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“how dare you” he wept, turning from her and the previous retorts that still stained her beautiful face. His naked shoulder made a barrier now that muffled his words, ‘You bully’. She wept into the back of his head as they lay together in their mess and misery.

» Posted By bec On 12.29.2015 @ 5:17 pm


every girl thinks it’s what she is
I don’t really think so
that might be oppressed
I think equality will come when women stop downing on the entire male race
our time will come ladies
don’t you worry

» Posted By bec On 03.24.2014 @ 5:33 pm


Looking out over the rocky terrain below was a little more than slightly frightening. One wrong step, one slip of the fingers and there was no hope. The adrenaline was pumping. Heart pounding. The top was so close yet so far away.

» Posted By Bec On 03.11.2014 @ 10:05 pm


Just remember, having a different opinion isn’t okay! That is what the bible has taught us. Lucifer was rejected because he decided to think for himself. Says a lot about this modern, Christian society, doesn’t it? Even if you don’t want to see it. “If you disagree with me, you’re obviously wrong and evil.” Teaching us word by word that we can’t ever think outside this box of a prison forged with the finest steel and toughest concrete. Because that would be un-Christian, to actually get off your lazy arse and try using this great thing called your brain.

Obviously, it doesn’t describe all Christians, and most certainly not even most. But they do go along with it, and that’s just as bad.

» Posted By Bec On 01.16.2014 @ 12:36 pm


love is like a wistful light in a dark seemingly hopeless tunnel it hurts and affects. Its dagger kills the weak and destorys the strong hope

» Posted By bec On 07.08.2013 @ 4:26 am

wistful afternoon filled with such a tired gloom, wispers in the sun rise as the autumn comes to rise. I see a face in the sun and the dooms day is done and i thank all my stars for shinning brightly in the sky.

» Posted By bec On 07.08.2013 @ 4:05 am


Eternal, everlasting, forever, that’s what Sally thought she was getting when she said ” I do” to Paul. If only she’d known at that first hello she would end up sitting alone at the bar on Stanley Street just two years later.

» Posted By bec On 03.14.2013 @ 6:43 am


The suit, the tie, the briefcase. None of it was necessary any more. He stood there staring at the blank computer screen waiting…

» Posted By bec On 03.13.2013 @ 7:23 am


They thought I was out. They thought I couldn’t feel a thing. How terribly, terribly wrong they were. Just because my eyes did not see, because my mouth did not speak, because my body did not move, I felt it. Oh I felt everything.

» Posted By Bec On 12.24.2012 @ 7:39 pm

The doctors stared down at me. “Count to ten,” they said, with there eyes roaming over my face.

» Posted By Bec On 12.24.2012 @ 7:36 pm


my sister was born on the fourth of july, in 1993 I think but it might be 1992. it’s usually cold and rainy but I like that kind of weather so yeah it means I can wear jeans and beanies and cute jackets yay! um um um july makes me think of autumn leaves even though it’s not autumn and my boyfriend’s sister is born on the first I’m kinda scared of her loL!

» Posted By bec On 12.07.2012 @ 11:19 pm


everyone’s favorite conversation topic
or so i hear
it is always them
never us

» Posted By bec On 11.08.2012 @ 8:10 pm


Shutting your eyes and knowing they are still there

Giving in and letting someone else be in control

» Posted By Bec On 06.12.2012 @ 8:58 pm


Is it just noise or something more? Movement and change. Feelings all overlapping and pushing in and out. Is it always something so messy that you have to stop? It’s in your ears and up your nose all the way into your head.

» Posted By Bec On 06.10.2012 @ 5:22 pm


My soul was emptying the day I had to take my daughter to kindergarten. I’m excited for the changes to come, but hated the time apart this would bring. My days will be that much more empty without her beautiful giggle punctuating my every move.

