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He looked at me with terrible, gleaming eyes, the kind you would see from some psycho in a horror film. My eyes wide with terror, his wide with madness.

» Posted By Alana On 01.20.2017 @ 11:20 pm


I sit at my vanity mirror and look at the small trinket in my palm: a key ring with a single, silver key. It shines dully in the fluorescent lights of my room, an item that would be seen as unimportant to anyone else, but it is my treasure.

» Posted By Alana On 09.07.2016 @ 11:20 pm


I collapsed onto my bed at the end of the day and lay there, motionless. I could feel each muscle in my body throbbing in pain. It had been a tough day, but I felt good about all I had accomplished.

» Posted By Alana On 08.26.2016 @ 8:43 pm


I am delighted to meet you. I might say this in truth or just to be nice. I am also delighted to eat a piece of chocolate cake. Or maybe I’m something de-lighted which means having no light. I’m not sure.

» Posted By Alana On 08.26.2016 @ 12:30 pm


I stand as tears fall down my cheeks, holding the rose in my hand I hold it close to my heart, his words run through my mind, I feel loved, I feel graceful.

» Posted By Alana On 07.20.2016 @ 5:36 pm


Skater. That’s what they called him. He always seemed so nice, kinda spaced out sure but….sweet. They say, “the good die young”, but did it have to be him? I was barely starting to know him. I wish it wasn’t this hard.

» Posted By Alana On 05.07.2015 @ 9:59 pm


Imprecise. That’s what I remembered; the imprecision of the sandpaper I frantically rubbed on the wood, trying hopelessly to smooth over the edges of the gift. I painted forlornly, watching the yellow smear over chips of wood peeking through.

» Posted By Alana On 07.29.2014 @ 4:33 pm


Frazzled. I was frazzled. Dazzled. And dazzled, I was dazzled. But most of all, i was just, in simple terms, surprised. I was surprised that it even happened at all.

» Posted By alana On 07.15.2014 @ 1:34 pm


He took her hand, lips curved in a smile. “Thank you.” He whispered, voice barely audible.

She looked at him, brows knitting together in disbelief. “All I did was say yes.” She replied, self-doubt taking hold of her once more.

He laughed. “You gave me forever.”

» Posted By Alana On 03.18.2014 @ 9:12 pm


Some days lately I feel unkempt. I want to be glamorous like Lana Del Rey and look stunning all the time. Instead I end up going to work with my hair unbrushed, wearing ugg boots. No makeup.

» Posted By Alana On 02.04.2014 @ 5:41 am


captivate reminds me of lovers, and it seems violent. i don’t want to be captivated. I’d rather have control. Captivation feels good though, like when you are captivated by art or music. It’s rare for it to occur. Most often happens whilst high on weed or something.

» Posted By alana On 07.31.2013 @ 2:36 pm


I derive happiness from other people. At least that is what I am trying to do. Actually no, I am trying to make other people derive happiness from me. I want to be happy and carefree and let my actions and happiness rub off on others. That will make the world a better place when people can learn to share their happiness and love for everything and with everyone.

» Posted By Alana On 07.10.2013 @ 5:49 pm


How do symptoms manifest? They show up. Uninvited. It sounds so wrong. They just show up, all unannounced and then start to reek havoc. It just isn’t fair. Why can’t they at least send an invitation? Or announce when they might show up? Like, hey, we’ll be there soon. Can’t wait to see you.

» Posted By Alana On 07.05.2013 @ 8:20 am


She comes to me in the wake of my dreams adorned with flowers and laced with the sweetest scent. She is happy; she is bliss. Beautiful in all her glory.

» Posted By Alana On 06.20.2013 @ 8:45 pm


I feel shattered right now. Alone and frustrated with everything going on around me. I’d like for this feeling to just disappear, however, it doesn’t seem to be going away anytime soon. I’d be lying if I said that I wasn’t sad right now, or unsure, because the truth is, I am.

» Posted By Alana On 05.26.2013 @ 3:20 pm


People around the world need help. Welfare comes to the rescue. The problem is “excessive welfare”. The one where you are not helping people, but helping them become slugs and

» Posted By Alana On 04.10.2013 @ 10:37 pm


When the murderer was arrested and sentenced to prison for life, his friends, family, enemies , and friends and family to the victims were there. He never expected to actually be caught and be arrested. He always wanted to be free!

» Posted By Alana On 02.28.2013 @ 1:28 pm

why would you sentence someone to death! you like to write sentences and it’s really fun and I love to type in sentences and sentenced is not always really fun but I really really love to type. Now you’ve been SENTENCED!!! LOL I’m so funny

» Posted By Alana On 02.28.2013 @ 1:26 pm


i have had five pets in my life, the ferst
i love that number!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

» Posted By alana On 12.18.2012 @ 10:26 am


On the roof
In the tub
On my bed
But you are not here
My eyes are dry
My hands are hot
Why should I move?
When you are not here

» Posted By Alana On 12.07.2012 @ 7:53 am


I sat in the assembly hall, trying to hold the tears back. As they rejected me and laughed. I was not expecting this. In fact, I absolutely believed that the exact opposite was going to happen. I don’t know why it mattered to me so much, a stupid badge, but it did. Maybe that’s what bothered me. That it didn’t matter.

» Posted By Alana On 11.22.2012 @ 2:30 am


this is how i learn. apparently. my teachers try everyday, well most of them , but they just don’t seem to be able to get the knack of not being patronizing.. oh well, at least they finished school i gues! teach me how to do something, i’ll remember you. it’s not easy to be a good teacher.

» Posted By alana On 11.06.2012 @ 1:01 pm


When you combine something it means that something is coming together, making something new. If you look at it like that I want us to combine. Too bad that will probably never happen to someone as awkward as me.

» Posted By Alana On 10.02.2012 @ 11:24 am


its a big number, a hundred years makes a century, id live to live to be 100, it has one 1 and two 0’s, in spanish its cien, its 3 digits

» Posted By alana On 09.28.2012 @ 3:45 pm


help we cry for it, we search for it when we recieve it we are relieved with a sense of fullness and we feel like we are not alone. Help is it only of another or can we too just help ourselves. There is much to be thought about, when do we need help, and when do we just cry for it.

» Posted By alana On 09.27.2012 @ 6:47 am

I can’t stand seeing her like this. So emotionally disabled, so crazy, so illogical. Her words are a jumbled mess of curses and jibberish. I want to help her but I don’t know how. What can one person do?

» Posted By Alana On 09.27.2012 @ 3:14 am


I’m not claiming anything. I have knowledge and I have 17 hours of college classes that will probably get me no where. I have a 4.0 and I have more acquaintances than I can count. I have a job where I work $14.00 an hour and I deal with people who are in circumstances far worse than my own. I have an endless influx of knowledge, but I’ve never claimed to know anything.

» Posted By Alana On 09.19.2012 @ 6:57 pm


Fried is how i felt when i was sunburned. Fried can be anywhere from being burnt to being tired to food. Potatos can be fried to make delicious burger sides.

» Posted By Alana On 09.14.2012 @ 5:33 pm

The pure thought and essence of him made me frazzled. It was like everything that I could possibly think of flooded into my mind whenever he was around. It was like my entire brain was fried – all because of him.

» Posted By Alana On 09.14.2012 @ 4:23 pm



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