Comments Posted By Bart

Displaying 1 To 29 Of 29 Comments


Steady was the hand of time as it finally pierced her heart this winter.

» Posted By Bart On 08.01.2016 @ 4:12 pm


This encounter was the last one of its kind. Thank God. I’ll never be able to look another woman in the face again, if I do I’ll shame the entire family. Maybe it’ll be worth it?

» Posted By Bart On 02.23.2016 @ 9:36 am


The ground beneath his feet was hard, flat, sun dried earth. Water had not touched the soil in generations. A farmer in the distance was trying to till the earth, but his plow had broken. Leaning down in the sun, his shadow was cast long on the ground. His spirit was breaking. Many summers too long.

» Posted By Bart On 10.20.2014 @ 8:46 pm


nobody knows what it’s really like to be me. nobody asks me how I’m doing but yet I have so many people in my world. it’s crazy how it can be so crowded with people who are supposed to love me but don’t. nobody cares about what I do or if I was here. nobody cares.

» Posted By Bart On 08.06.2014 @ 8:51 am


families are perpetually portrayed as big happy families. always. it’s never how it truly is. lies betrayl are things that exist. although they don’t make for the most wholesome intriguing ratings it’s the truth. the world covers up the truth for ratings. fuck the world and the commodities.

» Posted By Bart On 07.28.2014 @ 12:40 pm


The world and life are a series of plays. Sometimes we’re the headliner other times we’re the supporting cast, but we’re always a part of the the story

» Posted By bart On 02.10.2013 @ 5:26 pm


how about it today we are discussing about gone. we have seen from the reference of ours from the oxford dictionary and conclude that the time it seems is almost gone

» Posted By bart On 10.13.2012 @ 3:55 am


it is not wet today – I think if it would be wet I wouldn’t be here right now.

OHHHHH wet is such as funny word and can describe a bunch of different conditions.

I don’t like it when its too wet though

I must admit that I do like it when its dry and say about 70 degrees

» Posted By Bart On 10.11.2012 @ 6:37 pm


Pressed for time and money Wally decides to rob a drive thru so he could eat lunch as he goes

» Posted By Bart On 09.25.2011 @ 4:26 pm


The scene was straight out of foggy London and a Sherlock Holmes mystery including the sea port.

» Posted By Bart On 09.22.2011 @ 4:28 pm


The old man clung to his pouch as if it contained all his worldly possessions. It did.

» Posted By Bart On 09.16.2011 @ 5:30 pm


On account that my account is low I must ask for a complete accounting from my accountant.

» Posted By Bart On 09.14.2011 @ 5:38 pm


Star light and moon light hover as beacons through the night.

» Posted By Bart On 09.12.2011 @ 7:19 am


Aimed and missed; the story of my life.

» Posted By Bart On 08.19.2011 @ 6:27 pm


Such a common idea, total honesty, but so rare.

» Posted By Bart On 06.30.2011 @ 6:24 pm


Never to be considered too intense about anything is not the best to hope for. Intensity is needed .

» Posted By Bart On 06.22.2011 @ 6:39 pm


Almost is one of those words that can leave a scar. How
often does it convey a sense of incompleteness.

» Posted By Bart On 03.07.2011 @ 6:01 pm


The only needs one must have are the basic ones. All others are just fluff. The trick is knowing what the basic ones are.

» Posted By Bart On 03.02.2011 @ 5:45 am


He couldn’t undo the tangle he got himself into. But, he really didn’t want to. It’s been ages his he dreamed up his little plan.

» Posted By Bart On 02.17.2011 @ 6:50 pm


The grey steel microphone stared at her as she trembled to find her voice. Gripping it in her hand, closing her eyes, forgetting all she let it wail.

» Posted By Bart On 02.13.2011 @ 5:52 pm


Hay stack or not, I’m gonna find that damnable needle. Start small and keep looking. It’s gotta be in here somewhere

» Posted By Bart On 02.12.2011 @ 5:56 am


Revolt may seem like the answer but the outcome is never know. Maybe better may not. The chance taken is not always worth the outcome. Revolt against wrong is right.

» Posted By Bart On 02.10.2011 @ 6:25 pm


The alarm seemed to be a distant buzz. Nothing like what she expected. The misty day shown brighter as she began to peel open her eyes.

» Posted By Bart On 02.07.2011 @ 11:55 am


Someone who has unresolved needs. A person who is the source of irritation and angst. Someone who needs to lighten up.

» Posted By Bart On 02.05.2011 @ 4:03 pm


Feuds are fights between different kinds of people. My dad was in a feud once but it worked out pretty well for him. My wife loves to watch reruns of Family Feud especially the bits with the crazy families vying for their fabulous prizes. I personally think that people are feuding too much in our society even if “feud” conjures up ideas of Georgian mountain people wearing nothing but overalls shooting at one another.

» Posted By Bart On 11.04.2010 @ 1:01 pm


I’m thinking of guide dogs and how they lead us where we need to go. On the surface of things, we’re the master and they are the servant. But they lead and we follow. It’s a nice change of pace and an exercise in proud humility. I wonder if I am allowed to actually think during this exercise. Hmmm… Guided by the light, shut off like a deuce another runner in the night! Guided by the liiiight. Guiding Light? Isn’t that a soap opera? I think it is. A very bad one, too. But aren’t they all bad ones? Hmm… What next. Guided hand is sort of a sweet thing, like looking after somebody & trusting them to place your hand where it needs to be. Like you would with a small child or an older person. Guided like a map. Somebody shows you the way. They lead, you follow. Guided tours are supposed to be better than self-led tours. You can learn more about what you’re supposed to learn, but you’ll miss the stops and nuances along the way. Can I stop typing now? Is this the end of things? I’m not sure about that. Guided and led and guiding light and isn’t this supposed to be for ONE minute??

» Posted By Bart On 09.18.2009 @ 8:04 pm


like a book with writing and you read it and i sound like a tool and i say and too much.
what to write about it i have no idea. paperback books get trashed more easily than hard covers unless you take super good care of them.. kdone.

» Posted By bart On 09.15.2009 @ 7:36 pm


My grandmother’s hands were gentle. As much work, fun, play, struggle as they went through, they were the most gentle things. She had a way of holding me when I was a little kid that made me feel like I was in the safest place on Earth.

» Posted By Bart On 10.31.2008 @ 6:04 am


Something held to popular belief but is not true.

» Posted By Bart On 01.26.2010 @ 12:40 pm

«« Back To Stats Page