» Posted By Bec On 06.05.2012 @ 9:36 am


It’s hard workk that you just don’t want to do. It’s the load on your back somthing you keep at the back of you mind.Somthing for somone else. Do you really get anything out of it. Why would you when you could be doing somthing you want. get it over and done with

» Posted By Bec On 05.31.2012 @ 5:17 pm


It was balancing, moving along in a haphazard way. Clinging to the bag as though it would save it, but no. The bottle was drifting further and further down stream.

» Posted By Bec On 03.27.2012 @ 10:20 am


She sat staring at the clock for the duration of the lesson. tick, tock, tick, tock, time moved slowly. The classroom was hot and stuffy, filled with teenagers who were unwilling to learn. Who could blame them, it was Friday afternoon,the heat in the afternoon sun was beckoning them.

» Posted By Bec On 03.15.2012 @ 2:47 am


The popping of the champagne cork signified the beginning of the feast. The tables were adorned with jewels o the sea. The room brimmed with laughter.

» Posted By Bec On 03.09.2012 @ 6:15 am


As the sun came up over the buildings, the remains of last were evident. Scattered on the street were feathers, abandoned and floating in the light breeze. Sequins that had fallen off dresses, lost forever. Glitter beginning to sparkle again.

» Posted By Bec On 02.12.2012 @ 8:05 am

The streets were narrow and difficult to navigate at the best of times, but tonight it was impossible. They were filled with the beating of drums, the smell of sweat and alcohol, girls were dancing in the middle of the road and grabbing any man that happened to walk past them. Feathers and sequins from their outfits littered the ground.

» Posted By Bec On 02.12.2012 @ 5:47 am


Standing alone a field. The pink, plastic pony was lost amongst the long grass. She stared out, tried to find her voice to call out to the little girl who had left her.

» Posted By Bec On 02.11.2012 @ 5:38 am


It’s a skill. That what I keep saying, you must start NOW!

So, what, I have heaps of time, the exams aren’t for another few months…..

Months- key word there- you don’t have time, you have to start now, let me look at your study timetable

What study timetable? Don’t have one….

Why do I bother?!

Because it’s your job to nag Miss……

» Posted By Bec On 11.23.2011 @ 6:43 am


They were all crowded in one small, pristine room. The curtains were open and the light from outside hit the tiles with clinical precision. The smell of disinfectant and fear clung to the air. It was the laughter that was absent, and grief that had taken hold. One by one, they said their goodbyes.

» Posted By Bec On 11.22.2011 @ 6:43 am


They were made to be broken, or so the old cliche goes, but Jeremy knew that once he walked through that door, life would never be the same again. It had taken him only a matter hours to realise that it was time, tonight he was going to break all the rules, every single one ending with the ultimate, taking a life.

» Posted By Bec On 11.21.2011 @ 8:09 am


They were shrouded in darkness, this black cloak was by no means comfortable. The boat rocked back and forth, mimicking their feelings of uncertainty. Would they be rescued, the question they needed an answer to but were too afraid to voice. They had only one flare left.

» Posted By Bec On 11.19.2011 @ 11:35 pm


She stood there, alone. Alone. Once again. Left behind. Why? She didn’t know, she never knew. All she did know was that it was becoming more frequent. The little girl had obviously found someone else to play with. The doll, stood, leaning against the door frame, staring out towards the girl. Alone.

» Posted By Bec On 11.16.2011 @ 9:16 am


It was unusual. Something that could be described as modern. She never quite understood the term, so she did what she always did and sat and started out the window as the lecturer droned on and on. The tree was framed in sunlight, the leaves giving off an unusual pattern on the ground…

» Posted By Bec On 11.14.2011 @ 6:31 am


The leaves, turning, twirling……spiralling downwards….
The end was near,
Red, Yellow, orange,

» Posted By Bec On 11.07.2011 @ 12:31 pm


It was torrential, once again she could not stop the tears from flowing. Down, down, down they trickled slowly making their way from her eyes to her lips.

» Posted By Bec On 11.05.2011 @ 8:10 am

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