Comments Posted By LynnNolan

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platinum

i could see the city up ahead. It was shinning like a platinum star that had fallen to earth. I could almost taste the water that i planned on guzzling as soon as i get there. I had just walked through what felt like the sahara.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 12.07.2011 @ 11:23 am

shuffle

he could feel the cards in his hands as he watched the man across the table. he began to shuffle them, while thinking of ways to get out of here.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 11.18.2011 @ 11:15 am

chorus

i could hear the song in the background. they were just getting to the chorus. I had about 3 min before the croud would be aware that they were being robbed.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 04.29.2011 @ 11:52 am

trailer

i could see the trailer swaying madly out behind the truck as we speed down the highway. all i could think of is that this thing is going to fly off and kill someone. i looked back at dad driving the car, and i could tell now wasnt the time to bring it up.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 04.26.2011 @ 11:19 am

styrofoam

the chunks were floating everywhere. there was nothing left of the oat at all. the missle had demolished the whole thing. all the was left were huge chunks of what looked like styrofoam floating everywhere. and right there in the middle clinging to a large piece of debris, was the Captian!

» Posted By LynnNolan On 04.22.2011 @ 11:13 am

gasoline

we pulled over to the side of the road. all i could smell was gasoline. he got out of the van and we sped off. no one spoke. in the rearview mirror i saw a large burst of flame where we had dropped him off. “my god, he really did it”

» Posted By LynnNolan On 04.15.2011 @ 11:15 am

severe

the wind was relentless. i could feel the sever sting of the rain as it pelted my face. i could just make out the boat being tossed around on the waves. I hoped it would be here soon and i could put this whole day behind me.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 04.13.2011 @ 11:14 am

average

i have seen people like her before. not to tall not to small, everything about her was average. her hair, her weight, everything. but for some reason i can not stop thinking about her.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 11.09.2010 @ 12:21 pm

element

there was one crystal that represented on of the four elements. Earth, Air, Fire, Water. I took these crystals from the wizard that lives on the edge of town and i plan to use them to rid our town of these beasts.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 07.16.2010 @ 11:13 am

generate

i have to try and generate some motivation to get this done. i can feel my will power draining away.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 07.09.2010 @ 11:36 am

spike

the sound of the spikes being sharpened could be heard all over town. The heretic was to be impalled this afternoon. We did not know this man so most of the families were getting ready for the festivities that would follow the ceremony.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.28.2010 @ 11:29 am

beach

sand and surf
water so blue
feeling the waves hit my toes
gulls cry

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.23.2010 @ 11:48 am

tide

the soldiers raced up the hill and down the other side out of view. running towards the battle ahead. hopefully this victory will turn the tide

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.22.2010 @ 12:12 pm

bleach

All i could smell as i entered the house was the bleach. the mother had used it to wipe off the childrens blood that still clung to the white sideboards in the childrens rooms.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.21.2010 @ 11:13 am

without

i am going without you. she said as she ran out the door and got into her friends car. i watched her drive away up the street and went back into the house. I picked up the phone and called my other girlfriend to come over. mission accomplished.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.18.2010 @ 11:13 am

matching

the woman and her son were walking down the isle of the supermarket and they were wearing matching outfits. I was working at the counter and i could not stop laughing. I had to have a manager come over and relieve me in order to compose myself

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.16.2010 @ 11:13 am

fallout

after the fallout we all gathered in the center of the campground. the fires were burning all around and you could still hear some distane gunfire. we all silently looked around us, the bodies of our friends, who until a short time ago were laughing and dancing now lay lifeless and cold upon the ground.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.15.2010 @ 11:30 am

driven

i cant believe i have driven all the way out here and he isnt even ready. I can see him running back and forth in his room getting ready. Why do guys wait untill they hear you beep outside before getting dressed. oh well

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.14.2010 @ 11:13 am

brave

the waves crashed against the side of the small canoe as we tried to brave the open waters. The water had already begun to trickle over the sides as we paddled with all our hearts.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.11.2010 @ 11:13 am

wand

the kid just waved his wand at me. i think i should teach hiim a lesson.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.10.2010 @ 12:11 pm

strung

the ribbons were strung up all over the yard.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.09.2010 @ 11:16 am

hawk

i am going to do this. my grandmother gave me this ring for my 16th birthday and now i am going to hawk it. the way this drug makes me think i dont even flinch as i drop the ring on the counter and i take my 25 dollars and head out to find my guy.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.08.2010 @ 11:14 am

remark

as i walked home i just kept playing his remark over and over in my head. “Just Friends”!! i cant be just friends. i lie awake thinking about him and wishing we were together and he tells me we have to be “Just Friends”!!!

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.07.2010 @ 12:14 pm

suit

i felt invisible. this suit fit me like a glove. i would get this job i thought as i walked into the office. i needed this.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.06.2010 @ 8:30 am

spine

I could feel the chills running all the way down my spine. the scream had echoed through the woods and slowly died out. i could feel the man hunting us as we all ran seperate ways. i was wondering who he had gotten to , and who that horrible scream came from.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.04.2010 @ 11:24 am

starlight

we hunted the fugitive by starlight, afraid to light a lamp in case we reveal our position. the man had escaped two hours ago and we had begun the search about one hour after he escaped. this gave him the advantage, because of our location he had a number of ways to run and therefore manage to stay out of our grasp.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.03.2010 @ 11:27 am

century

the boy walked into the deserted room. he felt as if he had been hiding for a century. the teachers had all filed out and he was alone in the large stone room. the alter was still in the center of the room, blood soaked and dripping with the sweat of the boy who had just layed there.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.03.2010 @ 10:51 am

gong

Gong.thats the sound my head made as i slammed it on the counter top. i was bending down to pick up the cupcake that i was frosting that had just dropped to the floor. frosting side down of course. things like this always happen when i am in a rush.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 06.02.2010 @ 10:43 am

leather

the man paused at the top of the hill. stretching his arms and rubing the sleep out of his leathery face, his skin weathered and beaten by the elements.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 05.31.2010 @ 8:42 am

collar

the dog hated this collar. everyting he tried to go to the neigbors yard the collar would give him a nasty shock. now he knows the shock is coming but he a stubborn dog and still tries to get next door to dig up the neighbors flowers.

» Posted By LynnNolan On 05.28.2010 @ 11:16 am

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