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When I moved back to town the family feud began. Today we are strangers, living in a strange land…tomorrow? Who knows what tomorrow shall bring?

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 11.04.2010 @ 8:12 am


The echo of the siren wailed through the night, announcing that something was terribly wrong. I found her in her bed, bottle of pills in her hand, computer open beside her. Word was up on the screen with one short sentence. I’m sorry, I just can’t do it anymore.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.27.2010 @ 1:41 pm


He stroked me with his rough hands, his whiskers stinging my face. I was only a child, yet he stole my innocence as a thief in the night.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.21.2010 @ 2:59 pm


Whipping in and out of the gusty winds, the sails nearly tearing, I raise the telescope to see if I can spot any sign of land.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.17.2010 @ 4:49 am


Death is coming home today. I feel his icy fingers as they twist around my ailing heart. I shudder and don a warmer sweater, but there will be no stopping him. I can already smell his decaying breath.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.15.2010 @ 3:55 pm


Under the down blanket, next to the fireplace, snuggled in flannel is where you’ll find me this winter.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.12.2010 @ 12:51 pm


I saw his face in the sunlight, and he bowed his head. I wandered down the beach toward him, but he continued to elude me.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.10.2010 @ 2:06 pm


I can’t tell you the day I noticed it…all the chatter in my head drowned out any thoughts I could ever hope to hang onto.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.09.2010 @ 4:19 pm


It was all I had left, those memories. They paraded through the dark corridors of my mind, taunting me, torturing me with the scent of lost innocence.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.08.2010 @ 2:36 pm


It was quiet in the autumn woods. The creek sang and the crickets chirped into the night. I climbed the tallest tree and waited for the moon to take her flight.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.06.2010 @ 3:21 pm


I didn’t have to walk away, but it was all I could do. She looked at me with eyes that said she didn’t care, she wouldn’t be there for me anymore.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.06.2010 @ 6:22 am


I lay on the cool ground looking up at the trees and buildings that surrounded me, feeling very small. Am I as really insignificant as I feel?

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.04.2010 @ 12:13 pm


She slinks into the darkness of the night, searching for any kind of trouble to get into. This is the tale of my cat, Maggie.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 10.03.2010 @ 1:12 pm


I often wallow in the songs of yesterday, feeling those old feelings and all that jazz…

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.28.2010 @ 6:39 am


I am stuck in the dark corridors of my mind, hostage to the shadows and memories that taunt me through long hours. Only death can set me free.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.25.2010 @ 5:17 am


I searched forever for you, still I look, but know that without help, I will be lost for eternity.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.24.2010 @ 5:58 am

I needed you, and you were there. I didn’t have to ask for help, you already knew. So when I hanged myself today, where were you?

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.23.2010 @ 1:03 pm


Without her I would be lost. She is the sun that awakens me, the breeze that rocks me to sleep.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.22.2010 @ 10:31 am

She was without a heart, that bitch. She took what I had and threw it in my face. She screwed my brother and my sister. How’s that for evil?

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.21.2010 @ 12:43 pm


It wasn’t supposed to be this way. I was going to wear my tie dyed shirt and holey jeans, she was supposed to wear nothing at all. And now….it’s all gone formal – she’s wearing clothes….

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.21.2010 @ 6:37 am


Down the long, winding road, past the old gas station on the right and beyond the junk yard…that’s where we met. The old motel still holds those secrets from yesteryear…

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.19.2010 @ 12:39 pm


I didn’t know then what I know now. I didn’t know how profound the experience would be. When the dark becomes light there is a moment of pure clarity that shakes the very soul.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.17.2010 @ 1:07 pm


There was no warning, nothing that would have given me a clue that she was already involved. I gave her everything I had, and watched it drop at my feet as she turned away to her true lover.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.16.2010 @ 12:35 pm


He laughed as he looked at himself in the mirror. “Chuckles is my name,” he said, “and murder is my game.”

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.15.2010 @ 2:02 pm


The anxiety washed over me in waves as i sat alone in the room. Self- loathing rose to the surface and I punched the wall.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.14.2010 @ 1:34 pm


I rummaged through the pouch, searching for the keys. No luck. Stranded in a dark, empty parking lot, I shuddered in the cold. Just last week there had been a murder not 2 blocks away. Now what?

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.13.2010 @ 1:54 pm


She craved the warmth of a warm den, with a fire crackling and meat cooking on a stick. Yet she kept trudging through the knee deep snow.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.13.2010 @ 6:21 am


I walked along the deserted road, looking all around me. Where does it lead? Where am I going? Who will I be when I get there? The earth tilted on it’s axis as I came to a crossroads. Confused, I simply stood in silence and listened to the wind.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.09.2010 @ 4:59 am


I ran through the shadows, wisps of memories brushing against my mind, silent screams from yesteryear banging on my ears. Calling out to the darkness, I surrender to the pain, I surrender to the march of nightmares assaulting my tender soul.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.07.2010 @ 6:40 am


We never knew each other, though we were only miles apart. Our parents never talk to each other as the years have not been kind to them. Strangers in a world of strangers, dear cousin, I do not recognize your face.

» Posted By BasedOnFiction On 09.06.2010 @ 7:34 am

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