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Corners are places to hide. Corners turn things a different direction. Corners can create boundaries. Corners create shapes. Corners give structure…

» Posted By Dee On 11.27.2018 @ 4:28 pm



» Posted By Dee On 09.14.2018 @ 1:33 pm


Riches/Rich: not too may can get “riches.” Wars have been fought over riches and wealth.

» Posted By Dee On 06.12.2018 @ 1:54 pm


Often confused with ‘tyres’ by Americans, tires (v.) is the act of becoming tired, in the present tense. For example; the writer tires when she reads Americanisms.

» Posted By Dee On 03.28.2018 @ 3:43 pm


Lozenge. Is sixty seconds too long to write lozenge? It is, sadly. I thought my first word would be the perfect opportunity to be witty but cough is really not all that much to work with. *cough*

» Posted By Dee On 08.28.2017 @ 10:26 am


Leave work, employment. Finally time to retire. Also resign myself to imperfections, sins of past that haunt me – but repentance and forgiveness are possible. A future can be different and starts now. Getting older but not a bad thing.m

» Posted By Dee On 12.22.2016 @ 4:26 am


The swan should have been graceful. Elegant and graceful – isn’t that what swans are known for? Melinda edged closer to see what the problem was, and realised the once elegant beast was now dead. Murdered in fact.

» Posted By Dee On 07.21.2016 @ 12:47 am


Exact. What does it mean, exactly? Is there truly, really truly something so sure, so precise enough to actually be called exact?

» Posted By Dee On 01.03.2016 @ 4:02 pm


I was bound to great things. That’s what my parents told me. I was bound to be more than… But, when does that go to far? When do your bounds lead you to a place where the world is crushing you. Where you’re crushing yourself with all that could’ve been.

» Posted By DEE On 08.28.2015 @ 7:00 am


She was asking me for something. I knocked myself back to reality. “What?”

“The proof.”, she repeated.

“Oh,” I said, forcing my mind to say adrift, “Here you go.”

She grabbed the parcel from me with her right hand and opened it carefully with her left. She grinned sweetly, “I will. I will marry you.”

Though feeling drained, I smiled meekly. Finally! The only thing I ever wanted. My heart would have jumped with joy if it were still inside me.

» Posted By Dee On 07.29.2015 @ 8:48 am


Here she had in front of her the greatest piece of music ever composed. What a shame it was to know that she couldn’t play it. She was a failure.

» Posted By Dee On 06.23.2015 @ 7:27 am

All day he had attempted to stay composed, not reacting as he would like to the things he heard. But when the suspects kept trying to fool him, what could he do but get angry?

» Posted By Dee On 06.23.2015 @ 7:21 am


the catwalk , the catwalk baby, this is where we go along the catwalk. and in the ocean where cat’s don’t walk, the fishes swim all over the sand and bubbles and make one or two of the only things we can see from above. We are the only ones who can do anything from above. We are the ones. We are the ones. It is us.

» Posted By Dee On 01.23.2015 @ 1:02 am


no time for it.. yet we look for it and we heap it on others. What is a shame? What is a pity? Wasting ones potential? Is it a negative thing to have for oneself yet a positive thing to bestow on others? Is it a side manifestation of compassion?

» Posted By Dee On 10.09.2014 @ 11:12 pm


sometimes i wish my heart had a peephole. so i would know who’s outside before i let them in. so i would know that it’s not a robber. or my mother. or a solicitor. or a giant ant. or my seatmate in high school whose favorite book i lost. or a filmmaker whose works i have never seen. or a serial killer who will effortlessly rip my heart apart and have it for dinner. or an asshole.

» Posted By Dee On 05.20.2014 @ 9:13 am


A talon, my talons are sharp and beautiful they are one of the best talons out there but these talons of mine weren’t always so sharp I had to work to get them the way they are to make them as scary and fierce as they are now. My talons were dull to begin with, but they learned to grow as I learned to grow.

» Posted By Dee On 02.18.2014 @ 7:51 pm


running late
i brisked to nothing
not having to, but just caught
hurried down the slope
not after something
when you hit me
bull’s eye

» Posted By Dee On 01.04.2014 @ 10:26 am


He wasn’t. Not really. It wasn’t him who reached for her. It was me. I drove him to it. I know I did. I didn’t love him enough. And that’s what I’ll have to tell them all. If I do tell. But I won’t. I will end this. Tonight. It will end.

» Posted By Dee On 10.29.2013 @ 11:47 pm

ah to the unfaithful , what a web you weave, how to keep your story straight, how not to get caught.

Is it not better to be true and not to have to remember lies, then to spin a story that no one believes. Please think about it!

» Posted By dee On 10.29.2013 @ 5:52 pm


Play your love like piano keys. Classic, whole, resonating.

» Posted By Dee On 09.23.2013 @ 4:09 pm


i was on the other side, walking. to where, i do not know. not thinking or feeling anything, just walking, i reached the edge and i thought, this is it. do i do it? i stood there for a while, then i thought, nope. so i turned around and walked again aimlessly. until i reached the next pole.

» Posted By Dee On 07.28.2013 @ 10:14 am


A man walks down a alleyway in the dead of night. He has just finished the late shift at his dead-end job. Many sounds float through the night, but a sudden crash frightens the man. He picks up his pace to get away from the hidden cause. The sound only gets louder.

» Posted By Dee On 07.17.2013 @ 10:35 am


to escape from danger..fleeing the wrath of something terryfing and unpredictable..flood waters rising.panic..

» Posted By dee On 06.12.2013 @ 4:58 pm


There was no turning back. She signed it so she must go through with it. Something feels weird, her stomach was churning, the weather wasn’t right, the day was odd. There was something telling her she should hide.

» Posted By Dee On 05.19.2013 @ 9:47 am


the largest hole i’ve ever seen. Something i dont want to get stuck in or i’ll be digging for days in the rain all alone with a pool of water hanging around my feet as i struggle to dig myself out. step step by step dig by dig. a hugh hole waiting for me to free myself. i did…

» Posted By dee On 04.08.2013 @ 8:28 pm


The world became blurry, literally, as I walked away and tears fell from my eyes. Run, I thought. Run. Run, run, run, run, run. And as I ran hard and ran fast under the rain all I could think of was my smudged mascara.

» Posted By Dee On 04.02.2013 @ 11:22 am


I don’t know anything about nor do I give a shit about wheat. I’m just waiting for the timer to go out.

» Posted By Dee On 03.29.2013 @ 11:33 am


one morning my day was going fine and dandy, i didn’t feel like doing anything so I thought I’d just sleep the whole day, maybe? That’s what I did and I woke up feeling great, greeting everyone with a big smile on my face, i whistled happy songs, and strutted through the roads, I was going through it okay, I thought, I’m getting there, I thought, how life is so beautiful and merry! then boom, the calamity.

» Posted By Dee On 03.26.2013 @ 10:56 am


The bricks fell from the sky crushing everyone there ever was. The skies were furious with hatred for the human race boiling. They threw bricks. They threw bricks right at us, and laughed as we all suffered.

» Posted By Dee On 03.22.2013 @ 5:38 pm


if the truth would set me free and
that freedom would mean
to be always haunted by the details that was once mine and his,
then I’d rather surrender my wings
and lock myself in the cage
of pretends and romantic yearnings.

» Posted By Dee On 03.18.2013 @ 1:41 pm

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