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I stood stalling outside the door. I didn’t want to be here. I hated horses. “Are you ready?” a young woman asked stepping towards me. I didn’t answer. I was sure I would give some horrible sarcastic remark. It wasn’t my fault my dad loved horses! Why did I have to ride them too

» Posted By Mariel On 06.05.2014 @ 8:08 am


He stole my heart. He kept it warm and he shattered it to a million pieces. He fixed my heart and put the millions of pieces back together, with tape and glue of course. It could still be broken, and now you had to be a lot more fragile. This will continue to happen over and over again, until it is no longer fixable and the only way out is death. Rather sad.

» Posted By Mariel On 09.30.2013 @ 4:18 pm


Their love was something forbidden; yet she could not see it that way. Her mother could not stop her from loving him, could not make her feel that her emotions were some type of a taboo.

» Posted By Mariel On 05.14.2013 @ 1:09 pm


Daisy May Calhoun; everything about her was perfect. From her bleached white teeth to glistening auburn hair, no one would ever suspect that she was anything but pristine. But beneath her superficial beauty lurked a secret that was so ugly, so incredibly hideous that it would surely be the end of her world as she knew it if it were ever to surface.

» Posted By Mariel On 05.13.2013 @ 10:31 am

The girl with the auburn hair stopped and turned to him. She seemed to be flaunting her pearly white smile and perfect complexion; in fact everything about seemed flawless. She was teasing him, and he knew it.

He’d been around many girls like this in his lifetime; his days at university were full of them. The fake personalities, fake white teeth, fake eyelashes- he’d seen it all before. But something about her, this auburn haired beauty, enticed him.

» Posted By Mariel On 05.13.2013 @ 7:18 am


Destiny must be on our side
For I did not see this happening
I thought that I had lost you forever
But I guess she gave us a new beginning.

» Posted By Mariel On 01.07.2013 @ 5:50 pm


Tom Cross was my old boss. You can call him if you’d like a reference from when I used to work for him. He is as jolly as Santa Claus and a banjo player. He is quite a character but I loved working for him.

» Posted By Mariel On 01.06.2013 @ 5:06 pm


Experience life. Live it to the fullest. Make mistakes. Be scared. Risk getting hurt. Love unconditionally. Laugh til you start crying. Get out of your comfort zone. That’s what I tell myself every morning when I wake up. It’s just a lot harder to follow than I thought so I just pull the blanket back over my head and go back to sleep.

» Posted By Mariel On 01.05.2013 @ 1:18 pm


You call me milady. I call you my lord. Yeah, we’re nerds. We can be nerds together!

» Posted By Mariel On 01.04.2013 @ 4:57 pm


the perfect time to shine in all might. YEAH BABY! what, more time? okay, lalalalalalala NOW let’s go! still waiting. waiting. now. please. come on. it’s time!

» Posted By Mariel On 12.26.2012 @ 6:45 pm


i love to feel alive. i feel most alive when i listen or play music. drumming is what i do. I love the feel of the sticks in my hands and the bass drum pounding. when i’m at a concert, my favorite thing to feel is the bass drum beating all throughout my body. I love to feel the vibrations within me. I also feel alive because i can dance without anybody and everybody watching me at the same time.

» Posted By mariel On 09.16.2012 @ 3:34 pm


the instrucctions are difficult. You need to follow instrucctions. Withour instrucctions there is not order. There is confusion. Instrucctions were made to cradle the mind. Without instrucctions the mid would be free. The mind would be able to create their own instucctions. Creativigity would be much greater. People who are used to instrucctions are not so creative.

» Posted By Mariel On 07.21.2012 @ 4:53 pm


The feeling was mutual. I was sure of it, really. We’d always been on the same page, him and I. I guess I didn’t know what I was getting into when we met but now…

I know that the feeling is great.

I’ve been so happy, and by the looks of it, so was he. I guess we’ve had problems along the way, but who doesn’t? The feeling was mutual between him and I.

