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Let me tell you whats sitting at the central
the main composer of it all
thats the only way to make it fall
i dont wanna stall
ill go up so tall
im sitting here shopping at the mall
ill take it al and you know i shall
» Posted By Jake On 08.05.2018 @ 8:43 pm
I snoop around in my grey hoodie
Looking for a plan to flee
they looking at me,
Thinking, could he?
Where is it that I want to be?
Hiding for all eternity?
Maybe I should just go and climb a tree
but even then, i wont be truly free
so ill just keep going about my day like a busy bee
» Posted By Jake On 07.19.2018 @ 3:18 pm
I’ma go forth in my big vehicle
vehicular motion and transportation
with a motor?
gas? water? electric? solar?
this world is so bipolar
we shall ride on the backs of african american slave culture to the revolution of equality.
Thirld World Liberation Front
» Posted By Jake On 07.17.2018 @ 11:08 am
I be so sleepless
and im always restless
maybe its cuz i stay hungry
and you think im always angry
but often i get happy and relaxed
and im not thinking of the hardships of the past
they hold me strong up like a mast
the principles of my past
I aint distrassed
Although I often fast
I sleep well
I knock out at the bell
My dreams would be so swell
and i wake up, mind so fresh like a new dell
link up my tv
just so i can be
the couch potato me
and i guess yes im free
to not do what i need
but i pull out all the bullshit
as i try not to spit
on other people’s shit
but im climbing up out a pit
this is what i need
not what i want
you can stay there and taunt
but ill be here and ill flaunt
i sleep so well
» Posted By Jake On 07.13.2018 @ 7:18 pm
All this work is always so tedious
if only we could search all in an instant encyclopedia
and then we’ll just throw out all the fake media
its all a medium
living life in a tedium
thats how I read em
but even still i just wanna feed em
let me just get in a few more lines
im telling you, this was all written by design
i be following no straight line
and the road that we follow is just fine
cuz im selling and they buyin
and im winning while they just cryin
No matter how bad, let me tell you im tryin
to keep my family and my blood from dyin
i be running so fast i just go by and
and you so scared like you just seen a lion
im out here shining like a diamond
» Posted By Jake On 07.10.2018 @ 12:48 pm
I jump in like a heatwave
going in like boom, in a trance like im dance at a rave
no matter what, you can’t escape me, like youre my slave
i be standing over you like that old king Dave
I ride in on the heat
i be spitting on the beat
stretching out the concrete
anyone in the way will be beat
anyone standing shelterless on the street
i cook up all your meat
i fall down on you harder than the sleet
warming up your seat
to the point of defeat
bring me out my sheets
i’ll put it down so neat
energy and life growing like the wheat
» Posted By Jake On 07.09.2018 @ 11:41 am
The cat strayed further away from its house. It doesn’t know where to go. It decided to leave the house because the owner had been torturing it ever since that day, when one of the people in the house suddenly disappeared.
» Posted By jake On 05.03.2018 @ 9:50 pm
Lets get this flow on the go, lets get the show on the road. The penguin dives off the cliff shooting yards into the water. sky fall dive straight through, he shot her
awkward looking fella on land wobblin around
in the water, it glides, flapping its wings,
but in the air, no use to be found
what a laughable scene, i think that’s quite fair.
it’s flowing like the main of a mare
but dont worry if it dies cuz i got plenty of spares
we’ll kill em off in pairs
only if you dare
» Posted By Jake On 02.19.2018 @ 5:08 pm
Im a mother fucking penguin
dont fuck with me cuz youll never win
im so slippery, im fucking impossible to pin
i run so fast ill make your head spin
you come marching to my place making such a din
ill slap you upright the head with my fin
and put you in a can made of tin
to be fed to my fish to be fed to my twins
» Posted By Jake On 02.19.2018 @ 5:05 pm
Locked up, they won’t let me out. Akon has a great voice. Where is he now? He was at the top of all the charts in middle school and then he disappeared. Where are you, Akon?
» Posted By Jake On 01.19.2018 @ 12:34 pm
» Posted By jake On 05.22.2017 @ 9:35 am
The bunch of bananas were heavy, but we carried them anyways.
We were hungry, but we didn’t eat them. We were lonely, but we didn’t comfort each other. We accepted our lives as punishments and carried our load. Then we retreated, like from a loss, but from a game we couldn’t play.
» Posted By Jake On 01.20.2016 @ 12:16 am
» Posted By jake On 01.03.2016 @ 6:38 pm
A precise definition of something, a difficult and arduous task, or something that doesn’t allow any deviation. I need to know exactly how much it will cost to do something. A way to stop you from doing something. Don’t come back until you know exactly what you want to do. No more or less know, but exactly. A danger or a culture. In Japan they want the train to be exactly on time. There is no recourse unless you come at this exact time.
