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backdrop

Backdrop, I am not sure what it means since english is not my first language. I will have to google translate it. Well, I have an idea of what it means in swedish, probably: bakgrund, or am I wrong?

» Posted By Lou On 01.27.2019 @ 1:18 pm

spoiled

The potatoes were spoiled. All of the food, actually. It had all gone to waste. Devastation lit her eye as she stared at the bounty. It was to feed a legion of hungry children and families. How could it have all gone bad? One word. Daniel. He’d probably done something. She wasn’t sure what. But, he had.

» Posted By Lou On 12.15.2016 @ 9:54 am

sublime

My roses
my darling
my carmel candle light
my mountains
my pastures
come for me come for me
please feel free to leak your lavender tears onto my pillow
ill always forgive you
please love me
please love me
youre pure
youre humble
love me
love me

» Posted By Lou On 12.09.2015 @ 10:02 pm

kingdom

Upon a lovely day, a kingdom stood stolid on the hills of the Greenings Province. Ah yes, it was a wonderful day. At least, until a dragon – a wingéd beast with talons, fangs and shiny scales – decided that today was his great day. Never did man think of dragons as Lords and Besiegers until that day, but in the following Era, each kingdom of Earth had suffered the gluttonous flames of the Firebreathers.

» Posted By Lou On 04.20.2015 @ 6:45 am

dietary

Moments on a farm, passing by as calmly as sheep grazing but as quickly as striking thunder. Dietary days are far from so. For all the hunger and what it’s worth, do not starve yourself – just eat moderately. Then, you will be as kind to those suffering from lack of food as you will to yourself. In a western world, where the amount of food floods you and everyone else, do not forget – no one forces you to eat it. Just take a little less on your plate.

» Posted By Lou On 03.09.2015 @ 8:30 am

accomplice

the accomplice to the murder sat in the car outside. he began to start the car, as he saw his friend run out of the door of the shop. the chevy revved, and his friend opened the door hastily. he sat down, throwing the bag of money into the back seat with no small amount of force.

» Posted By Lou On 10.08.2014 @ 9:07 am

frown

Suddenly there was nothing left but the falling snow. She looked out the window and thought to herself that all this snow would be impossible to pass. She frowned at the thought of having to go through it. Nevertheless, she had to. She could not afford to skip out on work.

The others were dependent on her, her and her helping hand in the Volunteer’s Corps.

» Posted By Lou On 09.16.2014 @ 1:27 pm

commissioned

I was never supposed to be here. Jailgates opened, and I didn’t know how I was supposed to get out; heck, I didn’t even know why I was here. “Someone must’ve ratted the wrong out!” screamed someone from down the grey, sinister halls.

» Posted By Lou On 12.17.2013 @ 9:07 am

stapled

“I cannot believe it!!” said Stacey. “I have stapled the 3 pages to my school dress!”
The class laughed out loud and Stacey felt her face go red.
Great… as if it isn’t hard enough being the new girl!

» Posted By Lou On 07.24.2013 @ 10:07 pm

decoy

I was eating cake. I forgot to write. That’s one hell of a decoy!

» Posted By Lou On 06.27.2013 @ 12:38 pm

stilts

Stilts. Short can become high, and high can become low. Everyone can stand tall if they learnt he skill. Yet, everyone can fall, fade and lose.

Stilts are a gateway. Like the mirror, it reflects something, a skill or a trait. It reflects you. It reflects me.

» Posted By Lou On 06.23.2013 @ 12:20 pm

shattered

I’m shattered emotionally. Drained and numb. Confused to the point of no return.

» Posted By lou On 05.26.2013 @ 6:45 pm

chain

There was a chain. There was always something that got in her way. She stared at the half filled cardboard boxes that were scattered around her. Why bother? Nothing was ever going to change.

» Posted By Lou On 08.25.2012 @ 2:00 pm

patrol

Bunch of people in cool uniforms.

» Posted By Lou On 07.19.2012 @ 5:52 pm

soups

soup is nice because it’s like food, but not food. it’s good for when you’re ill or hungover. i like minestrone soup and we usually have it on bonfire night with jacket potatoes and sausages. sometimes i like tomato soup but not very often. one time adam bought me soup when i was really hungover and left it outside for me.

