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deafening

It was as loud and as silent as could be all at once. It was deafening to everyone and no one. The problem is that it has no origin or clear beginning or end for the that matter. This overwhelming sensation could make any sane man scream in agony and beg for his straight jacket; placed in a room fit for a clumsy toddler who hasn’t acquired his sea legs just yet. If it could stop and take a step back, maybe the beat of my heart would slow to a natural rhythm. But the god damn deafening beat won’t quit long enough to focus. Though, only I can hear it. Nothing yet everything all at once.

» Posted By Elly On 05.31.2015 @ 9:19 am

study

Now I have to study. Study for the classes that I really don’t want to be taking right now. Studying for the bullshit teachers that tell us “if you don’t study, you wont make it very far!” Bullshit, I know many people who have made it “far” without going to college. I hate this. I hate every minute of it and I could careless about having to study about bullshit Alexander the Great.

» Posted By Elly On 01.23.2015 @ 6:10 pm

montage

a montage is an assortment of pictures and or texts arranged in a manner which implicate a given theme, i dunno what to write now i have a bout 30 seconds left i’m shit at typing. I once completed a picture a text clippings montage from a series of fashion magazines on bedroom wall in the hopeful efforts of appearing interesting

» Posted By Elly On 06.06.2013 @ 5:49 pm

casting

Actors line up slowly to begin the session for casting of a new movie called “Rockets.” They have only 50 minutes till the casting begins.

» Posted By Elly On 05.22.2013 @ 2:17 am

dashboard

i want to eat an apple with a keyboard mango potato tooth why is this still going how does time flow? it is linear, no? cycle. energy. vicious energy narrowing and harrowing a path down past the bridges and tick marks down to the pit of time. i said, you do voluntary work, how many hours a week does it take to have structure? absolution? to think creatively?

» Posted By elly On 04.09.2013 @ 10:06 pm

signals

what I recieve in my head early in the day…..nice or mean? what will I be? Ok, kidding…signals from Mars…will I make breakfast or order in? I wish more people would use turn signals…really, How hard is it? Push it down and go left….up and go right. Use them losers……
I wish they could become more subliminal and easy for the dumb people, but I guess you have to have common sense for this too.

» Posted By elly On 03.07.2013 @ 4:13 am

think

NOTHING*****THAT IS WHAT I MEAN

» Posted By Elly On 02.05.2013 @ 10:42 pm

oh dear, I don’t know what to say.
I don’t wanna think
well, I have to prepare my IELTS.

» Posted By Elly On 02.05.2013 @ 10:37 pm

mass

I stayed up so I could watch the sun rise, to sit in silence, in the cold, in the rain, when the rest of campus is still asleep and the masses of students aren’t rushing from one set of walls to another, the sharp, clear breath of peace before the daily grind, and I am content.

» Posted By elly On 10.09.2012 @ 4:24 am

signs

I saw them, but I ignored them. There were days when it took a little too long to respond, and he’d sound distracted when he picked up. When the voice on the TV sounded too close and a little too familiar. The days when my best friend and my boyfriend were out of town always seemed to coincide– I should’ve seen it coming.

» Posted By elly On 10.01.2012 @ 7:02 pm

science

science is a subject that people teach us in school. science is what most of the world depend on, aometimes its what we trust over our own religious beliefs, over our own gods, science has gotten people killed in the olden days, scince is the truth, science is a lie, what is science ? noone knows…

» Posted By elly On 07.06.2012 @ 6:58 am

nest

the nest up in the tree represented hope for the little birds.
And that’s all i needed right now.

» Posted By Elly On 06.10.2012 @ 4:48 am

jelly

I used to tell my grandmother that she had to cover the jell-o when it was in the fridge, otherwise it got hard on top. Yuck! I still believe in the same advice, because I don’t like my jell-o hard on top. My grandmother also lives by that advice, and she makes some good jell-o.
I just think jelly=jello.
Came off really arrogant here. But hard jello?

» Posted By Elly On 06.06.2012 @ 11:22 am

treaty

I had to sign the treaty. I had no choice. It would solve all of our problems. It would solve the country’s problems, but who knew how many people would die because of it?

» Posted By Elly On 06.06.2012 @ 12:30 am

cap

WHY ARE ALL THE WORDS I GET CAP? IS THAT THE ONLY WORD THEY HAVE???

