Comments Posted By Fred Fingery

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floorboard creaks when I lurch forwards for the open doorway, it sucks upward with my feet. It will be impossible to replace.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 12.03.2018 @ 6:38 pm


hailstorm puppy chow footprints in the muddy snowdrift, beams of headlight wobbling over the crystals, twinkling snow angles flutter and dance, the snow prints are hollow tubes of smoky cool.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.21.2018 @ 3:55 pm

hailstorm drumming my haircut plastered flat to my scalp, coiled heavy locks and dripping hairpins splashing my shoes, they are ruined and they’re so new, the sky is deep and gray.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.20.2018 @ 8:21 pm


silverware frosted and cool, varnish smells and curling paper lining, a string of dust and things, a squeak of metal and a squeeze of wood.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.19.2018 @ 7:02 pm


dined pasta shrubs calamari spritz, foregone conclusion and cactus flower fantasy, eat alone or eat at home, don’t forget to wipe the bone.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.18.2018 @ 5:42 pm


bedside table cool window swoosh, moonlight drapes, new detergent small and tight feet, cool against the skin, fresh pillowcases pressing into your cheekbones, roll over but don’t yank the blanket loose.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.16.2018 @ 7:44 pm


broke down filthy tugboat, lollipop prince and smarting ankles, beyond the splashing sphincter lives the dandelion king, his smile yellow and cracked with rot and marked with coffee smudges, and he bobs up and down.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.15.2018 @ 12:24 pm


Missed baseball clink wood swish, a smell of sand and leather, my fingers are cold roots twisted round the stinging bat, my elbows throb and my cleats teeter tot in the crispy, holey footprints.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 11.13.2018 @ 7:08 pm


tired trouble smother smooch, trees sagging springtime bloom, bluebirds fanning the damp grass, droopy feathers, the buzz of motor and the squeal of old truck, footprints in muds shrinking into themselves and slurching.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 05.05.2018 @ 5:44 am


holistic herbs twirling in your coffee cup, a spoon askant and smelling of copper, smelling of dried faucet water-on-metal, the fluff of powder dancing in the swish, and the health benefits of even looking at it.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.29.2018 @ 6:39 am


crowded room with flags and drizzle, porpoise dandelions in pots and troughs, come the cake and the balloons, and the old men with their piney scent, come the nilla wafers and the bag of doritoes, and the children aflutter and trampling beneath the slanted door shadow.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.14.2018 @ 5:18 pm


spikes strong cantaloupe bard tale. albeit another man, one not unlike you and I, was truly to blame. eating apples and crabapples and Adams apples too. Beware the social dictator that reads on 1s and 0s.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.08.2018 @ 8:22 am


flexing marble tabletop gloss. orange juice in a cool tall glass with smudges on the palm place. i can see the lamp and your face in the juice, your teeth and your eye-whites. reflecting and wrapped in glass.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 03.22.2018 @ 6:59 pm


deserted asteroid blue procedure. stardust slippery footprint coat. white suits and silver gleaming rocket. fins and a sparkling nosecone. A comet hurtling, turning our way. that’s no comet. My harpoon gun’s stuck to my utility belt.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 03.21.2018 @ 4:44 pm


fallen leaf lined coblestone path, bugs sliding fig leaf, damp dew run run, clicking tree tops and muscle headed raccoons pirouetting cross the bows, across dappling the pinwheeling fog.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 07.01.2017 @ 6:05 pm


key lock flower store upholstery. floral columns coffee stained textures, a smell of mold and varnish, a peel and a bubble and a finger hole, are there bugs inside, is there a plate of bugs between paper and wood?

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 06.30.2017 @ 8:20 am


radius of a head is five fingers thick, eye poke watery pink drip cross your cheek as you huff into the pillow, matte of hair, hairnet shadow o’er the tater tots, pizza day, square pizza with flakes of iced cheese mixed with the melted.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 06.27.2017 @ 6:13 pm


cold bottle brown gloss. clink clank thumb thumb. apron wearing barkeep loves his hops, knows his wheat, beard trim and black, cologne at record levels, it’s so much better at the place, have a six pack and tell your friends.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 06.26.2017 @ 8:08 am


rival antics. unicorn horn stealing. two men in line, a hatchet in each hand, sunglasses and dark coats, collars turned up. gravel scraping underfoot. a whack, a thump. a spray of unicorn tears.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 06.19.2017 @ 8:54 pm


mode operandi. rainbow trout flipping in a chocolate trickle. gurgle of Hershey rowboats bumping on the waves. mode man triconderoga. absolute certainty lizard sculpture calculus. fire in the seams.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 06.18.2017 @ 8:21 pm


framework lame truck driver with the hat with the bill that’s all fake-folded like how I did it as a kid to be more like my friend who did his natural-folded, who had his hat brim all arched like it came that way.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 05.21.2014 @ 8:52 am


sterile barren whitewashed sandy caps. catlike and foundering. a sun drenched ballyhoo, wild and prospering. Schoolbuses navigate the hercules drought maze. monsters round the corner left, but right’ll take you cyclops bound.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.17.2014 @ 4:12 pm


church bench varnish squeak. moist incense, columns of blood red candles and pricks of soft dancing light, organ humming always below the high high arches.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.04.2014 @ 8:38 am


welcoming committee shaking hands, bland smile. right this way sir. balloons twirling in strands of helium DNA. eyeballs plastered. Enter through here.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.02.2014 @ 7:19 am


interested fluffy stacks. butterball dribbling wet. hot waves of jungle toast cup clanking tasty. Order for the rest of us, I’m zonked. Coffee cup full again, better hold off on joe the rest of the day.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 04.01.2014 @ 7:33 am


disco ball globe mirror square on rattling motor. silver squares racing across the walls, a marathon of diamonds. smoke, hot humid chemical smog smell in my nose. jiggy jiggl, tipsy, I shouldn’t even be here.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 01.21.2014 @ 7:32 pm


biblical mess, storms, trees careening through jetties of blood and foam. Red skies, lightning bolts to skeletal frames. thunder smashing plates. A rumble in the earth, catching our balance, dropping things.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 01.16.2014 @ 5:42 pm


harm’s way. hot bullets hushing waves, ducking for cover, rolling into things. Grass spritzing your face. Background boom clap. Crawl like a caterpillar to the basement dugout. More bullets whizz by. Headfirst down the stairs.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 01.15.2014 @ 5:17 pm


counted clown. plastic clicky thing with the balls strikes and fouls. white plastic tacks, like little crowns. spinning numbers. jealous. I want that clicker. I want that clicker to say something other than one two three strikes.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 01.14.2014 @ 5:15 pm


sill lint cactus crumbs. daggers of paint, rips of wood. Little imaginary men running back and forth in the scream of white sunlight. cactuses one two three four. Under-watered, lacking in color. But there.

» Posted By Fred Fingery On 01.11.2014 @ 7:53 pm

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