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this is the sound her stomach makes
a low rumble
the revving of an engine,
preparing for the most mundane of races
a lower level event
with acid and old banana and a bit of popcorn
this the sound we all make
agitating for the same old same
agitating for change

» Posted By Dawn On 08.20.2018 @ 3:59 pm


wanting a new job that makes me satisfied. How i feel right now about finding that new job and getting into the company i want.

» Posted By dawn On 01.09.2018 @ 3:12 pm


filling up my cup
it is cylindrical
a warm brown
dented in spots
but trying to fill itself up

with water, with wine, with questions
filling up my cup
i do the work
one sip at a time

» Posted By Dawn On 01.05.2017 @ 11:50 am


MY life is one big meme. Ups, downs, twists and turns. Laughter, sadness and profanity. Everyone sees me on the outside as funny but on the inside I’m crying. My life is one big meme. Let me out.

» Posted By Dawn On 09.03.2016 @ 3:40 am


With one fluid, graceful motion, he lifted her hand and allowed his lips to connect with her fragrant, supple skin, for a fleeting moment that would be remembered as their first–and last–kiss.

» Posted By Dawn On 07.20.2016 @ 7:50 am


She sank her teeth into the cactus, ignoring the bleeding and needles that were now in her mouth, desperation driving her to attempt to get to the water inside of the cactus. Her skin was baggy and pallid and she was as thin as a toothpick, clearly malnourished.

» Posted By Dawn On 10.24.2014 @ 10:42 pm


Criminal activity. Prison. Jail bird. Jail bait. Stripes. Brutality. Wrong-doing. Stretch. Bad food. Rebellion. Time spent repenting. Being screwed over by the screws. Porridge.

» Posted By Dawn On 09.28.2014 @ 2:07 pm


Now is the time to broaden your horizons, no matter you age, location, or gender. You should always seek to learn, grow and discover something every single day. You can never know enough.

» Posted By Dawn On 09.26.2014 @ 2:09 pm


bluegrass i sbeautiful abd sweet and lovely ad we love bluegrass a lot dont we kids?

» Posted By dawn On 09.07.2013 @ 4:46 pm

bluegrass i sbeautiful abd sweet and lovely ad we love bluegrass a lot dont we kids?

» Posted By dawn On 09.07.2013 @ 4:46 pm


Her intent hadn’t been to keep the truth from him; it had been to save him from it, from the pain, from the words he wouldn’t want to say, the thoughts he wouldn’t want to think and the feelings he wouldn’t want to feel.

» Posted By Dawn On 07.04.2013 @ 6:20 am


As she repeatedly strung in order – popcorn, cranberry, popcorn, cranberry – she found herself replaying Christmases past in her mind. Memories happy and sad replayed like a highlights reel until the garland was finished and securely wrapped around the tree.

» Posted By Dawn On 06.17.2013 @ 8:17 am


She liked to make her eyes cross so she could watch as the tiny brown specks and the white paper would shrivel under the ring of fire and decompose as she inhaled the sweet vapor they created.

» Posted By Dawn On 06.11.2013 @ 3:45 pm


The neon lights beamed from the storefronts along both sides of the street, beckoning him to pass through to the shadowy alley at the street’s end.

» Posted By Dawn On 05.30.2013 @ 5:53 am

Pink and green and bright yellow! Wild colors, summer colors, bright and beautiful just like my daughters. Colors that make me happy and tha

» Posted By Dawn On 05.29.2013 @ 4:31 pm


One by one, each bottle shattered as it came in contact with the pavement. She was unconcerned with the sharp shards that flew in all directions as she continued to grab bottles from the stack beside her and hurl them into the street.

» Posted By Dawn On 05.27.2013 @ 5:38 am


Beware of the dog. He is a dangerous beast. This one time, I saw him leap the fence to attack a kid on a bike! Cage that beast up forever! I can’t even walk past the house. :(

» Posted By Dawn On 03.22.2013 @ 1:15 am


we breathed fire back then
our legs were sweaty and we kept running
nothing could keep us from moving
our feet lay waste to the flames licking our toes
we kept burning on
hot, spicy, young jalapeno peppers we were
ready to taste life
and give life a taste of us

» Posted By Dawn On 03.05.2013 @ 9:43 pm


AAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!! Open availability sucks!!!!! It’s my time away from my husband, my little girl, my life. It’s all I can do not to throw in the towel.

» Posted By Dawn On 12.11.2012 @ 1:42 pm


Although I like to win, I don’t mind a draw now and then. My partner specially likes it when we draw at poker. He can’t wait to sit down at the poker table and draw those cards. Me I prefer a draw at spades. My mum draws cartoons. They’re not funny though – macabre actually. I draw stars sometimes. I wish I had an empty draw for my papers, but no such space exists in the dollhouse. Draw is ward backwards and I hate hospitals. I used to draw for a living but I’m too old now. Draw, draw a jackdaw. Jackdaws are ugly birds. Draw a straight line, I dare you.

» Posted By Dawn On 11.11.2012 @ 2:53 pm


I dont know what i want to major in. I just know i love currently, school is hard, and im barely considering college right now.Maybe journalism or something, but then people tell me that it wont make any money. I hate the idea of school, why cant i just go without it and be happy/

» Posted By Dawn On 11.07.2012 @ 6:01 pm


i learned how to sail when i was a kid. I was in 8th grade when i learned how to sail. it was hard. i was afraid that i would capsize. I was afraid that if i capsized I wouldn’t be able to get my

» Posted By dawn On 10.24.2012 @ 12:00 pm


Before I knew…how to love, laugh, grow-challenge myself.
Before I knew how to help others, make my own desisions and dream.
Before, there was sorrow, pain, disappointment and darkness.

Now there is love.

» Posted By Dawn On 09.25.2012 @ 5:55 am


I woke up, surprised by my husband with a nice breakfast. He presented me with two perfectly, fried eggs, still in the pan and a class of orange juice with some toast on the side. I asked “Why?”

» Posted By Dawn On 09.14.2012 @ 12:59 pm


salvation is what everyone wants and needs and few get. in all kinds of ways mankind is looking for salvation. the need to be saved is in every depressed teenage girls soul every single mom…

» Posted By Dawn On 08.29.2012 @ 7:31 pm


Christina dwelled on the idea of David leaving her on her doorstep with a kiss. Her stomach swelled with happiness.

» Posted By Dawn On 06.24.2012 @ 2:32 am


The two friends chatted up a storm the other day. They discussed many topics including the weather, school, and the latest fashion, but the one topic that stood out from all the rest was the latest development on the Williams Trial.

» Posted By Dawn On 06.08.2012 @ 2:25 pm


Shampoo is a necessity. But sex is only a delicacy. Us humans take everything as a necessity.

» Posted By Dawn On 06.02.2012 @ 5:33 pm


Her problem was that she did not know how to seek help. There was no one to ask. There was no where to go. So this dilemma was simply something she would have to work through herself.

» Posted By Dawn On 05.28.2012 @ 12:40 pm


That stunt he pulled by throwing himself down the stairs was ridiculous. “I fell,” he claimed. Right. Putting the spotlight on him instead of where it should have been is what he was doing. How dare he ruin my wedding day? How dare he?! But there it was. Done.

» Posted By Dawn On 05.26.2012 @ 4:58 pm

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