Comments Posted By Jeane

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reliable

i thought it was a good choice talking
spices and fun and the night
but you got out
hot chocolate by myself
trying to find solace
i hoped
sorry for being silly

» Posted By Jeane On 12.25.2017 @ 7:05 am

sound

This sound will be stuck in my head forever.
The sound of your voice saying to me ‘it’s over between us.’
And the silence of my tears…

» Posted By Jeane On 01.19.2013 @ 5:53 am

passionate

She laid alone in the dark, eyes closed and pretending to sleep. Inside her head, however, was a different story. Desperately, she tried to recall what it was like to be kissed by him but all she could remember were flashes, nothing concrete. All she had were her memories after all.

» Posted By Jeane On 11.01.2011 @ 8:21 am

violet

She felt small under his gaze. The way he looked at her made her feel as if she could hide nothing from him.

“I love your eyes.”

» Posted By Jeane On 07.22.2011 @ 6:02 am

bow

She shivered under their stares. It was over. She closed her eyes and whispered her peace.

“Goodbye.”

» Posted By Jeane On 07.15.2011 @ 6:08 am

etiquette

She struggled with her dinner tonight. The multitude of forks and knives confused her. She looked around at the guests dining with ease.

“I don’t belong here.”

» Posted By Jeane On 07.14.2011 @ 8:23 am

plague

Boils erupted from his skin. He wondered why he was chosen.

She eyed him with disgust and left. She couldn’t have foreseen that she’d fall victim to it too.

» Posted By Jeane On 07.13.2011 @ 7:46 am

straw

She wandered around the halls aimlessly, concentrating on putting one foot forward, one after the other. She staggered as she walked until she crumpled on the floor.

“Poor girl.”

» Posted By Jeane On 07.12.2011 @ 7:56 am

funeral

She tried not to cry. She really did. It was strange. All these people with furrowed brows and downturned heads. She didn’t want to show weakness in front of them though she had every right to.

» Posted By Jeane On 06.12.2011 @ 8:52 am

teacher

My professor died recently. He complimented my writing once. I wasn’t there to hear it though. My classmates were the ones who told me.

» Posted By Jeane On 06.10.2011 @ 6:24 am

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