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whom

I think that whom might be the most bizarre word. Why do we need whom? What is so wrong with “who” that we can’t just use it? The only reason we have whom as a word is because we said it had a different definition than who, which probably they are close enough that we can combine them

» Posted By Baylee On 04.23.2016 @ 9:33 pm

parachute

His parachute expanded open as he dropped, almost appearing like a cloud. And then he began to drop more slowly,

» Posted By Baylee On 10.13.2013 @ 6:09 pm

simple

Simpleton, you are no match for my mighty sword. Allow me to behead you, you won’t feel a thing, so don’t worry. Just lean back aaaaannnnd…

» Posted By Baylee On 12.05.2012 @ 6:35 pm

past

There’s something about the past that always comes back up in the future. It sometimes goes undetected for years until someone realized, like de ja vu , that they’ve felt that feeling or known that person. They’ve been there and done those things. It’s always there.

» Posted By Baylee On 11.28.2012 @ 5:49 pm

measured

I measured the hours and the minutes and they passed by in front of me. Nodding off, I couldn’t quite clearly see the clock that became blurrier and blurrier. It’s been too long. that’s all I know.

» Posted By Baylee On 11.14.2012 @ 9:40 pm

teeth

With my teeth I bit into the fleshy bits of rabbit that I clutched between my fingers. Starving, oh so starving. It tasted so good that I cried into its fur. I’m sorry, but it was all there was that could satisfy me. I know, I should be ashamed.

» Posted By Baylee On 10.21.2012 @ 12:51 pm

entrance

The entrance was at the end of the tunnel. Too far away and too dark to see, but I just felt that it was there, I just knew. And if I walked just a bit farther, I would make it out alive. But I had to ask myself: did I even want to stay alive?

» Posted By Baylee On 10.17.2012 @ 3:29 pm

bury

I’ll bury my heart with a spade in the dark. It’ll still beat, but underneath the dirt it may not be as loud. Hopefully it’ll be covered up completely and I’ll finally have peace of mind about its whereabouts.

» Posted By Baylee On 10.15.2012 @ 4:15 pm

wet

I felt a wet tongue stroke my palm. Suddenly terrified, I quickly leaned over from my bedside and turned on the lamp. Looking about my room, I saw no one.

» Posted By Baylee On 10.11.2012 @ 4:12 pm

happy

Happy campers sitting in their campsite. Roasting marshmallows and singing with delight. Oh how I wish to be there, but no, not tonight. FIN

» Posted By Baylee On 10.07.2012 @ 1:05 pm

possible

It’s possible that I still like you, and then again, it’s possible that I’m completely over you. I just don’t know. When I saw you in REI today, my mind kind of freaked out and I couldn’t differentiate between the two. Oh, and I’m sorry i didn’t walk and say hi, but it would’ve felt like walking over from the two years that we’ve seen each other and that feels like a lot to go through. So I didn’t.

» Posted By Baylee On 10.06.2012 @ 8:22 pm

fawn

I fawned at his beautiful features. The way his hair cascaded over his eyes…the way his lips moved apart and together as he formed my name. I was in a daze, but came back to my senses when he said “Baylee…I’m moving away from here. Tomorrow.” And then I

» Posted By Baylee On 09.30.2012 @ 9:33 am

trial

We followed the trail along the old brick buildings behind my house. You’d never been there so I took your hand in mine, even though it was cold and clammy, and tugged you along the worn path, your feet dragged along through the tangle of weeds…

» Posted By Baylee On 09.21.2012 @ 5:30 pm

railroad

Across the railroad tracks I saw a young woman kneeling down over a small teddy bear. She was shaking and tearing it apart, her ratty dress giving off the feel that she was slightly mad. I tentatively stepped over the tracks to see if she was alright, but as soon as I tou

» Posted By Baylee On 07.03.2012 @ 7:39 pm

residue

You heart left residue on me. I can feel it… I thought I’d always be able to hear you breathing when I fell asleep and woke back up, but I don’t hear you anymore. I miss you. I miss your heart. Your breath is no longer near.

