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in an instant i lost everything
without even understanding the consequences or the ways in which all of my actions would correlate and destroy my past and my future. the present seems dead.

» Posted By melanie On 11.09.2017 @ 3:12 pm


It had cracked. The stupid thing had cracked. She had packed it carefully, put multiple warning stickers on it, told the mailman at least a thousand times to be careful with it, and it had still cracked. People were hopeless these days. The plate, which had been so beautiful when she bought it, now had an ugly crack running down the middle of it, splitting the face in half and distorting the image.

» Posted By Melanie On 09.23.2015 @ 11:38 am


I do not like to perform in front of a lot of people. Some people do but I don’t. :-/

» Posted By melanie On 04.24.2015 @ 9:57 am


Slowly, edgar edged the projector into place. His victim blinked as he turned it on, glaring him directly in the face. The sheen of sweat clear visible from the first row showed the audience how nervous he was.

» Posted By melanie On 04.17.2015 @ 10:22 am


Eleven years old was I? I never know. I never know how old I was in memories. I never know how old I am now. That’s an exaggeration. Like saying I cant tell the difference between memories and memories of dreams. It’s only sometimes.

» Posted By Melanie On 11.19.2014 @ 12:07 am


Remove from your side. Aparted. Take off. Make up. Things used to paint.

» Posted By Melanie On 09.03.2014 @ 4:19 pm


There is only a set amount of time to learn. To live. To impact and be impacted. One must realize this when trying to communicate. Every word instilled should be intended.

» Posted By Melanie On 06.12.2014 @ 8:18 am


I’m interested in making my writing work and sound better. I wanted my audience to be interested in what I have to say and I want them interested in my ideas. I have a lot of ideas that I think will interest a lot of different people and I want to make myself a better writer.

» Posted By Melanie On 04.01.2014 @ 10:17 am


revenue finance cost-to-benefit
what’s gained what’s lost
my mind travels to this always
never answering
the ultimate question
what path loses least?

» Posted By Melanie On 01.05.2014 @ 6:41 pm


She was chosen by him. The first time he saw her, he knew she was the one. He chose her and vowed that he would never love anyone else. Those blue eyes would be his, he would run his fingers through that curly mane. He would touch her freckled face. He chose her to be his.

» Posted By Melanie On 12.08.2013 @ 10:06 am


I think it’s saad that homeless people are alone. They legit smelter have no one caring for tem, ever. It’s like so lonely in their world, but who would even try helping them? We say we will but lost times we are often afraid of tem, as if they’re monsters. They’re humans, like us. They shouldn’t be treated different. But how do we change society’s view and opinions of them? It’s not easy.

» Posted By Melanie On 06.03.2013 @ 1:02 pm


“You stinking clout. I hate you!”
Juliana looked at Marissa. “Clout.”
“What the heck is a clout? Is that a fish?”
“No, that’s a trout.”

» Posted By Melanie On 05.23.2013 @ 3:08 pm

clout. cloud 9. cloud your judgement. cloud the world. get high. leave this place. come back to earth. wait, i need you. I miss you. Let’s pretend we are in the clouds. A comfortable place. comfort.

» Posted By Melanie On 05.23.2013 @ 2:17 pm


Ivory, clean, bathtime, bubbles, washing, fragrance, scrubbing, loofa, irish spr

» Posted By melanie On 05.09.2013 @ 7:09 pm


listening is the best thing anyone could ever do for anyone else. Listening requires skill, as well as any other talent. Listening requires patience. Listening is the key for being someone’s best friend. Just listen.

» Posted By Melanie On 03.24.2013 @ 12:34 pm


On a dark road my boots scraped the ground. The drug as my tired step slowed. I didn’t know how much further I could walk, but if I didn’t I would surely die there. They would find my body the next morning and wonder where I’d been, and where I was going.

» Posted By Melanie On 03.23.2013 @ 7:46 pm


sea gulls sea guilt
signal bird is out of range.]\
our time has come, say the seagulls,
to recaim the lands and
alien signal to the seagulls:
[what youve done is wrong]
[give the seagulls back]
give sea gulls back their rightful lands]
aliens raped the lands the seagulls loved
They RAPED them.
And they let them go.

» Posted By melanie On 03.07.2013 @ 4:46 pm


I just read a poem about a girl who pricks her finger with a sewing needle. I remember how much and how little it hurts to do that. Skin has all the nerves for caressing and yet can slough off painlessly. All of our cells switch out after seven years. Eventually I will never have touched you.

» Posted By Melanie On 02.26.2013 @ 5:20 pm


growing up was one of the things i’d always wanted to do but when i finally actually did it (ish) i mean i’m only fifteen but still, i feel like i’ve already grown up way too fast for my liking and i never get enough sleep anymore and there’s always so much drama and boys are stupid and i just wish that someday i could be able to get through all of this and by someday i mean now so i could maybe skip school and just tour the world.

» Posted By Melanie On 02.08.2013 @ 7:01 pm

growing up is a part of life. some of us don’t want to grow up and want to stay little and safe in our own bubble. sometimes growing up can be scary but it is necessary for life and for us. growing up lets us see who we are and what we can accomplish. we all must grow up and get set free.

» Posted By Melanie On 02.08.2013 @ 2:05 pm


There is a season for everything. Life happens in seasons. It is never the same for every person, which is the beautiful thing about it really. Seasons are unpredictable, but necessary. They bring you happiness, joy, sorrow, introspection, learning, etc. The most important thing is to take from each season what you need to, and face the new season with bravery and excitement. It’s hard, but it’ll be worth it.

» Posted By Melanie On 12.20.2012 @ 8:51 pm


I saw the game the ducks play earlier. You get out of your car and they swarm you hoping for some food. I just walked on past, assuming the rum fruitcake in my bag would not be suitable. I enjoyed a crisp wintery walk in their park just the same.

» Posted By Melanie On 12.19.2012 @ 10:05 am


paint dance

» Posted By Melanie On 11.13.2012 @ 3:36 pm


» Posted By Melanie On 11.13.2012 @ 3:34 pm


Each person has their own identity, something to fall into when times are tough. we each have the ability to be this person. who are each of us, but a scattering of selves? I feel awful.

» Posted By Melanie On 11.08.2012 @ 7:34 pm

they themselves are bones. they are the upside down amphorae in an empty basement. they are clumsy shards and chunks of rock, clamoring cobwebs and unreal windows rusted shut. they are left.

» Posted By Melanie On 11.08.2012 @ 2:04 pm


one word to me is just thinking on your own and being one and an expressive way to think and be and become everything can be explained in one word i dont know what else to say. just one word

» Posted By melanie On 11.07.2012 @ 4:13 pm


I learned that to want something so much does not mean it can just fall to you. You have to work hard at it everyday no matter what it is you want emotional or physical. Nothing is a piece of cake and nothing will ever come easy unless you live in a disney fairy tale. All you can learn is to work at something because if you expect it with no work you will get exactly what you stated with. Nothing.

» Posted By Melanie On 02.11.2013 @ 3:32 pm

learning is gaining knowledge about the world. Things you’ve never knew were possible is open to your eyes right in front of you. It doesnt have to be in a classroom. Learning is everywhere.

» Posted By Melanie On 02.11.2013 @ 12:19 pm


go forth and be free, go forth and be yourself. that word might take you back, but look harder for it to take you forward. go forth and be someone new. go forth and be you. be what you never thought could happen. Go forth and be YOU.

» Posted By Melanie On 10.22.2012 @ 6:59 pm

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