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never

This wasn’t supposed to happen.
I remember mother telling me as a child, “Never go near that place, Dolly. Never.”
But it happened, damn that Paul and his twinkling eyes and charming smile. Damn him leading me into the woods.

» Posted By Drodi On 09.29.2014 @ 12:47 pm

manhattan

It was an ideal, something to strive for.
The Great Manhattan, looming ahead. Where dreams became reality, and sometimes reality became dreams.
We’d always worked towards Manhattan, it was our goal. Get out of this awful town and move on up.

» Posted By Drodi On 05.16.2013 @ 6:56 pm

methods

Some question my methods. But why question them when I get such spectacular results. I’ve never once failed at getting the needed information.
Sure, there has been a death or two. But what is a life?

» Posted By drodi On 12.09.2012 @ 10:22 pm

simple

It was easy. All he had to do was show up where he was supposed to be. Locate the target, and pull the trigger.
The first two steps were simple, the target was exactly where she was supposed to be, and I was exactly where I was supposed to be.
I should have never looked her in the eye.

» Posted By drodi On 12.06.2012 @ 6:30 am

higher

Breathe, take it in.
Let it out, watch the smoke curl.
She’s there with you, plain and simple Mari Jane,
Through thick and thin, she’ll get you higher.

» Posted By drodi On 12.05.2012 @ 5:20 am

object

I looked down at the object glistening with fresh blood in my hand.
I still don’t rightly know what it was, maybe a paperweight of some kind. All I know is one second he was raising his hand, prepared to strike, and then my love was on the ground. Still and dead, blood flowing from the wound on his temple.
He shouldn’t have hit me.

» Posted By drodi On 12.02.2012 @ 11:28 pm

doorknob

She turned the doorknob-
Slowly
Dreading what was on the other side of that door.

Like a fire trapped in the room behind,
She could feel the heat
and the pending burst.

It would happen,
and soon.

The end.

» Posted By drodi On 07.13.2012 @ 10:41 pm

soups

Soups are nice.

» Posted By drodi On 06.25.2012 @ 12:31 pm

minute

Only a minute left.
Anything can happen.
Jim Bowman felt the the seconds tick by, counted them as he tried to remember which wire to disconnect. 60 seconds had become 30 all too quickly.
It wasn’t meant to be this way. He just wanted to withdraw some cash, get some blow and have a good night.
But no, the fucking bank robbers had to ruin it, and the police just weren’t fast enough.
And neither was he.

» Posted By drodi On 06.22.2012 @ 7:11 pm

insect

Insect, that’s me. That’s all of us, crawling along, being disgusting and useless my roommate makes me feel this fact more thn anyone. Its a terrible feeling. Like shit, but crawling.

» Posted By drodi On 05.14.2012 @ 12:39 pm

separate

I always enjoyed being separate from everyone else. Being a loner. Nobody to annoy me, or to correct me on my mistakes, or to make me feel insecure.
But being separate from society is taking it’s toll, on the socially awkward teenager now adult.

» Posted By drodi On 05.01.2012 @ 6:36 pm

balloons

Don’t let the balloon hit the floor.
If you drop it, the world might explode
Or the lava fields will return,
Or maybe
Just maybe,
Big Foot will throw marshmallows at you.

» Posted By drodi On 04.27.2012 @ 12:39 pm

hood

He lifted his hood up over his face, they wouldn’t recognize him on this venture.
Crawling through the sewers was disgusting, but to get into the Louvre, it was worth it. And now the camera’s couldn’t spot his face.
The thief was having a blast, finally it would be his.

» Posted By drodi On 04.05.2012 @ 8:22 am

attendant

The plane shook violently.
The passenger next to me kept up a steady mantra of prayers. The flight attendants were trying to rally everyone together.
It’s okay, we’ll survive.

Maybe.

» Posted By drodi On 04.02.2012 @ 4:27 pm

rainy

A beautiful time, grey and bleak, but so happy. It feels like rain can wash away any sort of troubles.
Not to mention kissing in the rain.
Feels so nice, so innocent.
Until clothes start coming off.

» Posted By drodi On 03.31.2012 @ 8:02 am

splash

I felt the cool wetness wash over my face,
The salt lingering on my lips,

A good day in the sun,
the sandy beach, the green water

It was all not so long ago,
That we splashed so happily in the water.

» Posted By drodi On 03.29.2012 @ 8:41 pm

exquisite

Looking into her face I knew the meaning of beauty. Her eyes that shined like some sort of alien light coming from the stars. Her skin, so pure and exquisite.
Finally, I knew love.
Only to have it ripped from me, like an arrow through my heart.

» Posted By drodi On 03.25.2012 @ 8:48 am

residue

She wiped her fingers through the slick material, the asteroid leaving a sticky residue on her finger tips.
“I know what this is,” Agent Joanne Kismel stated concisely, her thoughts ringing true.
“The answer is elementary”

» Posted By drodi On 03.23.2012 @ 11:35 pm

trunk

It was hidden away now, where nobody could see it, in the trunk of my car.
Disposed neatly in seven different plastic bags. Double wrapped, no liquid or scent would escape, not for a few days at least.
A quick trip to the ocean is in order.

» Posted By drodi On 03.22.2012 @ 11:25 am

fixed

Can’t do any damage,
Not that you’d want to.

The chances are gone,
long flown past.

It’s probably best that way.

» Posted By drodi On 03.21.2012 @ 4:33 pm

pageant

A terrible thing that turns women into monsters. Sometimes men, sometimes children. Everyone is afflicted by this disease of unnatural beauty.
Burn them all.

» Posted By drodi On 03.19.2012 @ 3:44 pm

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