Anyways…

Her cap was bright blue, and I knew what that meant. The membership of the warzone, a place were violent and barbaric people gathered. It disgusted me. I tipped my cap to him, a green and orange one that showed my loyalty to the governer.

Oh those warzone members.

» Posted By Elly On 06.04.2012 @ 4:15 am

OMG like today I got the best cap ever! Its pink and purple with a red spot on top. I really don’t think that that red spot was ever supposed to be there because on the other caps in the store they were actually BLUE spots! WOAH! IKR! Anyways, its by Abercrombie and I bought it anyways, thinking that the red would go better with pink and purple, but guess what, it didn’t. Anyways, you might think that I was crazy to pink the red spot but really! I wasn’t!
So I went home to see my friend who lives in BaldSpot, CA. Its a pretty high class area. Yeah…
You would know believe what she said. She told me it looked HORRIBLE! I MEAN, REALLY, SHES MY FRIEND!
So I’m really mad at her.
REally mad.

» Posted By Elly On 06.04.2012 @ 3:12 am

separate

To separate a group of things is to put them apart. Ms. Odonell decided to separate our class up, and put us in different seats.

» Posted By Elly On 05.01.2012 @ 6:25 pm

radical

The waves hit him in the back like a punch in the face. Swirling, dancing, shoving him under the spray until the weight left him struggling and gasping at the salty water for air. When at last the hands grasped him, tugged him up, he laughed, lifted his head and roared into the air. “Radical, dude!”

» Posted By Elly On 10.21.2011 @ 11:15 am

warned

I warned you not to mess with me.
I warned you to not play with fire. But did you listen? No.
Don’t say I never warned you.
Thats what I did most of my time with you.

» Posted By Elly On 10.05.2011 @ 7:38 pm

Once apon a time a young boy was warned about a danger in his closet. he didnt believe anyone about this danger so he proceded to open his closet door. In he feel to a deep black abyss…of his dirty laundry.

» Posted By Elly On 10.05.2011 @ 6:14 pm

braid

i like braids wish i could make one with my hair since they have lengths different and it’s kinda difficult to braid my hair and look beautiful at the same time. too bad…

» Posted By elly On 10.01.2011 @ 12:17 pm

thunder

No smell nor sight to give it away, it hides in the black of the night. Yet the roar of the thunder gives it away, nothing else, just the crash that echoes all around. It consumes you, it’s everywhere.

» Posted By Elly On 07.26.2011 @ 8:14 pm

lightning

The storm battled throughout the night, pitch black but for the moments when the lightning flashed across the sky. A lone woman scurried through the streets without worrying about being seen. For who would be out besides herself on such a wretched night?

» Posted By Elly On 07.26.2011 @ 3:51 am

violent

My own violent tendencies start to scare me. It starts off as knocking over chairs and other items. I fear breaking something for the guilt that comes afterwards, but I am not myself in my anger. What if it gets worse? To breaking items, punching holes in walls, hurting people?

» Posted By Elly On 07.20.2011 @ 7:21 pm

cigarette

She slowly dragged the cigarette from her lips, elegantly holding it between two fingers. She let out a ringlet of smoke, watching it dance before her eyes.

» Posted By Elly On 07.16.2011 @ 8:04 pm

etiquette

“You must have proper etiquette, you must make me proud of my little girl, you must be PERFECT.” Laughter erupted from my friends as I mimicked my mother in a girly, high-pitched voice.

» Posted By Elly On 07.14.2011 @ 7:17 am

straw

He chewed on the straw in his mouth tipping his hat further down, trying to look cool. In reality, I though he just looked like a poser and a redneck. If he didn’t act like this, maybe he really would look intimidating to me. The muscles in his arm bulged.

» Posted By Elly On 07.11.2011 @ 1:07 pm

maroon

The maroon walls clashed only slightly with the forest green leather couch and chair set. The fireplace and large black TV stood almost side by side, the stairs to the upstairs separating them.

» Posted By Elly On 07.07.2011 @ 6:43 pm

cast

a lot of people cool people with nice hair celebrities famous people who star in movies or tv series people who work together friends or not sharing the same job living the same dream living in the same world.

» Posted By Elly On 07.07.2011 @ 10:05 am

The cast cowered together as she yelled. Sarah rolled her eyes in apparent anger; After all, how could she be so unreasonable? They had done everything they could, had they not? Ungrateful jerk, she thought bitterly.

» Posted By Elly On 07.07.2011 @ 3:16 am

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