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My body froze.
My breathing stopped.
My eyes widened.
I knew exactly what was going on. My parents were both in Hawaii, but this strange man said they were at home. It was a lie, I knew it without a doubt. No one was around, no help. Should I run? But, with further inspection, I realized there was nowhere to run to. Just a long gravel road that went on for miles. His white van was covered in dust and small rock particles. My only real option was to get in, and see what would happen.

» Posted By Chloe Hartje On 03.02.2016 @ 8:21 am


I looked ahead into the shadowy distance. My mind was swirling one hundred different ways. The limbs in my body were trembling with fear and exhaustion. Sweat was the taste of my mouth, as terrible tasting as a moldy piece of cheese. There was a deafening ringing sound distinguishing in my ear. People told me I was lucky to be alive, but I thought otherwise.

» Posted By Chloe Hartje On 12.16.2015 @ 8:13 am

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