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mist

it was dusk, we were sitting under the tree, remembering the first time it was dusk and we were sitting under the tree, mist between here and the there we would never get to, his hand just now on my breast

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.29.2011 @ 7:05 pm

destruction

it was all green and lush full of crickets and butterflies birds and cats overjoyed
it was only later I figured out what happened

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.27.2011 @ 7:54 am

force

she’s a trip thinkgs she’s in touch with and is an emissary of the ways of the flow but she bucks and broncoes and twists it all into a mobius strip, she would do better on the straight (to co-opt a phrase and only so to speak) and a little narrowerer and with a slight kick in the bum

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.26.2011 @ 9:46 am

punishment

there is no statute of limitations on certain things, no apology, no penitence no takeback no payback no payforward no words no erasure lots of censure for my silence as if it were about my ethics and not about his life
my bad

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.14.2011 @ 5:14 pm

discovery

it was an eye opener, this realizing that deep down she was shallow, and how he’d resisted it not that he didn’t deep down know it, he just didn’t want to have to deal with it, but she forced the issue and now she would have a grand discovery…

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.12.2011 @ 5:53 pm

elastic

it wasn’t that stretching was beyond her, or her girdle was too tight or her mind too small it’s just she preferred things decided once and for all, it wasn’t that she was beyond imagining or she had no imagination but she thought it better that things once carved out were left alone,
otherwise she would have to leave her husband

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.10.2011 @ 5:28 pm

brick

so I heard she’d called him that day something she never did, and asked him to come home early, he said no, she said since when did you get so rigid and he said since when did you get so bossy and that was the last she heard from him,
you’re kidding!

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.09.2011 @ 8:23 am

bulb

the first thing he said was I’m dying, well, that was the first true thing he said, which he didn’t do for 20 years, but it shed light on all our goings on, he went all out, leaving the rest of us, and there were many–he adorned himself with crowds–to pick up the pieces which of course we did, we loved him though mostly he was contemptible

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.06.2011 @ 11:39 am

lock

he thought he knew himself better than that, but no there he was out on the dock about ready to dive into unknown waters, who was he trying to impress, it’s not like he cared what she thought after all she wasn’t the key to anything

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.06.2011 @ 8:17 am

manager

the thing was she always thought she was such a hot little miss organizer incarnate, thing was she couldn’t organize herself out of a paper bag, no, she just tore the damn thing and it was her mousy assistant who made it all work, gutsy as all hell that one, running the multi-million dollar company from the seat of her slip until finally she married the ceo and fired the pretty but brainless twit, manage that! she said

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.05.2011 @ 9:16 am

the thing was she always thought she was such hot shit, little miss organizer incarnate, thing was she couldn’t organize herself out of a paper bag, no, she just tore the damn thing and it was her mousy assistant who made it all work, gutsy as all hell that one, running the multi-million dollar company from the seat of her slip until finally she married the ceo and fired the pretty but brainless twat, manage that! she said

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.05.2011 @ 9:12 am

level

slash and burn cavort guffaw as you will there’s no way to even up the sides, the ways of doing and thinking of fighting and gifting of honoring and slandering are a perfect tithe to never the twain shall meet, thanks be to god, she muttered and keeled dead over

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.04.2011 @ 8:20 am

root

i was off the mark thinking he would kill himself, at the root of it of course was it was so much easier to kill her, and i was too late to save him

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.02.2011 @ 8:11 am

wings

it was no easy thing, deciding to leave my home
wow that’s a lie, it was the easiest thing in the world, jumping off into the unknown and becoming anything anyone I could
and would and had imagined

» Posted By judigoldberg On 08.01.2011 @ 9:22 am

step

what if she wondered they didn’t get back together, what if he was the one who stepped away first what if she still loved him but didn’t like him any more what if his going on the lam was just a detour

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.31.2011 @ 7:32 am

it was the wrong thing she was sure but she was helpless, she would invite him to come, she would answer the door in her almost nothing and she would invite him to her bed, a scotch to start but to her bed make no mistake it was the wrong thing she was sure but it was her only chance

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.30.2011 @ 6:27 pm

muse

it’s not just one thing which went the way of topsy turvy it was a larger call
the cat heard it too, she winked and walked the other way, leaving me to face the music

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.30.2011 @ 8:48 am

amuse

bleating neon sign blasting car horn
the sound of her voice noxious as it was
hit the ground softly

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.29.2011 @ 10:27 am

thunder

there is no single reason, no certain line but a myriad
like rain and
laughter,
I follow the sound

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.27.2011 @ 6:03 am

lightning

it was like a thunderstorm, the tension in the room, each on their own side not even looking at each other but lightening was sure to strike of that not a single person in the room had a doubt, or who was generating it, and then her husband walked into the room, he’d been missing

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.26.2011 @ 8:04 am

ill

it was silly, the whole thing, thinking she was ill taking a pill off the sill at lil’s just because bob was there drinking his fill and looking at lil in quite that way that made her ill

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.25.2011 @ 8:35 am

she made him ill everything about her and in spite of that he was enthralled by her sass and if she invited him to her bed he would in spite of himself take her up on it in a flash he made himself ill truth be known but it would be an ill of a tumble

» Posted By judigoldberg On 07.24.2011 @ 3:09 pm

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