.2012 @ 7:42 pm


he played his accordion with passion
pushing and pulling the large instrument easily
as if he were guided by an other-worldly force
to most he looked ridiculous
cradling this monstrosity in his arms like a baby
but the look on his face
and the life that radiated in his eyes
spoke of his need to create
his melodies
smiling, our spirits connected
he knew that I understood

» Posted By karmachik On 01.15.2012 @ 12:12 pm


i sat on a bench in the park this afternoon
tired, lifeless, sad
children were running about
playing, laughing, living
the sweet smell of autumn
drifted through the air
and i remembered
as i watched them now
that i too was once like them
i too and laughed and played
i smiled with these memories
then i rose from my bench
sat on an empty swing
and hurled myself into the air
back and forth
just like i did when i was young
and i remembered what it felt like
to be alive again

» Posted By karmachik On 01.14.2012 @ 11:26 pm


the crisp winter winds
chill me to the bone
i used to detest this feeling
wanting to run from it
but now
there is a sort of comfort in it
i have accepted this chill
the changing of the seasons
after a lifetime of leaving
i embrace this chill
I am finally home

» Posted By karmachik On 01.13.2012 @ 11:01 pm


the sun fell down around her
she was sparkling like diamonds
i couldn’t look away
didn’t want to
i needed to have her
feel her
touch her
it was love
it had to be
the way her beauty
captivated me

» Posted By karmachik On 01.11.2012 @ 6:48 pm


the way he ripped her heart from her chest
threw it to the ground
and left her to wither and die
was nothing short of savage
but she wasn’t having any of it
she knew she was stronger than that
so she picked up her heart
brushed it off
gave it a kiss
and put it back inside of her
his loss, she said
his loss

» Posted By karmachik On 01.09.2012 @ 6:55 pm


she picked the lillies
stuck them in her hair
and danced about
in the golden sunshine
the warm, fragrant air
circled her
intoxicated her
as she reveled in this place
in peace and love and freedom
she knew that this
was where her soul
had been living

» Posted By karmachik On 01.09.2012 @ 9:59 am


there are a dozen reasons why
i shouldn’t fall in love with you
but do you think my heart really cares?
that’s why i can’t help it
i love you
and that’s the only reason that matters

» Posted By karmachik On 01.06.2012 @ 10:23 pm


she wears her apron
blue and white checked
her uniform
the symbol of her wife-ly duties
she does what she has to do
wishing sometimes
to be rid of this piece of cloth
and of the responsibilities
it carries
she wishes she were free

» Posted By karmachik On 01.05.2012 @ 9:44 pm


she managed her estate, down to the last detail, leaving nothing to chance. she didn’t want them to worry about anything when the time came, not that they were even aware of the fact that the end was near. her end would be shock enough for them all.

» Posted By karmachik On 12.31.2011 @ 9:25 pm


i’d like to build a bridge
between who i was
and who i am now
but some things
are better left
it’s all just water

» Posted By karmachik On 12.30.2011 @ 10:26 pm


my life feels like a desert
no friends
i stay in my house
my family
is my oasis

» Posted By karmachik On 12.28.2011 @ 5:33 pm


i carved her initials into my arm
tiny pools of blood dripped to the floor
but none of it mattered
she’s not my girlfriend anymore

» Posted By karmachik On 12.26.2011 @ 7:52 pm


the silence between us
became so deafening
i could no longer hear her
pathetic cries for attention

» Posted By karmachik On 12.25.2011 @ 9:20 pm


i’m in a hurry
to get my life back
to get things in order
to be in love again
to see you
to finally start living my life
and to be done with the past
i’m in a hurry
but time isn’t moving fast enough
or maybe it’s just me
that isn’t.

» Posted By karmachik On 12.22.2011 @ 10:32 pm


thoughts of him
would flood her mind
her heart
her body
overcome with him
she felt herself drowning
he was her only
life preserver
she needed saving
from him
but only by him.

» Posted By karmachik On 12.22.2011 @ 12:01 am


the veil drawn now
this time
between my daylight face
and my night time reality
i struggle with who i really am
who i should be
what my life is
when the sun moves to meet the moon
at dusk

» Posted By karmachik On 12.21.2011 @ 12:17 am


the view
from where I’m sitting
is complicated
and oh so very beautiful
i love looking
at you

» Posted By karmachik On 12.09.2011 @ 10:24 pm


hidden in plain sight
she kept her affairs secret
but made no attempt
as delved deeper into him
she thought she was sneaky
hiding her words, her trysts, her looks,
but i could read her like a book
the sordid nasty novel that she was,
and i was sneaky too
uncovering all that she thought she hid.

» Posted By karmachik On 12.08.2011 @ 7:16 pm


black and white
swirled together
our souls
a marble of our lives
who we are
in need you
as much as you need me

» Posted By karmachik On 11.27.2011 @ 7:55 pm


wild horses take me away
run fast and far
to another place
wide open space
somewhere i’ve never been
a place I long to be
wild horses take me please
i beg for freedom
for emptiness
for nothingness
wild horses let me roam free
empty these thoughts
as we ride
careless free
no destination
take me
wild horses
to where i need
to be.

» Posted By karmachik On 11.24.2011 @ 11:18 pm


i left her,
the bullshit,
her cheating
her childish ways
i left my life
i left my car and my pets and my computer
i left everything i thought was going to be but never was
i left her
but came back to me

» Posted By karmachik On 11.15.2011 @ 8:06 pm

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