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manhattan

Busy
Hectic
Mind numbing
Serine.
Chaos
Art
News
World
Crime
Buildings
Fear
Taxi
Hotdogs
Chatter
Ocean
Immigrants
Life
Open windows.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 05.17.2013 @ 10:33 am

shoulder

All I wanted was a shoulder to cry on
To give me something to hold dear
Something to listen
And something to have all to my own..

But that’s unrealistic.
Stupid, even.
How can I depend on something so unobtainable to run my life?
But it’s something I cannot live without.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 05.15.2013 @ 10:08 am

taboo

The whole world is one big taboo.
Why so we judge so harshly?
Why can’t we just get along?
Love each other?
Why is everything different
strange…
What’s wrong with us?
It’s something human
natural
uncontrollable.
Accept it.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 05.14.2013 @ 10:13 am

auburn

Her hair flowed through the sunlight
Catching waves of amber
She looked back at me and smiled
Lips parting to show pearls
Such perfect as she ran through that field
The breeze swaying the tall grass
The memories that still warm me.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 05.13.2013 @ 10:22 am

creature

The ring glows around his decrepit little fingers.
Such an unsightly thing…
Yet so precious.
Blue eyes that cry in agony..
Pale skin that refuses the sun’s kindness.
Kindness that is fading.
And an instinct to kill.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 04.18.2013 @ 10:30 am

mumbling

I hear them mumbling behind my back…
I know what they’re saying.
They snicker, sneer.
I’m just a big joke to them.

But I ignore it.
Why should I care?
So I’ll go on my way and try not to think
Of their mumbles that ripped at my mind.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 04.17.2013 @ 10:19 am

signals

Such strong signals.
So little time.
Why can we sense some and others remain untouched?
It’s so simplistic yet so demanding.
it’ll rip out your soul or complete it.
Something one can never describe in words.
I feel the most.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 03.07.2013 @ 10:18 am

lamb

Lion and the lamb
so courageous and small
adorable and frail
strong symbolically.
What it is to be slung over the Shepherd’s shoulder
to be praised
and loved.
I find it odd, how you represent a plant.
Nature in all aspects.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 03.05.2013 @ 10:24 am

sentenced

Death.
So harsh, for such distraction.
Who are they to judge us? Just because they’ve deemed themselves superior?
Though you cannot rebel
a sentence like this.
it’s something we have to face, nothing we can disobey.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 03.01.2013 @ 10:29 am

weathered

Such worn hands.
So many years providing
Old age can’t take you.
Your soul is weathered… your spirit strong.
How I admire you and your dedication.
How I love you Grandfather.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.20.2013 @ 11:23 am

flailing

I can feel her, so cold, flailing inside.
So cold and empty.
She screams and I can’t bear to hear her.
So desperate and alone.
Why won’t she leave?
Why can’t I help?
Someone save us from this monster.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.19.2013 @ 10:33 am

fatigue

Everyone, sleepless.
Loveless and hopeless.
The world has a sickness
called fatigue.
No one can cure it.
We’ve brought it upon ourselves
Because we’re all lazy.
And we’ve become too lazy to care
to want to change it.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.17.2013 @ 10:20 am

willed

Only a certain breed of human has you.
You are so beautiful..
Graceful..
Strong..
A will is something you can never give up.
Yet this becomes a dream ruined,,
How can people give you up?
You are my everything.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.15.2013 @ 2:44 pm

flat

You can describe so many things
A chest
A board
A sound
A picture.
But what do you mean?
Something only 2 dimensional?
Or something boring?
You confuse me, flat.
But how wondrous you are.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.14.2013 @ 10:15 am

growing

As kids we look forward to growing up.
Being independent. Being tall.
Our parents can’t ground us,
We can eat as much ice cream as we want.
Nothing can stop us, and we can become super heroes.
What has happened?

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.08.2013 @ 4:36 pm

think

People need to actually think. We need to expand our knowledge and learn more than our past generations. But we’ve become so lazy as a race that we complain about a mere few hours at school. We, as americans, are far behind.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.05.2013 @ 5:42 pm

i think that the world should just get along. no worries of drama or anything to ruin a happy thought. we are too self absorbed and i think we need to stop and get back to nature. because thats all we really need in life is a simplistic view to come down and aprriciate more.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.05.2013 @ 5:38 pm

learn

How will we survive without instinct?
How can we go on without knowledge.
Something simple and known
or something complex that makes no sense.
It’s funny how things work.
Especially our minds.

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.11.2013 @ 6:50 pm

plays

I love when he plays with my hair.
Curling the tips, the edges around his fingers.
Lingering in one spot because he sees the goosebumps rising on my skin.
How sensual.
How pure.
Why can’t this last forever?

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.10.2013 @ 6:37 pm

ancient

Why can’t things be like they were back then.
Now all we are is rock
a memory
or great
a book
Something more worthwhile
Something remembered
And not just a pest, like the vermin we are now.
What happened to great civilization?

» Posted By Jordan Barker On 02.09.2013 @ 7:49 pm

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