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circles

The circles flow across my vision. Diffent colors. Big and small. I don’t know what’s going on. I can only circles no background. I don’t feel anything, like I’m floating in space. I slowly start to feel my fingers, after a while I can move them up and down. The circles in my vision subside. Now I can feel my hands, my wrists, my arms. All of the sudden the growing feeling in my body stops, ‘not so fast darling’ a low husk voice murmals.

» Posted By Elise On 01.07.2018 @ 9:33 am

unhealthy

Unhealthy seems to be a common term to define Americans. The Untied States seems to be the #1 country not in education, nor healthcare but in obese people.

» Posted By Elise On 06.17.2016 @ 1:22 pm

fateful

It was a fateful choice I made that night. I snuck out of the house, went to my friend’s house and nearly killed her family in doing so. Fateful choices and I, we had a bond that was unbreakable. My mother often tells me it was because I was born on Halloween on midnight.

» Posted By Elise On 02.07.2016 @ 10:40 pm

sum

The trio was only as strong as the sum of it’s parts and right now, none of them were in top condition. There was nothing they could.

» Posted By Elise On 01.11.2016 @ 5:18 am

worthwhile

It is a quality that you don’t know if something or someone has usually until it is too late. Then you realize just how worthwhile they are.

» Posted By Elise On 01.07.2016 @ 5:50 am

instantly

The feeling of regret had been instant and now there was nothing that could be done. His heart pounded loud in his ears as he realized that in one swift motion his live had been change forever.

» Posted By Elise On 01.06.2016 @ 5:00 am

moon

There was nothing in the sky, not a single star…not even the moon. They looked out into the vast black nothingness and wondered how this had happened. They were supposed to save the galaxy, not destroy it and then run away from it.

» Posted By Elise On 01.05.2016 @ 4:56 am

sky dark light blue force gravity big live fly round blue lift love walk astronaut space universe

» Posted By elise On 01.04.2016 @ 3:26 pm

knockoff

C’est comme une paralysie; il ne ressent rien en touchant le sol. Tout mouvement est vain, son esprit embrumé mais il ne sent aucune douleur.

» Posted By Elise On 03.02.2015 @ 9:55 am

wintertime

The snow falls and I can feel the chill but I don’t mind.The holidays are almost here and the world is winter wonderland. Everything is white and the holiday music makes me smile. I can’t wait to go skiing because i love wintertime.

» Posted By Elise On 12.21.2014 @ 9:38 pm

venice

I wish I knew enough about Venice to write about it. It sounds like a lovely place to visit. Anyone want to fund a trip to Italy? I could use the time away from America and it’s awful government…possibly all of my time. Forever.

» Posted By Elise On 12.04.2014 @ 5:32 am

terrain

Exploring new places wasn’t high on his list of fun things to do. There was no map and no one to guide him. There were bugs he’d never seen before in his life and the terrain was litter with mudholes, including one that ate one half of his new pair of boots.

» Posted By Elise On 10.21.2014 @ 6:31 am

steadfast

There was be no changing her mind once she made it up. It may be suicide, but Piper was steadfast in her decision to avenge her grandfather’s death. She had been the moment she saw the blaster shot hit him in the chest.

» Posted By Elise On 10.20.2014 @ 6:13 am

starlit

beautiful, starlit night. peacefully lying beneath the sky with somebody important. maybe not even touching. just lying there and talking like there’s nothing else to do because it’s all so much bigger than you. the beauty you see is otherworldly, effervescent.

» Posted By elise On 02.06.2014 @ 10:38 am

native

I may have grown up on he opposite end of the country, but I always felt out of place there. Here I feel like I really belong. Like I’ve been a New Jersey native my whole life.

» Posted By Elise On 01.23.2014 @ 4:53 am

beaming

It’s a beautiful thing when you see someone smile for the first time. Not because they heard something funny, not because their being polite, but really smiling. Joy beaming from within.

» Posted By Elise On 01.21.2014 @ 5:54 am

border

Stepping over an invisible, intangible line seemed so ridiculous now that she had done it. Why was it that something she couldn’t even see was the key to her freedom. All of that work, risking her life to cross over to a new section on a map that was drawn ages ago from some old man’s imagination. What a load of crap

» Posted By Elise On 11.06.2013 @ 10:25 am

braid

I wore braids a lot when i was little. Pig tails braids were the thing back then and i just wish i could wear them again. Braids are a symbol of childhood and i wish i could take mine back. It has been stolen from me and i just wish i could go back to the time when i could wear my hair in braids.

» Posted By Elise On 10.19.2013 @ 3:52 pm

I wore braids alot when i was little. I wish i could be that young again, that innocent. Pig tails braids were the thing back then and i just wish i could wear them again. Braids are a symbol of childhood and i wish i could take mine back. It has been stolen from me and i just wish i could go back to the time when i could wear my hair in braids.

» Posted By Elise On 10.19.2013 @ 3:49 pm

rewrite

I do not like to rewrite things. However, you have to to become a good writer. I do not like to let others look over it, and rewrite anything of my things either. What about you?

» Posted By Elise On 10.10.2013 @ 8:52 am

pines

It pines me to see you like this. It’s hurting me. I don’t know why, it just does. WHy can’t you just be like a normal guy? Why do you have to be so complecated? I don’t understand it.it

» Posted By Elise On 10.08.2013 @ 2:27 pm

joyous

Scream as loud as you can
skip through the grass
smile as much as possible
laugh as hard as you can
and be joyous

» Posted By Elise On 06.26.2013 @ 2:47 pm

blamed

It’s my fault. It’s always my fault. I didn’t do anything. I saw her kill Jessica. My best friend. I would never do that. How could anyone thin anything so awful?

» Posted By Elise On 06.25.2013 @ 4:40 pm

pairs

Everyone does someone else. People are meant to be together, put into pairs. But it doesn’t always work out that way. But that’s the way it should be. Love, romance, forever. It all just boils down to two people.

» Posted By Elise On 06.17.2013 @ 4:51 pm

coach

The coaches at my school are kind of jerks. They don’t let a lot of people onto varsity that deserve it. They don’t appreciate the real talent. They have favorites. And they recognize them in gym class too. It’s kind of annoying. I wish I did sports though, just to get in good with them. And kind of make them a friend or a mentor. It’d be nice.

» Posted By elise On 06.10.2013 @ 6:27 pm

fools

There are a lot of fools in this world and I am one of them.

» Posted By Elise On 06.09.2013 @ 2:33 pm

taboo

I think that in our modern society. Nothing should be taboo. There should be nothing that cannot be discussed in a civilized fashion. It is censorship to make a word taboo.

» Posted By Elise On 05.13.2013 @ 11:16 am

branch

A tree branch; an extension of the self. The connection that weaves a family together and builds strong limbs.

» Posted By Elise On 04.12.2013 @ 4:59 pm

destined

Everything that has ever happened to me was destined to happen. I was suppose to have that meltdown last year and Jake was suppose to save me from myself. Breaking my leg was destined to be because it taught that i am so much more than an athlete. Everything that happens, happens for a reason.

» Posted By Elise On 03.27.2013 @ 7:32 am

eternal

Forever. Who would want to live that long? Enough bad happens in the span of a normal lifetime, I can’t imagine having to witness death and destruction and feel loss eternally.

» Posted By Elise On 03.14.2013 @ 7:45 am

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