I mean, he’s my best friend.

» Posted By Mariel On 10.18.2011 @ 12:49 pm


I’m far beyond. Level me softly. Please. Do you remember. It’s been a month. I remember being in your arms that July 3rd. Crazy night. No stars.

» Posted By mariel On 08.03.2011 @ 11:59 am


I really don’t know what an antler is. But I can write about how I feel…Today I feel anxious, and trapped…and I wish I could break free from al this dreams and thoughts of you. I wish I had the strength to say I’m really done with all this word swallowing silence.

» Posted By mariel On 06.26.2011 @ 6:10 am


Dark cells pass by.
A sudden ray of white bright sunshine in my eye.
Then everything’s back.
Toilette sit and a hard bed. Rock walls and cells.

» Posted By mariel On 06.22.2011 @ 2:30 am


i want to be able to see the future. to know where my life is going and to be sure everything will all work out okay. i want to be able to predict the uncertainties in my life and to know that brad and i will stay together and he will move to new england with me.

» Posted By Mariel On 06.20.2011 @ 7:32 pm


Don’t do this. My brain cells are dying. I hear the water running in the sink while you brush your teeth. I’m determined to leave. Just want to leave. I miss you.

» Posted By mariel On 04.07.2011 @ 8:58 pm

Determined to be undermined.
Determined to leave.
You are always so undetermined.
It drives me crazy.

» Posted By mariel On 04.07.2011 @ 8:56 pm


I was once trusted.
But one day trust grew out feathers,
that became wings.
And with a sudden summer breeze.
It flew away inside your kiss.

» Posted By mariel On 03.31.2011 @ 8:38 am


That approach on life doesn’t fulfill me, he said.
I’m not that approachable. I left him thinking.
Wild flowers and snow.

» Posted By mariel On 03.22.2011 @ 8:55 pm


Not even red heels heal me anymore.
He’ll never show up again.
Feels like hell on the throat.
Like frozen hills and a gray sky.
Head over heels.

» Posted By mariel On 03.15.2011 @ 10:04 pm

Heels make me fall of the stairs. I fell twice today, but I don’t care. Heels make me happy. Red, shiny, needle – like, tall, kitten, purple, blue, muddy.

» Posted By mariel On 03.15.2011 @ 9:54 pm


She called me at 3:30 in the morning. Her quiet voice in the other line of the phone woke me up. But I could hear the whispers outside my window.

Shivers down my spine and cold sweat.

» Posted By mariel On 03.13.2011 @ 9:23 am


They make me feel warm and fussy, I love scarves in cold weather. I love scarves in warm weather. I love their colors, their textures, their prints, their love to my neck. I love wrapping them around, playing with them, wrapping them in my dogs head, making them look like turbans. I love them.

» Posted By mariel On 03.12.2011 @ 8:00 am


There are four, or hundreds, depending on who you ask, what mythology you’re dealing with here. I prefer the former. Everything’s simpler that way. Isn’t it? Mystical. Science is for smart people. Smarter than me.

» Posted By Mariel On 07.16.2010 @ 9:33 pm


offer is they way lo let the world know waht you’ve got..
Offer makes me jealous
Offer is to lend
Offer is great for the ones that doesn’t own

» Posted By Mariel On 05.13.2009 @ 11:00 am


resist life, resist desire, resist emotion. yo have to resist to the sin, to the past, to the good to the bad. resist, so tat you can live, resist so you can feel.

» Posted By mariel On 09.19.2009 @ 12:29 pm


Rain fall. Water fall. Washing away everything bad that you and I have ever done. It feels so good to be free. It feels so good to forget. I only want to be clean again.

» Posted By Mariel On 08.10.2009 @ 12:04 pm


Gods of gold and stone, sleeping soundly. They are no one anymore. Now we have Americans with silky throats, velvet vocal chords. Are they any different, really? No, they are not. It’s all the same sort of worship. Isn’t it?

» Posted By Mariel On 08.06.2009 @ 5:00 pm

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