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Cement on the fine, light feathers
over to the fireflies, dead
in stone
and once the kingdom of sparrows
is overthrown
away with your last history
goes the sparrow

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.02.2017 @ 9:30 pm


The old mans face was weathered from a hard life at sea. He had been fishing since he was a boy of 12 and had risen every morning at 5.30 to greet the sun.

» Posted By Siobhan On 05.14.2014 @ 3:09 am


Faces, colour. words. I sound my barbaric YAWP over the rooftops of the world, Walt Whitman. Tigers, pink lipstick, paper and glue. flowers, music. but not sounds. Only visuals.

» Posted By Siobhan On 06.05.2013 @ 7:35 pm


It was wet. The leaves crunched under my feet. The big brown eyes looked back at me, unblinkingly curious. I took a deep breath. What was this creature?

» Posted By Siobhan On 04.17.2013 @ 5:45 pm


i thought about everything, every single thing imaginable but it never worked all my thoughts were useless and i just couldn’t do it any more i couldn’t stand here and think about you again.

» Posted By siobhan On 02.05.2013 @ 3:52 pm


i try not to be afraid but then trying not to be afraid can amke it even worse.i’m sure everyone is afraid of something in life, no need to be afraid of admitting you’re afraid. but in the end there’s nothing to worry about. we’re all going e same way.

» Posted By siobhan On 09.24.2012 @ 10:50 am


homeless man with a walking stick.
shoes worn
cold weather

» Posted By Siobhan On 09.16.2012 @ 5:18 am


Needing water or I’m gonna die, emotionally starved, wish I could get some. Starting to hallucinate and see my own brain. Why won’t anyone give me some water. Useless. All those taxes, and what do I get? Nothin’. I’m grumpy. ‘Cos I can’ts gets me some waters. Boooooooooooh :( :( :(

» Posted By Siobhan On 09.01.2012 @ 9:18 am


I took off my cap and just looked at her. Both of us were smiling away and I knew that I would love her for as long as she let me, and further. She hated this damn hat and I knew it, I just liked to tease her about it. It would always get in the way of our kisses, that damn cap. Sometimes she would hide it from me.. but I would always find it, just like her smiles..

» Posted By Siobhan On 06.03.2012 @ 11:46 pm


Icy wind pressing against my face
That kind when it’s so cold it makes your head hurt.
You lick your lips in the cold because they feel dry it’s like you’ve got no other choice!
Vaseline, the red one.

» Posted By Siobhán On 04.24.2012 @ 2:29 pm


food lover, connoisseur, cooking fine food and doing it well, a snob of sorts but the good kind!! expensive taste and educated in all things culinary!! a welt of experience of the scenes and great taste!

» Posted By Siobhan On 03.11.2012 @ 10:49 am



» Posted By Siobhan On 02.28.2012 @ 2:56 pm


» Posted By Siobhán On 02.28.2012 @ 2:53 pm


the elephant trunk the trunk of the car the trunk you store your clothes in. I cant think of many other uses of the word.
I now have 60 more seconds to write even more!
they havent really thought this through, all I did was miss a required field. i’m so sorry for wasting your time reading this, it was a pointless entry.

» Posted By Siobhán On 01.04.2012 @ 7:45 am


i cant think today.
stacks of thoughts.

» Posted By Siobhán On 10.10.2011 @ 4:20 pm


It’s very easy for some people to convince others. I myself am not easily convinced. But I’ll stop arguing just for the sake of ending the argument. But it takes a lot of work to convince me of something.

» Posted By Siobhan On 09.23.2011 @ 2:42 pm


there was a chance she would find trouble at the house but she made her way there knowing that her family needed her. she thought about the nights he came home drunk and wreaked havok and hoped things wouldn’t be that bad this time. her mother had called earlier and asked her to come home.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.28.2011 @ 4:44 pm


i was sinking into a deep sleep until the stupid phone rang and woke me up. after that i was awake all night thinking.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.23.2011 @ 4:19 am


ah to be transported off the earth and away to an ethereal place – serene and calm no anxiety where love prefers and all defer to it’s mastery – swirling and sailing in the breeze and softly gently landing on the surface of the gentle cottony surface fo the planet away from earth

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.20.2011 @ 11:59 am


i saw a deer running through the field he crossed the street in front of me and into another field something must have really scared him he was running so fast

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.18.2011 @ 2:41 pm


succeed is or success is relative you can succeed at failing in fact i don’t really like the word that much

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.17.2011 @ 6:55 pm


repeat offender. aren’t we all. destined to repeat the past i have seen it repeatedly in my life. it is a learning process to begin to do things differently. even writing i need to do that differently too.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.16.2011 @ 2:21 pm


a thread of email conversations – a thread that runs through my life – fabric sewn with a thread – thread that holds my life together which is worn and frayed in some areas i will need some more thread to reinforce the links that are weak

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.15.2011 @ 5:27 pm


i seem to feel it all the ptime. punishment is awful -0 since i was a kid = mental – it’s the worst kind. not being a good typist this exercise doens’t work too well for me but it’s probably a good thing for me to do. how about you?

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.15.2011 @ 9:36 am


i had a near miss this morning driving to the writer’s workshop at which i don’t feel near good enough amongst the company of some very talented people and i am not near good enough at these spontaneous exercises.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.13.2011 @ 1:58 pm


i will never have the answers. don’t even know the questions really. i do notice that many people know the answers and want to tell them to me. i’m sick of other peoples answers. they’re just afraid of the dark , aren’t you. i am.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.11.2011 @ 4:47 pm


It’s never been a level playing field. not here. not there. not for me . not for you. we all have our hills and valleys. and even the carpenters level can’t smooth the roller coaster ride that is life.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.03.2011 @ 12:49 pm


It was at the root of it all, the oppressive heat that had permeated the north and south coast for days. people were going mad. jumping up from their desks and driving to the nearest ocean or pool and diving in. fully clothed.

» Posted By Siobhan On 08.02.2011 @ 3:38 am


There’s no translation in french. They don’t have the ‘expect’. The just say ‘attendre’, which means wait, which really isn’t the same. So I’m waiting for you, I’m waiting for you to do this, etc. Linguistics, true.

» Posted By Siobhan On 07.10.2011 @ 4:40 am


He held me in his arms. I always felt safest here, though I never really understood why. I get it now. It’s because he’s my home, and I’ll always feel at home there.

» Posted By Siobhan On 06.19.2011 @ 1:34 pm

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