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grasped

I grasped his hand in mine. It was near freezing. I liked the thought that my hand could be a source of warmth for him. Hands grasped means souls bounded. I wanted people to be jealous. To look at us and envy what we had, grasped together tightly.

» Posted By Kim M On 02.19.2013 @ 9:37 pm

salesman

His salesman smile made me sick. The corners of his smile created dimples. For Gods sake were not just dealing with anything right now. Bombs separated us on a small circular table. People were going to die and that was no laughing matter.

» Posted By Kim M On 02.07.2013 @ 5:13 pm

think

I thought for a minute. The thoughts swirling from one side to the other. I wonder, who wonders? Do all people relax and take the time to analyze their own lives? I sit here on this bench in the middle of winter, thinking.

» Posted By Kim M On 02.05.2013 @ 1:07 pm

husband

Her husband? ha! should be MY husband. I’ve had my eyes on him since pre puberty. She just started talking to him last year. Ridiculous. They save love makes you do crazy things? I’m about to do the craziest one yet.

» Posted By Kim M On 02.04.2013 @ 11:19 am

wall

This wall had always stood between himself and her. Every time he tried to utter a word, the wall dropped in front of him. He couldn’t get past its thick exterior. Maybe it wasn’t meant to be. Maybe he just wasn’t trying hard enough to climb the wall. Who knows?

» Posted By Kim M On 02.03.2013 @ 7:01 pm

features

His features had always been exaggerated, no matter how he tried to cover them. He had tried everything. Hats, hair to his shoulders. everything. He always thought people looked at him and instantly thought of Pinocchio. That’s why he never had much confidence with the ladies. Till he met Lindsay.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.31.2013 @ 4:18 pm

swell

It was swelling. and it was swelling fast. I try to keep it a secret from people but in my time of extreme weakness it becomes apparent. I would do anything to make this swelling disappear But I cant help it, I think so much that my head swells. I was in trouble now. They knew what I was thinking.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.30.2013 @ 7:26 pm

baby

The baby looked so innocent. So lonely sitting there on the street corner. Its tears were stained lines on his cheeks. What was to become of this poor soul calling out for help? Would anyone offer to raise him?

» Posted By Kim M On 01.29.2013 @ 11:33 am

visitor

He was the sole visitor that caught my attention. He was the only one not having fun. He was too still, I could almost see him breathing. His eyes ticked occasionally, jolting from side to side. Paranoia? But why?

» Posted By Kim M On 01.28.2013 @ 7:13 pm

cool

He was cool. collected. everything that he shouldn’t be at a time like this. His father had just died. But here he was, drinking wine laughing with some woman. He must have something to do with this cold killing. Why wasn’t he mourning if he didn’t do it?

» Posted By Kim M On 01.27.2013 @ 1:55 pm

applied

I had applied for the job at least 3 times. They all knew I’d be the perfect candidate, yet they ignored my very existence.
“you’ll find a new job” they said.
But they new nothing of how badly I wanted this. I would do anything for it.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.20.2013 @ 3:12 pm

size

The size of his heart had shrunk since his relationship with Amanda. He used to be open to so many new things, but ever since she left he hasn’t been willing to do much of anything. He stays to himself mostly. Too afraid of what little of his heart that was left was going to be snatched up by someone else.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.15.2013 @ 11:55 am

cry

I cried all night long after my father had been shot. I knew what he was involved in, but yet I couldn’t stop the hot tears running down my cheeks. I knew he had been affiliated with the mob, but that didn’t make him any less of a great man. Or any less my father. Crying never did seem to help much.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.11.2013 @ 5:37 pm

master

“Yes master,”The little man said peeping from around the corner.”I will do anything the master wants.”
“You know what you can do for me little imp?”
“Yes master?”
“Scram. I don’t want to see the site of you around here again.”
“. . . But master. . .”
“I said, beat it.”

» Posted By Kim M On 01.10.2013 @ 12:23 pm

politician

The politicians drive me absolutely nuts. I thought to myself as I glared at the tv after a long day of work. All they have to say is complete shit. They don’t care about me and my struggles. all they care about is the money in my back pocket.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.09.2013 @ 5:37 pm

must

I really must have it. The diamond necklace glittered in the sun. However it rested on a beautiful blondes neck. no matter, what must be mine will be mine. I will have to kill her. Of course I have more reason to kill than this, but it does make a promising argument.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.07.2013 @ 11:19 am

lord

oh lord. she thought to herself as she stared out into the field. Oh lord. She felt her knees tremble. She looked up to the sky, running her hands through her hair. Oh lord, why here?

