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branches

The trees extended their branches
floral and green
I let them embrace me
In the tightest of hugs, they felt my salty tears
I am disgusted with my species
I can’t look at my own reflection
they listened to the troubles
streaming down my fleshy cheeks
The trees extended their branches

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 04.07.2012 @ 9:26 pm

rainy

Bong rips on a rainy night
Music fills our souls and milky smoke fills the air
I’m stuck in a cloud’s embrace
But I’ll never come down
I don’t know if I’m in love
or if this euphoria is all a gentle dream

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 03.31.2012 @ 10:00 am

fences

The birds sat still on silent fences
They colored the world with their loud feathers
And painted the air with their sweet songs
The world turned round and round
To the music of the birds
In tune with the metronome morning sun

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 01.22.2012 @ 9:32 pm

accordion

My mind collapsed like an accordion
Foggy memories pulverized into dust
Sparkles and glitters filled the air
And they were gone just as fast as they came
A soft color drew the Silence
A Silence unlike any other
For it was too precious, too sweet in it’s delectable detail
And it all came back to me in an instant
Inflating with airy elation
The music returned to my silenced mind

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 01.15.2012 @ 8:37 pm

sparkling

When you’re this young, yet this old
You’re not quite sure if this year will be another at the messy kids’ table
Or at the uninteresting lull of the adults’ table
As I’m handed a glass of sparkling cider
I guess I’ll also take one more year
Of being called naive

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 01.11.2012 @ 9:05 pm

bland

There’s something about the plainer ones
Something about their introverted character
It makes me crave their lifeless existence
And form it into mine
It’s just the roar of the colorful ocean
Meeting the soft, quiet sand
As if it were the first time, every time.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 01.10.2012 @ 6:04 pm

savage

Don’t brush your hair.
I like things a little messy.
People will judge us.
They think we’re naive.
But it’s what we find in our adventures
that make or break the deal

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 01.09.2012 @ 7:24 pm

thorns

The little ant smells the fragrance from afar
It’s a floral smell, light and sweet
This fragrance is emitted from a garden of roses
Their magnetizing aura bring the ant closer
But danger lurks ahead
What he doesn’t know
Is that the thorns are there
To keep the weak ones away
The ones who are worth it
Will climb to the top
And enjoy the roses forever

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 01.05.2012 @ 6:53 am

hurry

I’ve never loved you.
I only loved the lustful glances at me
Why am I in a hurry to make you love me?
Why do I cry now that you don’t?
The mirror lies to our faces
Makes us hate our own flesh
I turn to you because you loved
The very bones that lay in my bed
Alone each night
Crying for attention

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 12.22.2011 @ 9:51 pm

flood

You love someone
This person isn’t me
You’ve thrown me away like an old sock
And suddenly it all makes sense
It all comes rushing to my face
Flooding my eyes with tears of betrayal
You love someone
This person isn’t me

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 12.21.2011 @ 10:24 pm

blemish

Cheekbones dusted with perfection
Youthful hands reach across the piano
Each note a mystery
A sound sits still in the air
Amidst the crowd
Of blemished souls

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 12.16.2011 @ 2:14 pm

sleeve

My heart used to rest comfortably on my sleeve
Then something taught me to fear the world
Fear the ones you love
Pain is their weapon
Heartbreak is their song
My bleeding broken friend now lies
Beneath my shoe
Never seeing the light of day

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 12.15.2011 @ 7:15 pm

temple

We worshipped the sun
And rejoiced to the moon
Our tears were wiped from our faces
As we walked along
Together in June

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 12.14.2011 @ 8:07 pm

palette

He colors my palette
With his soft, green eyes
It fills with wonders of joy
Colored with the yellows of warmth
emitted from his gaze
The minute he looks away
My palette turns grey
Dullness returns to my canvas
Back to how it used to be

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 12.13.2011 @ 5:11 pm

anywhere

I threw myself onto the warmth
My muscles relaxed and became liquid
They run through my fingers like glowing sand
And the sun never rests
It constantly shines and smiles
Anywhere is comfort
Anywhere is here

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 11.30.2011 @ 8:21 pm

laughter

I’m addicted.
The booming high
lets me see the stars.
The best I’ve ever felt
in only a few short seconds.
I feel loved.
Truly loved.
Tears stream down my face
now all that’s there
is laughters after-taste.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 11.21.2011 @ 8:19 pm

autumn

The smell of the air is crisp
Layers start to come on
Like the reverse peeling of an onion
It’s time to start packing our souls
And hide everything away
For the long cold to come
And put us to sleep

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 11.07.2011 @ 6:09 pm

tires

I can see through the wisdom of your old eyes
That I cannot change these tires
It’s time to take the rusty thing
For one last joy ride
And rest forever
In an eternal peace

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 11.05.2011 @ 10:40 pm

profound

Deeper than the core
of the apple that eats itself
A venomous bite
from the mouth a hallucination
Like inexistent whispers
From the future of your kind

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 11.02.2011 @ 6:46 pm

epiphany

I was blinded with a red scarf
One of greed and fear
It dissolved into dust
And my eyes burned in the light
And suddenly I saw
The obvious secret
Of millions of years
And thousands of joyous tears

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 11.01.2011 @ 10:03 pm

still

Notice how the ones that move the least
are the ones that move the most
A finger rested is the one that makes a difference
like a voice unheard in a crowd of angry mouths
A whisper makes people listen
The unexpected intrigues
The still moves

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 10.27.2011 @ 8:23 pm

awakening

It arose from the base of the spine
Subtle yet powerful
A blue haze was not mistaken
over the fields of grey morning dew
The warmth of the orb grew larger
and silently glided up the spine
awakening everything with it’s touch
turning everything to gold

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 10.23.2011 @ 8:10 pm

comfort

Close your eyes and trust
that you will fall back onto comfort
and the fears of the day will be thrown away
to sink to the bottom of your soul
Along with the pool of tears
you once thought would drown you

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 10.22.2011 @ 8:40 pm

mutual

What we share between us. What we have in common. It’s more than you’d think. More than you’ve been told. We’re the same, you and I. Your broken soul is a reflection of mine.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 10.18.2011 @ 4:01 pm

dull

The dullness of her pasty features were just as attractive as her bright red lipstick and seafoam eyes. Her ghostly complexion was angelic in it’s own way.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 10.17.2011 @ 8:46 pm

warfare

I live a silent war within myself.
Multiple sides against eachother, against themselves. Fighting for the inexistent truth. Fighting for the sake of fighting.
The Universe is within me. The whole world is at it’s demise.
The truth will some day rear it’s face. And the war will end and quickly as it started.
All will be at peace.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 10.16.2011 @ 5:33 pm

playground

Life is a playground. It’s purpose is to have fun, fall down and get back up. And one day you grow to old for it and move on. You live, you die. Stop taking things so seriously.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 09.27.2011 @ 7:42 pm

convinced

Convinced what you see is real. Take a closer look and make up your mind. The world is just a figment of your imagination.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 09.23.2011 @ 9:22 pm

port

The humid air smelled of salt water and fish. The sun kissed each and every boat in the large, crowded port and reflected itself on their shiny exteriors. Each boat had a story, each boat traveled to different parts of the ocean. But just as mysterious as she, the stories were kept a silent secret.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 09.22.2011 @ 8:12 pm

pepper

Her jelly-bean eyes, her pepper mouth, her icy white teeth peel the pepper in two, exposing themselves for the whole world to see. Her features entice the world around her making her vulnerable to the pain inside her.

» Posted By SubtleWhispers On 09.04.2011 @ 9:31 am

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