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The game was on. It was a ruthless one. No one got physically hurt but many were capable of getting hurt. The master stood up and called for all to be prepared. In a moment’s time, another one would be called to sacrifice the ultimate sacrifice.

» Posted By Edt On 12.19.2012 @ 8:22 am


It was higher than it used to be. The teenager looked up at it and wondered how it got there. After some time passed by he decided it must have been another person. He jumped up to try and grab it at its corner but it was impossible. How was he going to get it down?

» Posted By Edt On 12.05.2012 @ 7:13 am


It was an interesting object. Seen everyday though not really noticed. The little child lifted up its arm and reached for it. Her dad pulled her away from it and she cried. The object was left laying there waiting for someone to pick it up.

» Posted By Edt On 12.03.2012 @ 7:43 am


The person decided to cook. It was a simple thing to do, something he had perfected over many years of living on his own. The guests waited in anticipation as smells from the kitchen filled the living room. The food was definitely going to be unique and tasty, everyone thought.

» Posted By Edt On 12.01.2012 @ 11:36 pm


The square object lay forgotten on the dirty floor. In it was an immense wealth of knowledge. A person tripped on it, thinking it was just a toy on the floor. No one knew

» Posted By Edt On 11.24.2012 @ 8:34 am


The persons were all there to write all over the wall. Some were silly and some were serious. It was interesting how some sounded like strangers while others wrote like lifelong friends. The wall was beautiful, with all the people who participated.

» Posted By Edt On 06.21.2012 @ 8:57 am


It was a hassle. All this had to get done in a very short amount of time. What was to be done? She panicked as she looked at the tall pile of folders and wondered what would happen in the she had left.

» Posted By Edt On 06.01.2012 @ 9:19 am


The stunt lasted for 30 minutes. Everyone held their breath as they watched the man leap from one building to another. Others wouldn’t do it, not for anything. Then the man walked down to everyone gave everyone a smile

» Posted By Edt On 05.27.2012 @ 10:57 am


There it was. The pile. When would she ever go through it. She thought for a moment of all the vermin that had made the pile a home. Slowly, she approached it and lifted something with two fingers. A spider came out and jumped to the floor

» Posted By Edt On 05.20.2012 @ 9:08 am


The insect made her feel disgusting. Its legs crawled against her skin and no matter how much she tried she couldn’t get the image of it out of her mind. She was glad it fell to the ground but now wondered if there were more.

» Posted By Edt On 05.15.2012 @ 3:09 am


he was lending his heart to her. to take care of it for a while. in time he would want it back. to destroy and let turn black. to disappear into nothingness. to forget. to die

» Posted By Edt On 05.13.2012 @ 12:59 am


it was tasting different from what she anticipated. the mixture of the spices gave it a taste that was not quite she wanted. she removed her secret spice and dashed it on the meal and it was just perfect!

» Posted By Edt On 05.08.2012 @ 8:55 am


The entree was delicious. Much better than was expected. They then moved on and enjoyed the night after taking the rest of the course. They still talked about how the food was delicious and agreed to try it out sometime again under the stars in their favorite place.

» Posted By Edt On 04.23.2012 @ 1:26 am


The swan floated on the lake, looking like a majestic creature from another world. It glided, leaving behind small waves in the water and approached her. It let out a dream-like sound and took her away into its world.

» Posted By Edt On 04.21.2012 @ 3:17 am


The desk lay infront of her. it was empty except for the pencil. she knew she was supposed to be here but didn’t know why. slowly she filled it with everything she needed and awaited the visitor. the meeting would go well, she said to herself. she gathered her courage and waited

» Posted By Edt On 04.16.2012 @ 2:09 am


he was enticed by her. he struggled to get away but there was something about her. with all the things people said about her, he wondered if he was making the right decision. he believed only he understood her. understood that behind the rumors there was a beautiful person underneath

» Posted By Edt On 04.15.2012 @ 8:44 am


it had bitten her. she stared at the bloody mark it left on her skin. what was she supposed to do? if only she could remember. she started feeling dizzy and tried to think of what to do. she hoped it would not kill her in the 20 minutes it would take her to reach civilization

» Posted By Edt On 04.12.2012 @ 9:06 am


the branches littered the forest floor. all around them were leaves of orange, brown, yellow green and red. together they made a potpourri of beauty. something lightly stepped on the branches…

» Posted By Edt On 04.08.2012 @ 6:21 am


the ruby diamond lay there. it glistened with such tremendous beauty. noone touched it. it was too beautiful to look away from. the beautiful color held everyone’s gaze. ruby

» Posted By Edt On 04.07.2012 @ 9:23 am


she was willful. that one day things would change no matter how impossible that would be. that there would be a difference and things would be sunnier and easier. that there would be more happiness. that all the damaged caused to her wouuld be undone. willful.

» Posted By Edt On 04.06.2012 @ 9:10 am


The hood. She didn’t want to put it on, but she soon changed her mind. Underneath it she felt hidden from the world. Noone looked at her as she walked down the street.

» Posted By Edt On 04.05.2012 @ 8:56 am


it flipped. there was nothing to be done about it. noone knew it would be able to. now everyone stared at it, wondering what was to be done. there was a deep silence as everyone scrutinized it. they should have been more prepared.

» Posted By Edt On 04.04.2012 @ 9:28 am


the pastel colors made a beautiful effect on the canvas. as i continued to draw, an image of a person came to life. with my fingers i smudged the lines and shadows into place until a work of art unfolded in front of me. the more hours i spent, the more it became the image i wanted it to be

» Posted By Edt On 03.16.2012 @ 11:37 am


I was suppose to recycle, but i didn’t…I thought about all the plastic bottles that would someday count up to thousands simply because i did not put the empty water bottles in the recycling bin. I really ought to recycle…something small like that makes a big difference

» Posted By Edt On 03.12.2012 @ 9:44 am


the gourmet meal seemed very appetizing. they all took a look at everything on the long table and breathed in a sigh of anticipation. next thing that happened was that someone came in to tell them all to begin

» Posted By Edt On 03.11.2012 @ 7:09 am


The brunch was absolutely delicious. Everything she wanted and knew she should not eat all the time…pancakes, cinnamon rolls, french toast, sausages…she had a big smile on her face and was glad she made it all for this special moment.

» Posted By Edt On 03.09.2012 @ 8:08 am


The demonstration lasted for three minutes. In that short amount of time, different things went through the mind…he actually got it. The demonstration opened his mind about a lot of things. Suddenly, it was all clear and he was going to be okay now.

» Posted By Edt On 03.08.2012 @ 8:01 am


she would swing on the tree…looking into the valley below. She saw the flowers and the orange trees and wanted to let go and dive into the forever that waited below. a bird flew by and she wondered if that would ever be her

» Posted By Edt On 03.07.2012 @ 8:13 am


the answers were right there in front of the teacher. it didn’t make sense that all the students couldn’t get them right. he stared out the window and wondered how to make them all understand this book. he came up with an idea and it seems to be one that will worked well

» Posted By Edt On 08.11.2011 @ 11:48 am


the bulb had gone out. he slowly went up the stairs and searched the other room for more. with frustration, he realized he’d have to go to the store. the store with the owner he did not like.

» Posted By Edt On 08.06.2011 @ 6:10 pm

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