» Posted By Kim M On 01.04.2013 @ 11:20 am

placed

She placed her hand down on Lilys shiny hair. Lily glanced up at her with large eyes.
“Mom, why can’t we see Daddy?”
“Because he’s gone now.”
“Gone?”
“Honey, he’s never coming back.”

» Posted By Kim M On 01.03.2013 @ 6:39 pm

amount

Her eyes narrowed as she focused on her target. Markus. How much amount of shit would she be willing to deal with this time? Her fist grew tighter and tighter as her thoughts rushed around her mind. He was going down.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.02.2013 @ 4:52 pm

barrel

The barrel sat at the edge of the room. Illuminating from its core. What could be in this barrel? It called to Mary. It pulsed with radiating light. She starred at it for a long while, questioning its existence. She had never seen it before, until now.

» Posted By Kim M On 01.01.2013 @ 11:19 am

sure

sure,i loved him. sure, id do anything for him. sure. But he doesnt even know how much he means to me. I wish he could see. Sure, i love him.

» Posted By Kim M On 12.30.2012 @ 6:18 pm

soil

the soil felt like ice under his fingernails. What brought him to this very moment? What took him to thinking it was ok to unbury his late friend? He knew his voice in his head told him to do it… but was he crazy enough to really do it? The voice said YES.

» Posted By Kim M On 12.28.2012 @ 10:58 pm

shows

you know what really shows about him? Kerry thought to herself. His smile. It sheds life on the world. Its so bright, so open, so wonderful it just makes the world smile back. It shows he is one of a kind. The one for me.

» Posted By Kim M On 12.27.2012 @ 4:55 pm

actual

his actual name? Jason. His actual life? a real secret that no one was to ever figure out. He was on a mission. To fool every person who he ever came in contact with. To have many false lives. Could he accomplish this actual life of deception? He would have to wait and see… to wait out all of his experiences, one at a time/

» Posted By Kim M On 12.23.2012 @ 3:51 pm

scatter

The scattering of footfall awoke jason with a jolt. Who could be lurking in his apartment this late at night? He scurried to the nearest door way, making sure to grab his shot gun. Whoever this was was going to get it. He paid his dues. What else could they possibly want from him?

» Posted By Kim M On 12.21.2012 @ 7:52 pm

learn

It would take a while for Lauren to learn the sly ways of Meredith. She was to watch the way Meredith’s eyes darted from side to side, stealthily searching her surroundings. Lauren was next in line and had to be just as cautious as all of them before her. It wasn’t going to be easy. But was anything in life easy?

» Posted By Kim M On 02.11.2013 @ 12:30 pm

ancient

The ancient text looked as if it would evaporate. It was so faded you could barely make it out. He reached for it, trying to be as gentle as possible. However, when he touched it, it crumbled into oblivion. Whatever was on it was too far gone for him to be concerned with. It was too late.

» Posted By Kim M On 02.10.2013 @ 9:55 am

account

on account of someone
my account
my tale of something to say
give account
a reckoning
a reasoning why
a figuring out
a making your way

» Posted By Kim M On 09.15.2011 @ 9:40 am

wanting

I was halfway through the 100yd breaststroke race during the NCAC conference swim meet my senior year of college and i realized I wasn’t going to win. I wanted more than anything in the world to go a 1:10 low, just as I had in the medley relay, and I could feel it wasn’t going to happen because I left it all in the pool after the relay. I hurt really bad, all over, but I wanted it so bad I couldn’t do anything but go go go until I couldn’t feel my legs and shoot for second place.

» Posted By Kim M On 08.29.2008 @ 6:58 pm

clip

there was once a clip on a bag of chips and in my hair but now it feels like it has migrated into that space between my lungs and my heart, that little part that twists and turns and rots and hugs and smiles and spills a little all at once and especially during times when you need it the least, it is there, that little clip. just waiting. to clip. like it should.

» Posted By kim m On 03.29.2010 @ 9:29 pm

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