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He picked up the silverware, looking at it with wide, ocean eyes as his brown hair moved in its metallic reflection.

» Posted By Elliot On 11.20.2018 @ 7:55 am


I never thought I’d live my dream, I’d always been afraid of moving forward with it but here I was, feet planted on a movie set with my hair styled accordingly and costume.


» Posted By Elliot On 09.17.2015 @ 1:31 pm


The bank manager couldn’t believe what he had saw when he came out of his office after he heard loud commotion. There were two men with masks on, and all his workers were laying on the ground, face down. They had large bags in hand with what was probably stolen money from the banks vaults.

» Posted By Elliot On 08.09.2015 @ 4:27 pm


It’s what I’m feeling every morning when the alarm goes of. Fatigue. It’s taking over my body, my mind, closing in around me, just like the walls of my bedroom. Sometimes I feel like the blanket is strangling me, trying to kill me. Make me stop breathing, make me stop living. But for the first time in a long, long time, I can feel that yeah, no, I don’t want to stop breathing.

» Posted By Elliot On 02.17.2013 @ 2:31 pm


the ocean swelled and i thought of your hair
the music swelled and i thought of your mouth
your lips
your teeth
your tongue
pressed against mine

» Posted By elliot On 01.30.2013 @ 2:49 pm


I must have that brownie. That’s the most common thought that 30 something women think as they peruse the pastry and chocolate aisle at their local See’s candies. They. Must. Have. It.

» Posted By Elliot On 01.07.2013 @ 9:23 pm


people are different, they are difficult to understand and differ in appearance and personality with each individual. A lot of people are ass holes, some more than others, but some are not, they are cool as. people.

» Posted By Elliot On 09.23.2012 @ 8:48 am


When I was a child I loved to visit railroads. My father would take me to see the trains cross the trestles and I would speak to the engineers. I recall how I would walk down the railroad at Rusk state park and have just wonderful time.

» Posted By Elliot On 07.03.2012 @ 7:54 pm


to believe in something to become a bigger person to grow into something glorious and powerful. Something beautiful, to evolve. To hatch into a new being, To become a higher student

» Posted By Elliot On 05.27.2012 @ 11:03 pm


i heard the noise. loud. powerful.
the car crashing into the bay.
the crash of the window as I broke it, the crash of the water as it poured into the car and I swam towards the light.
bubbles racing beside me. hearing my head break the surface and the bridge crashing down around me.

» Posted By Elliot On 05.03.2012 @ 7:08 pm


Sacred is something which is very important. It is often associated with religion as something holy.

» Posted By Elliot On 02.04.2012 @ 1:52 pm


Air is a funny thing. People always use words like “crisp” and “thick”, what do they mean? What’s really there?

» Posted By Elliot On 01.14.2012 @ 9:09 am

This morning, I had the best pancake ever. It was so crisp, I was just thinking “OH MY GOD HOW DOES IT GET SO CRISP! IT MUST BE ALIENS!” Anyhoozles… it was yummyful. YUMMYFUL I SAY!

» Posted By Elliot On 01.14.2012 @ 9:02 am


c’est de la marde mais j’ai pu sa a faire au moins :) je vais pu a l’école donc sa ne m’interesse plus vraiment que die d’autre j’ai passer à travers mon secondaire sans trop de problemes :D

» Posted By elliot On 11.22.2011 @ 1:14 pm


i don’t need evidence. i see what i see. i know what i know. i am full of shit. but that feels good. clean. conceited. yeah, i’m full of shit.

» Posted By elliot On 09.26.2011 @ 11:40 am


Was on a train once, along time ago. The rain, i like to call it, happened to be one of the longest trains in history. I lost my leg on a train, all i remember was,”AHHH!! My F£”$in leg!” The next time i went on a train, i needed a ramp.

» Posted By Elliot On 06.16.2011 @ 6:36 am


A glowing star so bright,
Will often shine with all it’s might,
I wish I could hold it against me,
And feel the power of around me

» Posted By Elliot On 05.12.2011 @ 11:44 am


My first feelings are ive already done this word console, but nevertheless ill continue to write and not think. the playstation network is still down and it’s not fun using my playstation 3 console without the playstation network. damn hackers. they had to ruin it for everyone!

» Posted By Elliot On 05.11.2011 @ 9:59 am

When he looked into the console he saw a beautiful girl just sat there by the lake. She obviously wasnt aware that anyone was looking. She looked so peaceful the sunlight was glisining and glittering all around the grass and trees and illuminating her face. He wanted to go into the world and be with the girl, but he couldnt…

» Posted By Elliot On 05.11.2011 @ 9:55 am


Whenever you are in a bad place for example angry or sad it is often helpful to have an oulet, something you can use to paint your feelings onto without any repurcussions.

» Posted By Elliot On 02.22.2011 @ 5:35 am


poor sheep. never saw it coming. on the brightside, mr. or mrs. sheep, you make one hell of a sweater, and thanks for keeping me warm.

» Posted By elliot On 02.16.2011 @ 5:06 pm


who doesn’t like it? Really…it’s chocolate. Doesn’t it go with anything? Yeah, I’m talking to you too onions.

» Posted By elliot On 02.15.2011 @ 11:13 pm


in figurative language, we can say that controllers can either be to control objects or people. the truth is that in a world conditioned as ours few can perceive when they are being conditioned to do as they wish. It is like we have a enormous puppeteer that we are not aware of.

» Posted By Elliot On 02.05.2011 @ 1:03 pm


I walked up to near to her. I could hear her breath. I hesitated. I walked away. I never saw her again.

» Posted By Elliot On 07.30.2010 @ 10:54 am


I feel like such a nerd saying this.
But whenever I hear the word mineral. I think of video games where you have to collect minerals, to build machines to destroy the world.

» Posted By Elliot On 04.23.2010 @ 8:32 pm


He was a great teddy bear.
My aunt gave me Mr. Bear when I went under the knife.
For many years he was castaway to the top of my closet.
Until I gave him away to achieve dying affection.

» Posted By Elliot On 04.19.2010 @ 5:58 pm


I always like to steal Propel water from Mike.
Not because I think I deserve it, but because I hate Mike.
Normally I don’t hate people, but his positive negativity kills me.

» Posted By Elliot On 04.18.2010 @ 9:50 pm


the problem was layed out in front of me, its axis so clearly marked. the grid paper was freshly printed, and smelled of ink and trouble.

» Posted By elliot On 03.19.2009 @ 10:37 pm


i cant resist the urge you give me to grab you and kiss you. hold your ribs and frisk you.

» Posted By elliot On 09.19.2009 @ 8:39 am


she guided me through a tunnel that had words for walls. they were black, they were white, they were warm, cold, cutting, collaborative, calm.

» Posted By elliot On 09.18.2009 @ 2:20 pm

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