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standing

Standing in the middle of the road he looked out to the horizon, first in one direction, than the other. She kept to the side walk, glancing nervously down each street for the next car to come and knock him over.
“Oi, stop that now. A car’ll come by and you’ll get run over.”
He turned to her, a wide grin on his face full of teeth.

» Posted By Raiine On 12.18.2013 @ 5:11 am

wreath

The wreath on the front door was in disarray, just hanging on it’s nails. The door was opened, a bloody hand print staining the wood right above the door knob.

» Posted By Raiine On 12.16.2013 @ 4:33 am

knock

The knock knock knock at the door was an ominous sound. I felt like I was running in slow motion, seeing everything unfold before my eyes at such speed I knew I’d never get there in time to stop the disaster. I could see her little hand, innocently reaching up for the door knob.

» Posted By Raiine On 02.28.2013 @ 3:33 am

steps

It was the first step. The first step to becoming who I wanted to be. Or was it. Was that really who I wanted to be still. My goals had changed, my views, my life. I wasn’t so sure any more. Perhaps this step was no longer mine to take.

» Posted By Raiine On 11.02.2012 @ 5:46 am

teeth

My wisdom teeth are starting to appear. I wonder what wisdom teeth are for. They crowd your mouth and are often removed so why do we have them in the first place?

» Posted By Raiine On 10.21.2012 @ 8:38 pm

texture

She ran her hands over the canvas. Savouring the feel of the uneven surface, the texture of the painting and recreating the image of the painting she couldn’t see in her mind.

» Posted By Raiine On 09.01.2012 @ 8:28 pm

magazines

Fashion articles. Perfect models. Love doctors. Advice columns. Business mags. Stock market. Photography. Companies. Millions. Industry.

» Posted By Raiine On 08.28.2012 @ 8:09 pm

half

It’s a scary thought that in just 6 months I’ll be in my final year of school and preparing to go out into the world. My life will be own to do with what I will. I’m not sure I’m ready for that kind of freedom just yet.

» Posted By Raiine On 08.22.2012 @ 8:12 pm

Half. Half of what? Half a cake, half a piece of chalk? Half a person, a plate, a film, a chair? Why have half of something when you could have the whole thing?

» Posted By Raiine On 08.22.2012 @ 8:06 pm

event

It was written into the prophecy that a mysterious event would occur, involving this young girl and her family. For this reason, she was kept locked in a tower and not allowed out, for fear of misfortune befalling her before she was able to fulfil her destiny.

» Posted By Raiine On 08.19.2012 @ 6:28 pm

zone

“-need you round the side! Zathura! Come on! Man! No! no no no!”
“Hey Manni! Can you come down stair and set the table please. Dinner’s nearly ready!”
“OH MAN! Sorry guys, afk. MUM! I was in the zone and you just ruined it!”
“Don’t take that tone with me. You can come down and help set the table to you can stay up there in you ‘zone’ and miss out.”
“…I’m coming. Sorry guys, gotta go.”

» Posted By Raiine On 08.16.2012 @ 7:03 am

dare

It was all a joke. It was only a joke, honest. That’s all. He wasn’t meant to take it so seriously. I guess he felt a need to prove himself, being as new in the group as he was. He hadn’t needed to though. Not to me at least. I mean, the other made fun of him sometimes but it was only teasing, really.

» Posted By Raiine On 08.06.2012 @ 4:37 am

gum

The gum trees outside swayed with the wind. The rustling of the leaves, a soothing backdrop to a quiet afternoon spent curled up on the couch with a book.

» Posted By Raiine On 07.25.2012 @ 8:43 pm

instructions

“GO! Run, what are you waiting for?” I didn’t understand. I could see his lips moving, the sounds in the distance reaching my ears but I could not comprehend their meaning. Before I knew it, I was staring down the barrel of a gun.

» Posted By Raiine On 07.22.2012 @ 4:36 am

stretcher

It was supposed to be a little bit of fun. Harmless fun. But I suppose it always is. Until it isn’t and your watching someone you care about, more than you ever knew, being carried away.

» Posted By Raiine On 07.19.2012 @ 7:08 am

motion

Going through the motions. Everyday, the same mind-numbing routines. Repetitive. Monotonous.

» Posted By Raiine On 07.01.2012 @ 10:24 pm

seeds

The seeds of hope were planted. Whether that was what they had intended, they were there, buried deep down in the hearts of the people.

» Posted By Raiine On 06.24.2012 @ 9:48 pm

dwell

I dwell on things too much. Overthink everything. I spend so much of my time thinking, I hardly ever get off my arse and do anything. Damn shame now that I think about it. Oops, there I go with the thinking again.

» Posted By Raiine On 06.24.2012 @ 2:27 am

minute

One minute. One minute ago, he was alive. One minute ago, I could have saved him. One minute was all it took. A minute. And then he’s gone, just like that. That’s all it takes.

» Posted By Raiine On 06.23.2012 @ 5:53 am

pits

Dents in the ground. Dug out in their quest for wealth and with it, power. They don’t care for the landscape they are destroying, for the wounds they are inflicting upon the earth.

» Posted By Raiine On 06.19.2012 @ 9:25 pm

keen

And really, what had he been thinking in the first place? Throwing yourself at someone was hardly the way to get them to like you, let alone trust you. It was a ridiculous idea in the first place and, regrettably, he was only seeing this now.

» Posted By Raiine On 06.19.2012 @ 5:43 am

framework

The beautiful framework accentuated the painting perfectly. He stood back from the wall and stared.
“Lovely, isn’t it?” she said, facing the painting.
“The painting or the frame?” Neither turned to looked at the other.
“Both.”

» Posted By Raiine On 06.17.2012 @ 7:45 pm

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