» Posted By Lou On 06.26.2012 @ 9:19 am

The chicken soup that warms your heart and body on a chilly day. A temporary moment that makes you feel good all day. The first bite is the best because you feel the warmth travel down to your stomach and the bitterness leave the tips of your fingers and toes.

» Posted By Lou On 06.25.2012 @ 1:59 pm

mist

in the mist of day…. you’ll leave me. such a sad picture. such a sad thought. and yet so gloriously homey and sensual. like in pride and prejudice. but my favorite mist is ocean mist. breathe it in. especially in the fall. or right after a rain storm! that too! i like mist….

» Posted By lou On 08.29.2011 @ 7:42 pm

sinking

falling
water
worries
stress
drowing
plunging
waterfall
plug
plasticine
bubbles
deep
floundering

» Posted By Lou On 08.23.2011 @ 6:37 am

i have this sinking feeling that i am not with the person that I love. in fact im currently with no one. But he is. i am not sure if hes who im supposed to be with. but i feel like… well, i dont know.
i know that somewhere in me i know… you see, im psychic.
but i dont want to know.
yeah.
thats it.
i dont want to know.

» Posted By lou On 08.22.2011 @ 10:22 pm

deer

in headlights.
leaping, prancing, frolicking.
hurriedly darting, eyes aglow.
fragile.
daring.
fully illuminated, at last.

» Posted By Lou On 08.18.2011 @ 10:18 pm

cast

A cast of people, thrown together into this crazy car wreck of a life. People meant to work together, whether they want to or not. People who’s destinies are entwined. One way or another, these people were meant to have met, and changed eachother’s lives forever.

» Posted By Lou On 07.06.2011 @ 11:08 pm

crush

that really annoying thing that happens when your 16 and even worse when your 30 , oh yeah or that thing that happens to your car when you don’t pay the parking fine, kind of the same process with your heart when you find out he isn’t interested in you…its a really annoying somg tfrom the 90’s too thats all folks…

» Posted By lou On 06.29.2011 @ 7:04 am

station

i arrived at the station.
at the station.
at the station.
i saw him standing there.
at the station, standing there.
found my love at the station.
at the station.
at the station.
with all the love i have to share.

» Posted By lou On 06.15.2011 @ 10:07 am

embraced

i embraced my mom today. i saw here standing in our family room alone. And she just looked tired.

» Posted By lou On 06.13.2011 @ 9:25 pm

beloved

and this is my beloved is a song that i sing constantly for auditions. It is a beautifully dedicated song to one’s loved one. And it is a song that is about standing up for love. Now is a beautiful time in society to talk about standing up for love. Love has become so passe. Let’s stand up for our beloved.

» Posted By lou On 06.12.2011 @ 10:33 pm

forgetting

i keep forgetting to do a lot of things. I need to write thank you notes. and pack for my trip. but I keep forgetting. i think its less forgetfulness and more me being lazy. or not exactly lazy but lacking the desire to move forward. hopefully this desire will return and i will stop being lazy and forgetting everything

» Posted By lou On 06.07.2011 @ 12:37 pm

painted

i havent painted in a while. but the other day I painted a picture for ted. and I sent it off to south america. So hopefully when ted opens up his letter he will see that I painted him something and he will laugh. Because lets face it. Im not very good at painting… at all. but he will know that I did it for him. And he’ll smile. Because it’s nice when someone does something for you.

» Posted By lou On 06.07.2011 @ 9:28 am

galaxy

far far away! reminds me of the star wars introduction ~ hehe, also the galaxy chocolate bar that I got addicted to until I got sick of it, then you got the stars of course which reminds me of seeing 2 shooting stars with my girlfriend one night and we realised how much we loved each other :)

» Posted By Lou On 04.03.2011 @ 5:53 am

mango

Mangos
blue birds in a tree
dripping fruit skins and guano
down the tall slender
trunks.

» Posted By Lou On 02.22.2011 @ 3:04 pm

temper

he banged his fist down on the table.
“DON’T YOU FUCKING DARE!”
once again, i backed myself into a corner, holding my head in my hands. i hated these outbursts. but i loved him. and that’s why i stayed. no other reason. just him…

» Posted By Lou On 12.13.2010 @ 10:05 am

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