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pencils standing scattered
in a metal cup
placed in no orderly fashion

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 07.25.2012 @ 6:36 am


light the fuses and stand back
hear the hiss and pop
watch the spark travel
slow and sinuous
dancing across the pavement

tick tick


» Posted By Domiknitrix On 07.23.2012 @ 12:39 pm


on patrol on the edge of the desert
soldiers watch
waiting and wondering
praying and hoping
longing for words from home
words of support
and love
and kindness

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 07.19.2012 @ 1:32 pm


just one more minute
let me hold you a while longer
don’t slip from my grasp
don’t move away
I can’t bear to be separated
just one more minute, please
I don’t want to leave this dream

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.23.2012 @ 5:24 am


there mirror of my mind
is broken
like me
it has fractures where
there should be complete
disjointed thoughts
consume my attempts
to look to the past
and make sense
of a life not well lived

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.22.2012 @ 5:10 am


there are faces
visions of souls
persons unimagined
and yet somehow, they’re known
treasured to my heart
clasped to my breast
like so many thorny roses
and sweet-smelling lilies

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.20.2012 @ 1:43 pm


being away from you is exquisite
being with you is oppressive
I think anything else would be
like the center of a peach
the pits

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.20.2012 @ 5:06 am


I’m not too keen
on the words I have to say
but they must be expressed
sooner rather than later
else this pain will
keep on

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.18.2012 @ 11:33 am


my legs are like jelly
when I stand from the bed
reaching for the robe
my head spinning
I stumble and giggle
and reach out to steady myself

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.06.2012 @ 2:56 pm


emptying her pockets
she comes across a single earring
the mate lost
long forgotten
she stares, contemplating
and puts it back

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 06.05.2012 @ 4:38 am


relationships are bot born
but they are built.
they have an architecture all their own
moments building on moments
each level dependent on that which came before.
strong ones have solid foundations
upon which every successive story rests.

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.29.2012 @ 2:10 pm


Her fingers twist a single key
tumblers slide
and release.
Those same fingers reach
into the open
She retrieves a single coin
flips it, heads or tails;
it is, she loses.

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.25.2012 @ 7:37 am


i monitor my emotions
seeking any change
praying for improvement

you monitor my movements
seeking to limit me
preying on my heart

there is no good result to this examination
no pleasant end
no happy result
there is only frustration and anger
sadness and pain

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.22.2012 @ 12:27 pm


for peace
seeking one
more path to take
searching for the true pirate’s treasure hoard

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.21.2012 @ 12:13 pm


you are like a calling
I can’t avoid indulging in you
I can’t pretend I don’t want you
I can’t deny my hunger for you
you make my body sing your praises

oh chocolate, how divine you are!

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.21.2012 @ 4:39 am


cover all your bases
seek an answer for every question
but more will come

planning and plotting
all your thoughts tumbling
over and under

there’s no one right way
there’s no easy answer
just jump

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.18.2012 @ 12:57 pm


you backspace through your words
but it doesn’t erase them from existence
you only prevent me from knowing them
but it doesn’t erase the thought from being

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.17.2012 @ 1:15 pm


I thought I knew a lot about romance until I met you.
I thought I knew a lot about seduction until you walked by
with that smile making blue eyes sparkle
with that laugh that makes my toes curl

I thought I knew a lot about temptation until you touched my hand
I thought I knew a lot about desire until you asked for a kiss
with that smile melting my heart
with that laugh making me tremble

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.16.2012 @ 1:07 pm


no, a purr
soft and deep
sending trembles through
my body, spreading outward
from the space between my thighs.

get your mind out of the gutter
it’s from the motorcycle’s engine.

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.15.2012 @ 1:08 pm


you are nothing more than an insect
a gnat
a fly
a worm
(are worms insects?)
you shouldn’t have the power to infect me
to inflame me
to annoy me
to incite me

more’s the pity that you do.
at least until I squash you.

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.14.2012 @ 1:34 pm


here you are
lending an ear to my troubles
a sounding board for my frustrated heart
here I sit
abusing that which I love
for the sake of my fragile sanity

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.12.2012 @ 2:53 pm


this moment is primitive
primal, you spoke
this feeling, so very present
protection from a ravaging world

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.11.2012 @ 9:21 am


there is a thrill in learning
in tasting the knowledge
letting it linger upon our lips
spread across our tongues
slowly coating our receptors
guiding us to know

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.07.2012 @ 6:14 pm


fingers dance across my skin
as if my flesh were the strings of some exquisite instrument
touch draws sounds from my lips
giving voice to sensation
giving life to adoration
giving a soul to this complication

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.07.2012 @ 4:31 am


hold your head upright
not uptight
look before you, never behind
set your gaze on the future,
but not so distant you forget about today
live, and love, and learn
remember but never regret

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.04.2012 @ 11:13 am


out of earshot they sit
cradled within eachother’s arms
rain falls in curtains
a fire crackles and snaps
but that warmth isn’t what they feel

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.03.2012 @ 8:06 pm


thought you are there
and I am here
our hearts, our souls are not separate
we cannot be driven apart so easily
we cannot be outside one-another’s existence
you are my life, my breath
you are the smile on my lips
the warmth in my chest
between my thighs
you drive me to live
to become a better woman
to open myself and expose my soul

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 05.01.2012 @ 2:06 pm


this hallowed ground bears witness to a glorious song
voices lifted in chorus
ancient stones and spring’s new blooms
joined together in celebration of life both new and renewed

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 04.30.2012 @ 11:25 am


her alibi was weak
she didn’t care
she wished only to spend those few moments
to touch that warm hand one more time
longing showed in her smile
her brown eyes
the playful flip of her hair
and the expressive gestures of her hands

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 04.30.2012 @ 10:27 am


on my wall there is a dark spot in the pain where I used to keep a poster
the image of a famous rock star
looming over me in my sleep
invading my dreams
it’s gone now, but that girlish fantasy still lingers

» Posted By Domiknitrix On 04.26.2012 @ 5:31 pm

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