» Posted By jake On 01.03.2016 @ 6:38 pm
The herd grazed on the amber field. Just like the song, you could see the waves rolling across the plane, the plains, over the hills, glimmering in the sun, but unable to disturb the grazing buffalo.
» Posted By Jake On 01.25.2015 @ 7:54 pm
the pressing matter pressed Preston as he pressed the button for the bottom floor. the body hidden in his apartment was the least of his worries now. the taco in his pocket was now crumbled beyond comparable.
» Posted By Jake On 01.07.2015 @ 12:16 am
how on earth can i ever get over
when I’m having this much trouble
getting bits of you
out of my teeth.
» Posted By jake On 11.13.2014 @ 1:09 pm
This was the funniest thing I’d ever heard. Seriously. It had me in stitches. In fact, because of that incident with the threshing machine a few weeks earlier, my stitches actually came undone, burst, and caused me intense pain. But heck, was it funny.
» Posted By Jake On 10.14.2014 @ 1:55 pm
I was nobody when I was born, and I died as nobody. I looked my entire life, and somebodyhood never came to me. I don’t regret anything, but when people look at my life, they just don’t know how to tell what from what. I feel sad for them. I was happy and they never quite understood how someone who was no one could find happiness.
» Posted By Jake On 08.06.2014 @ 12:45 am
Well this here is the same word as i had yesterday
an alteration that i had was that yesterday my mind was altered for not having slept and it being late in the night
now my mind is different and altered
there are also alterations of my life and the environment around me
i lhope to alter it to not apath but full of diversity
» Posted By Jake On 07.17.2014 @ 2:09 pm
alterations change stream of conciousness
im so lost right about now
im going to college so everything will be so differenet
i dont even know how to do this
alterations is a real big word
all thats on my mind right now is apath and how i really dont want to do it
what is stream of conciousness
» Posted By Jake On 07.17.2014 @ 2:07 am
Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. A man in a trench coat stood, huddled next to the building, trying to stay out of the rain. “Are you Mr. Black?”
» Posted By Jake On 06.14.2014 @ 9:44 pm
The sound of heavy breathing coming from behind her closet door instilled her with the a stabbing fear. Her heart began racing. She backed slowly away, her hand still outstretched as if she was still clinging to the door knob.
» Posted By Jake On 06.11.2014 @ 10:27 am
Third place again. Always third. Never the first. Oh, God, it feels horrible; yes, somehow he is contented, but for the fact that third is almost always last, he wanted, for once, to be first, to be happy. He needed a reassurance that he isn’t as pathetic as he feels.
» Posted By jake On 02.07.2014 @ 10:43 pm
God said that we should take care of the windows and the Orphans and that this was true religion. I think it’s true and that it is something we can forget about a lot of the times. We need to constantly be looking outside ourselves to help those in need.
» Posted By Jake On 02.06.2014 @ 2:53 pm
The border between myself and reality is becoming too thick to penetrate.
The longer I lay here, the longer I try to last in this human form, the less attached I feel to the world around me.
I don’t think I’m going to survive the transition back, honestly. I feel… glitchy. I can see shapes, but not details. My ears are ringing. Nothing makes sense anymore. I don’t know what’s what.
I’ve never felt like this before.
I hear her voice distantly, but I don’t… I don’t know what she’s saying…
» Posted By Jake On 11.05.2013 @ 10:00 pm
the blue and red light shined bright as the intercepter
» Posted By Jake On 10.22.2013 @ 9:07 am
Walking into the living room was probably the best part of the day, because here, at least, you were safe. No one telling you that you were doing the job wrong, no one shoving you along the street in the rain. You strip down to just skin and wet hair, seeking out the one soul who missed you. When she finds you, she calls out to you with a sly smirk. Her whiskers droop a bit at the scent of rain, but she purrs at your touch anyway.
» Posted By Jake On 07.23.2013 @ 1:07 am
White, yellow, and so many different colors. You find them at the beach. I used to collect shells when I was younger and had an imagination. I always thought I would do things with them, but I never did. I used to love putting the shells upp to my ear and listening to the ocean. Of course that was nothing really, but I used to do it anyways.
» Posted By Jake On 06.19.2013 @ 8:01 pm
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All I wanted was a lullaby,
a simple song to ease my mind.
And guide me into gentle sleep,
I’d long forsaken counting sheep.
A whisper through my clouded thoughts,
To recall a peace I had forgot.
» Posted By Jake On 05.20.2013 @ 10:47 am