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ukulele

I’ve fucked with a ukulele, my dad hit me after I fucked with his ukulele.

» Posted By Mel On 10.10.2018 @ 4:41 am

My dad hit me with his ukulele. :(

» Posted By Mel On 10.10.2018 @ 4:35 am

nominee

She was the first ever nominee to accept this amazing award. She couldn’t believe that she had actually won, how amazing.

» Posted By Mel On 10.05.2018 @ 1:50 am

copper

I dropped my copper bracelet on the floor and stood there gawking at what I had saw. The sheer stupidity. I couldn’t wrap my mind around it. What were they thinking? It was quite the entertainment.

» Posted By Mel On 05.27.2018 @ 8:34 pm

father

My father was a great man.He touched so many lives. He once gave everything on his back to a man in need. I think my father was a great man. I like to think his great calling lead him to forget my mother and myself. I have to believe that something beyond his control forced him to abandon all of his fatherly responsibilities. But I’ll never know…

» Posted By Mel On 12.27.2017 @ 10:53 am

dizzy

I am dizzy because I jkdnvhgfcy
the planet spins at a speed that makes me dizzy.

» Posted By Mel On 05.08.2017 @ 4:59 pm

equator

this is a story about the equator. It is a line around the middle. it is Hot. It is steamy. It is the farthest distance around this great mass of earth we call home. Some people like to visit it, others like to stay very far away.

» Posted By Mel On 01.09.2016 @ 3:39 pm

wealth

Most people often think that wealth is measured in the amount of money you have, but I find that it’s more intelligent to measure wealth in the amount of happiness you and those around you have.

» Posted By Mel On 12.08.2015 @ 2:21 pm

pumpkin

I love pumpkins in soup and friend. It reminds me of the tender sensation of my childhood which seems non-existent in my photo albums.

» Posted By Mel On 11.30.2015 @ 10:04 am

sharks

the pool is full of sharks
the water is clear
But I Can see the sharks
no one else is around its only me in the pool
But i see the sharks
coming towards me
ready to rip me apart
they seem so real
they are real
they’ve got my legs they’ve got my arms
in their shark restless teeth
I’m done for
the sharks
will have no mercy

» Posted By mel On 11.28.2015 @ 3:32 pm

collapse

I started to sweat uncontrollably. I was dizzy, and my vision was blurring. I lost feeling in my limbs, but somehow they felt heavy, like they were weighing me down. When it finally came time to stand up I immediately fell to the ground.

» Posted By mel On 10.19.2015 @ 7:54 pm

dying

I felt it every time I looked at you

When you smiled and me

And when you didn’t

» Posted By mel On 10.17.2015 @ 8:50 am

what does it feel like? I’ve always wondered.

» Posted By Mel On 10.17.2015 @ 7:17 am

audience

Everyone watches and gapes, mouths hanging slack and lifeless. Time is clueless, a metaphor for death

» Posted By Mel On 02.25.2015 @ 2:33 am

locket

I couldn’t believe it. They’ve been gone for a year already. I stared down at the locket in my hands. This was the last thing mother had given me before she died. She looked happier in thos picture than she had in the past year, lying aimlessly in a hospital bed.

» Posted By Mel On 10.11.2014 @ 7:19 pm

pines

I can smell them as i stand there staring off into the distance. they are all around me. they crunch under my feet and i wish i could bottle up the wonderful scent.

» Posted By mel On 10.08.2013 @ 7:11 pm

plaster

plastered to the wall, it can’t and won’t come off. . . . Bittersweet memories. . . The past that won’t leave me alone. Right in front of me, always and forever

» Posted By Mel On 07.26.2013 @ 7:09 pm

derived

what I am. . .all this that I have become, is derived from the past, present, and future. . . What I did, do, and will do makes me unique. . . And I am one of a kind.

» Posted By Mel On 07.10.2013 @ 11:16 am

wrapped

wrapped up in worries, lies, hopes, dreams. . . this cover has a beginning, but no ends. . . feels like I will suffocate some days

» Posted By Mel On 07.09.2013 @ 5:19 pm

wrapped up in my blanket of thoughts, of worries, hopes, and dreams. . . some days it keeps me warm. other days it feels like they’re smothering me, and I’ll succumb to it

» Posted By Mel On 07.09.2013 @ 4:20 pm

oblique

the oblique lines traced across the screen. she had 60 seconds to come up with some bullshit. she missed spelling bees. a lot. i figured out how to cheat; at this game haha!! that’s pretty funny.

» Posted By mel On 05.28.2013 @ 9:15 pm

crow

darkness. a cold wind. the hair on the back of my neck stands up, goosebumps running down my spine. a crow? here? now? its the middle of the night. something is wrong – i can feel it in my bones, all the way down to the marrow, down to my center. i shiver, pull my coat tighter around me, and run.

» Posted By mel On 04.28.2013 @ 9:35 pm

beware

for some reason this word reminds me of the retelling of the three little pigs from the wolf’s point of view. I also think of Harry Potter and also the line from Macbeth something wicked this way comes. It can also be

» Posted By Mel On 03.20.2013 @ 12:53 pm

flames

Sexual passion. Hot love. Intensity. Is it possible to confuse the 2. Love, lust. How do we know.

» Posted By Mel On 03.05.2013 @ 2:03 pm

weakling

she was a weakling, small, insignificant. Blonde, but not really blonde. Almost gray but not old. Bland. And terrified, too, terrified of everything, and everyone around her, ever. No one was ever sure why she was so scared, they never really payed attention.

» Posted By mel On 03.03.2013 @ 10:48 pm

size

Size is how big or small something is. We have different sizes for all types of things. There are different sizes for shoes and clothes. Different sizes for the drinks we have. It can also be inappropriate like Jesse says because someone can’t help himself.

» Posted By Mel On 01.15.2013 @ 3:51 pm

amount

What amount of money contributes to a person’s happiness? is it the cost and quantity of possessions that determines a person’s life or the amount of happiness that people are able to find.

» Posted By Mel On 01.02.2013 @ 9:49 pm

available

i was available yesterday, you could have called. i cared about you and you let me go. i was available as a vacant room at a hotel. you left me there and never came back or called me. i was available to you, soul and physically wise. why did you leave me there? i will never understand. i seekd closure and you left me with no answers. good bye

» Posted By mel On 12.11.2012 @ 11:12 pm

rise

Up against the wind and the sea and the waves. Rising, like bread. Rise. Higher, higher, higher, can you see the clouds? It that it? Keep moving, it never stops. It keeps moving forever, it keeps rising. Swelling

» Posted By Mel On 11.29.2012 @ 8:06 pm

somebody

somebody somewhere has it better than me
somebody somewhere has it worse
somebody somewhere is my soulmate
and somebody somewhere is my enemy
somebody somewhere just jumped off a bridge

» Posted By mel On 11.13.2012 @ 4:01 am

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