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plausible

Dracula causes–academically derived,
frantic keystroking, loss of time and delivery.
wet wood soaked green barnacle
perhaps slack in the kindling sack
will bestoy a chance to roll out

Stretch yo legs:)

» Posted By drewd On 01.26.2014 @ 1:11 am

silo

heightened cylindrical storage units
mass of feed and heat
chicken feet
cow lips
piggy back

» Posted By drewd On 08.16.2013 @ 8:50 pm

god

i don’t know anything. except
help there’s infinite mystery
surround confound overwhelm
and love us all
for we know nothing
about saving each other

» Posted By drewd On 07.01.2013 @ 11:38 pm

balloon

ego helium and puffed chests
believing everything
is coming our way
pop is the sound
we’d be wiser to embrace
deflation our humility
humble we respect
gifts of the present
resent no person
recognize not the swell
or lack thereof
each of us string along
tightly tethered on wrist

» Posted By drewd On 06.29.2013 @ 12:27 am

neon

soiled underpants (respect to my preacher)
nurture spirituality like well-fertilized gardens
growing vivid harvests. only where we’ll till
the earth under itself when the bounty’s been collected;
i’ll be praying
my neon blue tide
will remove the stain of a bug caught
when spreading peace and love
at sunday’s religious community event.

» Posted By drewd On 05.29.2013 @ 2:53 pm

casting

broken statues chipped and worn by the fables of harsh time
we mend wearily
effectively
patiently
seeking chisels and steady hammers
awaiting our sunlight to burst through
shine golden attention
her rays casting upon our marbled faces

» Posted By drewd On 05.21.2013 @ 8:01 pm

shows

lines on the face
tired engines and languid pop stars
America’s plain tired
where has the eye cream gotten to?

give us a bucket of cream ice and a television
and a spotty memory of yesterday
the day before
because a new show will give us everything
at least a reason not to go outside

for then all will know what it shows.

» Posted By drewd On 12.28.2012 @ 6:41 am

now

unbelievably slick solid
heavy and lightning quick
turn blink thoughts slip
missed another
but I’ll get another chance
when i decide to wake up

» Posted By drewd On 12.27.2012 @ 5:25 am

earring

hinting at something.
see shine dangling right from her earlobe,
pinned through thin skin:
i am devouring
sinful, desirous fantasy.

little does she know
of my scandalous private conspiracy:
to climb across this bed,
to nibble upon her naked nape,
to hang my tongue through
her silent attractive gem-laden piercing
connecting this fixation
to a heightened state of endorphin.

even less do i know of her dream
as i plot and write:
to climb my tower,
to find me hanging naked,
my line locked to her steel
fixing this nap she’s enjoying
to the reality of dreams within dreams.

» Posted By drewd On 04.16.2012 @ 9:28 pm

torch

by sitting we’ll cease to carry fire.
steps forward, courage has say and
sword display.
by touring we’ll stand up to the liars.

» Posted By drewd On 03.18.2012 @ 9:40 pm

collar

Protection. Crease the
Fashion. Release and
Innovate. Easel. Counting fractions.
View the knot in the split.
Sublimate with blackmail.
Diseases in modern society.
Business casual, business as usual.
Disregard the flatulence.

» Posted By drewd On 01.26.2012 @ 11:45 am

dozen

over dreams and sources of rainbows
oven heat the weather
mothers’ everthing’s don’t pretend
we transcend heaven
when the rubber hits the soil
when the soul hits the road
to reflection and my mirror is yours
you reach out to wipe away the cold condensation
where contemplation paralyzes fear
realize the games we’ve played have been swell

» Posted By drewd On 01.07.2012 @ 10:40 am

panorama

wide scope of sight enters through these lenses.
my senses are overloaded, though
only slowing breathing freed me enough
to see this universe’s size
is precisely measured
to fit in the palm
of my
heart

» Posted By drewd On 12.17.2011 @ 8:33 pm

sneaky

peek around a corner and see
there’s someone covering up what they don’t want us to perceive
but we know
the roots of these convoluted cover-ups
are always exposed for the investigative, the intuitive
and the introspective

» Posted By drewd On 12.08.2011 @ 12:19 pm

abstract

rapid react
rope wrapped
reel tactfully tighten towards tiptoe

push envelopes
slandered canvases
bomb systems
mister glistens

heathenish heroes
hiding heralded
heels faltering foes finished fancily

crush pens and dope
abandoned ransacks
tomb vapors
sisters listen

» Posted By drewd On 11.13.2011 @ 10:14 pm

icicle

frigid scenarios in a valley known as happy,
where one cold heart forcibly plummeted his
sub-zero dagger past the warm skin of tender youth.
sandusky’s black sun has set, allow a new dawn’s reprise!

» Posted By drewd On 11.12.2011 @ 6:47 pm

beginning

Where’d we start?

