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shaken

When I had seen my mom just lying there, I remember my unshakable bond with my mom. All my memories with my mom came flooding back, like the first time I tried to skateboard and fell. So my mom cared for me. And I think that’s just her job. Teddy thought.
( not true story, part of my short fiction)

» Posted By Dalton On 02.29.2016 @ 9:21 pm

charge

‘CHARGE’ he cried! and they did. and that Jimmy, is how they all died.

» Posted By Dalton On 03.14.2015 @ 4:47 pm

globe

i live on the globe and i have a globe at my house its blue, green, white, bumpy, smooth, smells like my great grandpas because we got it from him

» Posted By Dalton On 01.13.2015 @ 8:27 am

wilting

As fall approached the roses began to lose their luster. What was once standing tall and confident is now hunched and ghastly without the sun’s glow. Is this really a rose or the definition of seasonal depression?

» Posted By dalton On 08.31.2013 @ 9:56 pm

national

There isn’t a language that binds us here in the U.S. Only our fondness of a flag. We are a melting pot that’s boiling over. Across the states we hold very little in common except the country we call home.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.22.2013 @ 6:04 pm

worthwhile

Whether or not you believe the adventure is worthwhile at the time is irrelevant. Once you are done and look back at it with the clarity of hind sight, then you know.

» Posted By dalton On 08.07.2013 @ 9:16 pm

based

I based all of my thinking on one fact. That fact, little did I know wasn’t a fact at all. The school teachers and minds before me simply instilled this knowledge into me with the utmost surety. I only found in my 20s that this what they wanted me to think, not what was true. If i had known in the beginning that it was up to me to make it up, I would be well beyond a theory by now. I’m only beginning with this one inkling, letting it grow until it becomes a novel in my mind. The due date for this novela is coming up and I only wish I had understood the prompt years ago.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.06.2013 @ 12:52 pm

zone

What is a zone? It could be a simple boundary. It could be an area confining peoples. You could simply be speaking of buildings and code. YOU’RE zone is what you make it.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.15.2012 @ 6:51 pm

texts

the ancient texts of adonis tell us that to love one man is to kill him.
dwell on this when you alone in your bed and you dream of finding your missing half in another.
when you take another into yourself you both die. There is nothing greater than this death, it is the death of separateness.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.10.2012 @ 2:50 pm

nest

birds have nests, they use them to repopulate and as a place to live. Nests can be made of many objects. the majority of nests are made from sticks and twigs, while some contain things such as bottles, cans, or barbed wire. nesting is the act of reproducing in or near a designated nest area.

» Posted By Dalton On 06.10.2012 @ 2:16 am

advice

Advice is something we all give and recieve but not always follow. It’s not something to take lightly although you always do. Maybe that person is telling you something important and you’re not listening. We need to know what other people think in order to think outside our boxes. We need to

» Posted By Dalton On 10.16.2011 @ 3:22 am

thirst

I am thisrty. I am always thirsty. Thirst can bring many problems. Death, anger, irritation, irrationianlization. I’m out of thoughts. The thirst i feel for many things, For with it i have many dreams. I see the life of men long dead. I see the things hidden in their heads. behind the wall behind the veil, I hear the call i hear the bell. The thirst it becons it screams it calls, It wants you and i, it wants us all.

» Posted By Dalton On 04.10.2011 @ 5:27 pm

fallen

hearing you words fall out of your mouth and into my ears and into my hands never really understood what you were saying to me but i do now

» Posted By Dalton On 08.18.2010 @ 11:50 am

teacher

The greatest teacher I’ve ever had is named Mr. Rollin Dickinson. I met him in the first semester of my senior year at lakeridge high school. Friends of mine had already know him for a time and I was awkwardly placed in his class along with them.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.28.2009 @ 11:24 am

habitat

I grew up in such a lonely place.
It feels now as if it were a millennium ago, but I know the years passed by were few, and I’ll forever live with these scars.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.25.2009 @ 1:20 am

coal

When I get frusterated, I hit things in my anger. It’s as if a fire if lit in my eyes, and I eventually calm myself down, but that coal will always remain, until the next time I find anger in something else.

» Posted By Dalton On 08.14.2008 @ 11:08 am

frog

The frog flew from the sky in an uneven arc. It splashed into the water, creating a huge wave. The frog then glanced upward at the sky and noticed the hawk that had been chasing it was now circling in the sky. It was eagerly awaiting its prey to make one wrong move, but the frog had already escaped from its clutches. Suddenly, a giant trout emerged from the water’s depth.

» Posted By Dalton On 11.06.2009 @ 8:13 am

stripes

Stripes only show me my future as a prisoner.

» Posted By Dalton On 11.23.2009 @ 9:56 am

my striped heart will never be one colour, never have one lover to call my only. my pinpricked fingers and you mascara cloaked tears, never together, but now i’m one with my fears

» Posted By Dalton On 11.22.2009 @ 2:38 pm

handle

iv got on hand around your throat and the other hand on this knife take your life, words cant describe this feeling that urges the blade into you

» Posted By Dalton On 11.20.2009 @ 7:45 am

sometimes i think i have a handle on these feelings for you. but everylie ive fed you is true, and sometimes the only thing i want is you, baby i would do anything for you

» Posted By dalton On 11.20.2009 @ 7:43 am

eternal

my eternal love for you wont ever reach beyond the bounds of my fear of committing my self to you forever. love for you is the only thing comes close to my love for my self.

» Posted By Dalton On 11.18.2009 @ 3:09 pm

troops

These troops are marching in the battlefield on the frontlines of my heart because love is a battlefield pull the trigger we’ll start

» Posted By Dalton On 12.02.2009 @ 6:51 pm

roll

So i will roll the dice, gamble with my life, giving you a trigger and a blindfold for my eyes

» Posted By Dalton On 03.24.2010 @ 5:26 pm

microphone

sing loud blink 182 ava allman brothers band

» Posted By dalton On 10.27.2009 @ 1:06 pm

gem

Gems are shiny rocks and most of them are very expinsive gems are very pretty and some people collect them and sell them there are diamonds rubies sapphire etc. there is lots of

» Posted By dalton On 10.27.2009 @ 7:54 am

hook

With just one breath, im hooked, intoxicated by your presence, your smell, an illusion of love pulsing through my veins, i dont love you, i just kiss you, and soon i wont even do that.

» Posted By dalton On 02.21.2010 @ 12:49 pm

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