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pepper

The taste invades her tongue as quickly as it is shoved into her mouth. The bite of the pepper was overbearing–moreso than she had previously believed. But she wasn’t one to give up as easily, though.

» Posted By Val On 12.20.2018 @ 7:01 pm

editor

she stared at the words on her screen with a disgusted look on her face. what the heck was this garbage. it was as if someone looked at the alphabet and just scrabbled the letters in random orders and put them together. writing wasn’t supposed to be like that. well, that’s what i’m here for she thought. I edit. But she always thought of editor as edit and or. she could either edit or just throw your trash writing away. and this one was definitely out

» Posted By val On 10.10.2017 @ 8:34 am

madman

isnt there a song called madman? or no wait nvm it was mad world lol

cause the first thing i had was”all around me are fmailiar faces” song which is not the correct song either LOLOOL

» Posted By val On 01.21.2017 @ 7:23 pm

ramp

my life is a like a ramp so far. Downhill. But then, you can get back up, but of course going up can slow you down sometimes. I don’t know. I feel like running down the ramp and roll, and probably feel the pain as I roll down. Help me.

» Posted By val On 01.18.2017 @ 9:02 pm

captive

lean your head against the cold, rusted bars. clutch the knife a little tighter. breathe. wait.
they will come to get you. they will get what’s coming to them.
it won’t be long now.

» Posted By val On 10.19.2015 @ 11:42 am

tracks

obscured after the storm
never to be recovered

» Posted By Val On 06.07.2015 @ 5:48 pm

apprehend

I will find the secret blossom twig type thing and with it I shall apprehend you. You will like it Ia m sure – it will tickle more than your fancy pants.

» Posted By val On 01.26.2014 @ 10:53 pm

delve

I have no idea what delve is. I’m actually pretty sure I’ve never delved in anyting before, but it sounds a bit to me like experiencing. Like, I’ve delved in writing and singing a little. Like something you’ve done. However that’s just me. I really have no idea what it is. And if by any chance I got it right, then… cool. :D

» Posted By Val On 05.27.2013 @ 8:36 pm

end

it hurts but it just happens… just let him go everyone says, but i just cant. I just dont like to say goodbye.

» Posted By Val On 01.13.2013 @ 5:09 pm

available

life is available to us all living. go out and live your life. live it while your living. its available.

» Posted By val On 12.11.2012 @ 3:14 pm

himself

he sat by himself at the cafe, sipping a latte and wondering why in hell he was waiting for her. He knew she wouldnt show up and yet he still sat, hat on his lap. waiting and feeling like an idiot. who does this? who waits on a woman who will only hate him anyways?

» Posted By val On 12.01.2012 @ 11:05 am

thought

thoughts are why I keep a diary. There are so many words that keep my mind traveling a million miles an hour and the only way to organize and make any sense of them i to write them down. Sometimes I write such scandalous thoughts down.. or

» Posted By val On 11.17.2012 @ 9:17 pm

learn

I feel like I could learn a lesson or two about sailing. It involves waves, salt, air, wind, boats…..whales… what am I talking about? I just want to go fishing.

» Posted By Val On 02.11.2013 @ 5:40 pm

raised

i have been raised as a girl who is passionate, creative, independent. kids have to be raised well. it all depends on the parents and the family.

» Posted By val On 10.18.2012 @ 3:42 pm

scene

at place you are at
how is it
where is it
waht is it
time and place where an event happends
how long it takes
???
dog
discribe

» Posted By val On 10.05.2012 @ 1:50 pm

play action drama acting playing friendly sad happy blood crying emotialonal

» Posted By val On 10.05.2012 @ 11:56 am

walls

White solid things in the shape of blocks. We dont think about it much, but these walls keep us warm in the winter and cold in the summer.

» Posted By val On 10.05.2012 @ 8:52 am

anger with someone
punching
protection
creativity
jumping
big wall of china
firewall

» Posted By val On 10.05.2012 @ 7:44 am

Walls hold in water so that many may have water, Walls hold in the heat so that we may be warm. Walls, however can hold in things we really don’t want to hold on to. Like hate and anger

» Posted By val On 10.04.2012 @ 9:44 pm

help

Mom called, asking for my help with dad. His health has taken a turn for the worst and I have to return home, to help her look after him. She didn’t want to go into detail.

» Posted By Val On 09.26.2012 @ 11:33 am

doorknob

There are no doorknobs on the inside of my restroom doors. It’s so irritating because when I shower I have to close the door to my room instead of the restroom. Not that I’m complaining, it’s quite a nice restroom. Best I’ve ever had.

» Posted By Val On 07.13.2012 @ 9:25 pm

overalls

finalidad totalidad lo que termina, lo que nunca sabes cómo va a terminar. cuando las cosas acaban y al final no sabes qué decir y todo lo que te quedas por dentro. overalls terminan siendo todas las historias que tienen finales dramáticos, donde sí hubo endins

» Posted By val On 07.08.2012 @ 12:33 am

convict

convict. laws. breaking them. punishment. injustice. policemen. wanted. jails. unfair.

» Posted By val On 06.02.2012 @ 10:00 am

splash

The water was cold when we jumped into the pool. I could smell the chlorine and feel the warm sun on my shoulders. I heard a loud SPLASH from behind me and immediately felt the cold drops of water on my head and neck.

» Posted By Val On 03.29.2012 @ 3:41 pm

trunk

A trunk has wonder, and beauty. An unopened trunk brings curiosity to the eye and mind. But the strength to stay away is truly what counts, for the thrill of an unopened trunk is the best of all. ~Pandoras box.

» Posted By Val On 03.22.2012 @ 5:55 pm

a trunk hold secrets, they hold love, they hold pain, and they hold memories. We just have to find the one who has the strength to pull it open. (Pandoras Box).

» Posted By Val On 03.22.2012 @ 5:54 pm

lantern

Light. Hope. A motivation to persue my curiosity. I was alone in the dark, and a latern flicked on. Right when i thought all was it an end, the latern flicked on. So I thought to myself, hmm.. am I not alone? When the mere silence of the night seemed to be all i had left the latern flicked on. My pupils widened in its illumination. I couldnt take my eyes off it. The darkness overwhelmed me but the laterns light embraced me – and again I found a reason to open my eyes and see for myself that a whole life was ahead of me…atleast the latern illuminated the path. All that was left was to get up an follow it…hope and curiosity was my motivation. I trusted my gut and with the all that I had left of me I got up and walked into the light.

» Posted By Val On 03.01.2012 @ 7:25 pm

tires

The car swerved out of control as the tires blew. That was the thought running through my head. Blurred lights. And the BAM! of the tires popping was all I could think of the next day when the mechanic asked what tires I wanted. I didn’t know. I had never bought tires before. My tires had never exploded like that before. I had never been put in that situation. Until now that is.

» Posted By Val On 11.05.2011 @ 3:58 pm

radical

It shocks. The mothers and the grandmothers, the fathers wearing sports jackets and ties, cover their faces or cough with embarrassment.

» Posted By Val On 10.22.2011 @ 6:33 am

advice

Our friendship changed the year I started attending private school. I didn’t see her for months, and then when we met again we sat together for awhile, waiting for the old games to occur to us. The ones where we were princesses lost in the woods, or orphans abandoned at birth. But the stories didn’t come, and instead we talked about our lives which had changed in the past year. She asked me for advice.

» Posted By Val On 10.15.2011 @ 11:25 am

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