Past tensions busted apart.
Locks and strands twirled between fingers,
Braided taught. Convinced pupils trusted
Structures build themselves
Involuntarily welding together parts.
Either or, we know it’s heart.

Together we all start.

» Posted By drewd On 11.11.2011 @ 7:32 pm

prints

ink spills ideas, plans,
stories and fortifications.
building sentences’
directions, page turners’
wanderings and humor.
each slapped keystroke a story
and proof i’ve lived to tell.

» Posted By drewd On 11.09.2011 @ 7:22 pm

combination

a listener
a breather
click turn
unchain the heart
meet me

dials, winding personal permutations
unlocked emotions thought to have taken vacation
a odd sensation

take time
realign the fortress of these heartstrings

» Posted By drewd On 11.03.2011 @ 8:06 pm

artistry

lavender canvases dotted a tumultuous horizon while the boy dug rich, dark earth. lightning. cross-legged, nine billion onlookers gazed intently unintentionally. screaming deafened each and every soul present–not one heard the others’ turmoils. these cries died before they were shouted, bouncing off skull walls. paper corn stalks, stretching, reaching out to the cool air, spoke in muted chicks and shhhhhhhs and soothed. alone, one stratus cloud streaked a bright white sigh across glory. witnessing tightrope walkers’ balance, monks’ trances, crops’ maturing, money stacks’ blowing away in the wind and an antique cymbal-clapping monkey toy frowning, all felt satisfied and left the boy to dig.

» Posted By drewd On 10.26.2011 @ 6:58 pm

automatic

Nature’s accomplishments succeed!
I will be strong, sensible and stubborn but still bleed.
Wind will blow,
Heat will dry,
Cold will freeze me.
I alone choose thievery and steal my chances.

To slant with wind, burn as heat and frost like cold, these
Assets I must trust currently.
I alone, instinctively, will prevent altruism.

My own elementary deference reoccurs
Until I’ve dug like an automatic burrowing animal.
I bury myself.

» Posted By drewd On 10.24.2011 @ 6:39 pm

awakening

warm then cold
alarm bell rings
time sings well and
we get old

learn or ignore
hurt is inevitable
but love’s incredible and
we feel sore

or

grow

» Posted By drewd On 10.23.2011 @ 8:08 pm

warfare

sing to me a song
reach down deep in my heart
pull my emotions
a tune to make me cry
for i have no tears left to spare

please read to me a story
turn each page slowly
spin my feelings with a painful tale
one that outdoes all these others
for none have done so

more than i can stomach, these raw onions i’m fed
watching families worldwide bury their dead
and business booms, silver spoons for weapons producers

write me a oneword entry
one for the ages
seasoned with wit and sage
head’s been wrenched
for it’s drenched in my own vomit

need tears of joy
a change of pace
well faring people halting warfare

» Posted By drewd On 10.16.2011 @ 6:06 pm

advice

it means that someone help’s you.but it reminds me of adding.when I say add it always reminds me of advice.I love adding and I love when someone gives me “advice”!

» Posted By drewd On 10.15.2011 @ 12:14 pm

compassion

in understanding i can be understood.
in helping i can be helped.
in selflessness i can be myself
and
with soul fed,
giving blossoms.
passion for my fellows
outgrows the needs
this ego feeds my head.
hearts’ happy we cradle.
one.
another and another and another and another and another……………

» Posted By drewd On 10.14.2011 @ 10:37 am

distinguished

distinguished makes me think of drinking a glass of water.and I like saying it.

» Posted By drewd On 09.10.2011 @ 2:29 pm

hoity toity rare and treasured
served upon a silver platter
reaching and experienced by so few

gourmet bums
pretentious homeless
slack-jawed ambassadors

we’ll crash the doors
and extinguish
the fire of upper crustiness
calm
persistent

» Posted By drewd On 09.10.2011 @ 2:24 pm

clipped

from a page
occasional loss of balance
your voice as streaks
nightlight persists
fearful i will be
willing to acknowledge
steel blades shearing
dust cleared from the dry sink

» Posted By drewd On 09.09.2011 @ 11:38 pm

insect

threads of juice strewn
breads and coffee brews
ogle at centipedes
recalling mead drank from a spoon
the way it washed down our throats’
ever-parched nature.
carbohydrates and vasectomies
mouth swabs and amino acids
burn quick
crawl deft
seen left behind

» Posted By drewd On 09.07.2011 @ 8:04 am

ant

mother’s sister always doted
noted blisters in the sun:
black beauties who,
carving trails piling upon each other.
discovering their treats, feasts
leftover, crumbs aplenty,
spent these hours
inching
flinching rarely
barely noticing
we, humans, who gave so much for their taking.
funny, my aunt seemed to do the same.

» Posted By drewd On 09.05.2011 @ 7:15 pm

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