» Posted By Baylee On 03.24.2012 @ 9:21 am

petition

you have to sign a petition if you want to get what you want and get a bunch of other people to get it signed too because if youre the only one who signs a petition it doesnt really mean shit because the whole point is it shows how many people agree with you on a certain cause or topic you want to get done and that it is worth the change for the topic and to get what would benifit a large majority of the people

» Posted By baylee On 03.13.2012 @ 2:25 pm

flirt

I’d flirt with you helplessly, if I had courage. I’d look into your eyes and smile. I’d give you a playful slap on the arm. If I had any idea how to get there. At this moment, that seems like miles away. I can’t even talk to you let alone flirt. And when I flirt, I make it worth it. There’s not worth in flirting when it won’t get me anywhere.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.15.2012 @ 6:35 pm

clue

Give me a clue, a sign, some little hint. I am so completely hopeless; it’s pathetic. Help me figure something out. I don’t know who I am, I don’t know who you are, I don’t know what to do. Give me a clue, to help me realize what I’m doing. Give me a clue on how to get you.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.14.2012 @ 4:05 pm

carnival

The carnival. The haunting houses, the careless carousels, the laughing lunatics. Let’s go to the carnival and get caught up in their bags of tricks. Something to believe in, or simply pass the time. Let’s go to the carnival and slowly lose our minds.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.13.2012 @ 6:05 pm

pony

Buy me a pony. Then I know you truely care. By me a pony so I’ll never forget to remember you’re there. Something to support me and show me each day. Buy me a pony. There’s no other way.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.10.2012 @ 8:42 pm

adopt

Adopt on the new ways and habits that we want. It sounds so easy, yet I know it’s hard to attain. Take on everything you want, everything you need, to save yourself, this country, this planet. Save everything. Adopt what you need to save, to save yourself.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.09.2012 @ 5:55 pm

butterfly

If I could spread my wings and fly, I’d be gone. Like the magic of a butterfly, daintily touching everything it flies by. If I could float along, across the magic of the world. If I was as delicate. I’d be gone with a simple blow of the wind.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.08.2012 @ 2:51 pm

walls

Walls, surrounding me. LET ME OUT. everywhere I turn, walls are holding me in. Captured. How do I get out, when it’s clear I’m meant to be held in. A captive in these walls, forced to remain, forever.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.07.2012 @ 6:12 pm

orbit

We all orbit around the sun. We’re helpless to it, there’s nothing we can do to change it. We are at the absolute mercy of the sun. Forever. Trapped by the sun. Always.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.06.2012 @ 3:48 pm

wagon

Jump on the wagon. Come on take a ride. Let’s all have fun and take the wagon to the other side. And if we crash then who knows. The wagon doesn’t know where to go.

» Posted By Baylee On 02.01.2012 @ 12:49 pm

festival

Let’s celebrate something. Anything, we need a reason to smile, to have hope in something. A festival of sorts, a celebration simply to celebrate. We have no reason for it. Do we need one? Our spirits are low, and a festival may be just the thing to change that.

» Posted By Baylee On 01.31.2012 @ 1:36 pm

function

Function. How do you expect me to do such a thing in this society. You want me to work, to succeed, to show initiative, yet you won’t let me in. You won’t let me in. I’m not good enough, too young for your taste. You don’t know me, you can’t generalize about me because of something so insignificant as age.

» Posted By Baylee On 01.30.2012 @ 4:46 pm

bland

water is bland tasting. things that are bland are boring.

» Posted By baylee On 01.11.2012 @ 10:34 am

salt

salt licks, salt sticks salty toungue wet kisses france bodies touching naked salty sweat rubbing all along them.

» Posted By baylee On 09.02.2011 @ 2:13 pm

thirst

I thirst for what once was my life. I still wonder if those days will come again…. if not, let me thirst for more. Perhaps if I try harder…they will come my way.

» Posted By Baylee On 04.10.2011 @ 3:36 pm

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