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the pieces are scattered across the floor, as her shattered heart is trying to be strong. will she make it? duck tape doesn’t fix everything.

» Posted By halfbright On 05.26.2013 @ 4:45 pm


that word looks like its mixed between two other words. so, i’m going to have to look in my vocabulary again, to see what the heck that means.

» Posted By halfbright On 05.24.2013 @ 8:51 am


my parents used to sing be a lullaby every night before i fell asleep..sometimes i pretended that i fell asleep, and other times i kept wanting to hear more. my family has three old tunes that will forever be special. <3

» Posted By halfbright On 05.20.2013 @ 6:52 am


the rocker is sweating all over the stage, screaming his lungs out. his band members are jumping up and down and the crowd is going wild.

» Posted By halfbright On 05.16.2013 @ 6:57 am


the loom was looming in the loominious air. and yes, that is a word, starting now.

» Posted By halfbright On 05.10.2013 @ 6:30 pm


soap cleans our skin, it makes things smell good, and it gives us bubbles :)

» Posted By halfbright On 05.09.2013 @ 6:29 pm


the drunk people were walking unsteadidly to their cars after the hockey game, throwing the beer bottles around…

» Posted By halfbright On 05.08.2013 @ 6:43 am


the stories are unbelievable. they won’t stop coming. the odd subjects, the funny lines, the old wrinkled smile that he gives as he tells all his grandkids. his wife is baking, remembering all the memories that had happened, never going to forget

» Posted By halfbright On 05.07.2013 @ 9:26 am


everything starts out simple. but we human’s tend to make things much more complicated, and that is just our instinct. we all, i think, need to stop and watch what the simplest things in life are. to make life easier, simplify.

» Posted By halfbright On 05.09.2013 @ 6:29 am


stay strong. that’s all i can tell you right now. really, that’s about it. ha, sorry to dissapoint you. anyway, take time, do something you love.

» Posted By halfbright On 05.04.2013 @ 10:00 pm


they are people, or things, that drive you crazy. they take your joy away, and they disturb you. you don’t know what to do with them besides hate them… but what they need to do is just resolve the problem. it’s better for them, you, and everyone else.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.29.2013 @ 7:06 pm


the sound of all the pins tumble to the ground as the bowling ball strikes again. the cheers in the background just confirmed the win that was just made.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.25.2013 @ 8:47 pm


the planter was having sore muscles as she had worked so hard on her garden, trying to pull out all the obnoxious weeds..

» Posted By halfbright On 04.24.2013 @ 8:56 pm


he was hiding in the burrow, not breathing. the heavy gear was weighing him down as the flags went up, the cannons shot, and his men next to him were falling. he ran out, trying to save as many as he could, before the last flight of power hit him in his chest.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.21.2013 @ 9:26 am


metro..metro….all i can think of that is, its just a word. just a word that has a meaning. a word that has an important meaning, like all the other words; including, love, heartbreak, trust..air.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.18.2013 @ 8:02 pm


i asked her a question, and all does to reply is shrug her shoulders. when i ask her what’s wrong, she says she’s fine. we used to tell each other everything. now all i get, is mumbling..

» Posted By halfbright On 04.17.2013 @ 9:34 am


the weight was pressuring me down so hard, i could barely breathe. i needed something to leverage it up so i could escape. if i could escape i could go save them, but until then, i’m trapped.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.16.2013 @ 9:33 am


she was the most prettiest girl he’s ever seen. he knew that she was for him, but she didn’t know what to do. he knew that he would do anything to keep her, because she had the other half of his heart.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.13.2013 @ 7:32 pm


The anchor is heavy, floating fast, down to the bottom of the sea. The weight pulling it fast through the blue waters, then hitting the warm sunned out sand. The splash it made as it was thrown from the pirate ship.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.11.2013 @ 7:51 pm

its heavy, floating fast down to the bottom of the sea. the weight pulling it fast through the blue waters, then hitting the warm sunned out sand. the splash it made as it was thrown from the pirate ship..

» Posted By halfbright On 04.11.2013 @ 7:50 pm


the dust is on the dashboard from the flip flops in the sand. the hot summer days as the dirt roads are keeping the car tires company as the warm summer drive is starting.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.10.2013 @ 10:00 am


the trench is deep, wide, and dirty. i can’t see through anything.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.09.2013 @ 10:23 am


i feel punished. i don’t know what’s going on, and i can’t do anything about it. my mind is trapped in a place that i can’t get out of, but it’s screaming. whatever it is, it’s punishing me and i don’t have a choice.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.08.2013 @ 9:31 am


the vines twirl and crawl upward on the wall. in and out of the spaces, searching for an area to fill. taking over the old rocky wall that no one uses, now left behind.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.05.2013 @ 5:04 pm


the warm butter sliding off the freshly toasted bagel. mmm, tasty. your mouth watering as its squishyness is just so good your swallowing it whole.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.04.2013 @ 6:26 am


i need to do it. it needs to be fabricated, but i can’t grasp onto it quick enough. if i don’t find out soon, it will kill me…i can’t stand it any longer.

» Posted By halfbright On 04.01.2013 @ 8:55 pm


the plague of what seems to be small, keeps growing. growing thick, black, heavy; taking the air out of my chest. i can’t see a thing through the muck in the sky, but all i know is i’m running. running to get out.

» Posted By halfbright On 03.31.2013 @ 1:16 pm

the plague is wrestling with my mind and i can’t handle it.

» Posted By halfbright On 03.30.2013 @ 10:21 pm


the wheat feilds are silent. the long weeds surging through the ground, trying to attack the ground, growing this way and that. the crunch of the wheat as it pops in your mouth..

» Posted By halfbright On 03.29.2013 @ 5:26 pm


the sound it makes. the destruction, the sights, the taste. i can’t breathe, the dust is clogging up my lungs, getting in my eyes. it is cold, but warm, as i get sucked into the giant void.

» Posted By halfbright On 03.27.2013 @ 4:50 pm

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