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“Works like clockwork” he said simply. It was an old phrase but perfectly described the condition of their discovery. A smile skated across my mouth and I laughed but agreed.
» Posted By Annee On 09.24.2017 @ 1:54 pm
She watched it fly off into the sky until it disappeared behind the trees of her neighbor’s backyard. She imagined it building its own home one day in one of those trees as she walked inside.
» Posted By Annee On 06.23.2017 @ 11:52 am
Oh. Well. Dentists seem like a humorous subject almost, because many people don’t like going to the dentist, I guess.
» Posted By Annee On 06.05.2016 @ 5:11 pm
“Candles are smart” said no one ever.
» Posted By Annee On 12.31.2015 @ 2:19 pm
“Candles are stupid,” Said no one ever
Yep that is all I have.
» Posted By Annee On 12.31.2015 @ 11:57 am
This is a really easy thing to do. I think I do it a lot.
However, when I hear this word, all I can think about is the conflict between my sister and my mom right now.
» Posted By Annee On 12.21.2015 @ 2:22 pm
I missed my older sister’s graduation 2 years ago. She told me it wasn’t a big deal and that it would be extremely boring but I still feel bad about it. I wish I had gone. You know where I was instead? An amusement park. Ugh. Bad decisions yo.
» Posted By Annee On 12.20.2015 @ 2:05 pm
Emilee was making a video for her class about earthquakes. My cousin came and helped her with it. I got to be in it for a minute. I was my cousin’s daughter. :) She talked about faults and plates and other shiz. I got to pretend I had been in an earthquake. That’s a nice memory. :)
» Posted By Annee On 10.16.2015 @ 8:49 am
She looked out the window with weary eyes. Her flower in the planter on the windowsill was pointed to the sun. She smiled.
» Posted By Annee On 05.05.2015 @ 9:24 pm
I stood in the field. It was so peaceful, the wind quietly whispering wind on my face. I could faintly see buffalo about a mile away, enjoying the surrounding grass.
» Posted By Annee On 01.25.2015 @ 8:55 pm
She opened her door to find the sun still beaming through the dusty blinds covering her window. Sometimes you can’t help but smile.
» Posted By Annee On 01.20.2014 @ 3:42 pm
It was holding me in. I pushed persistently until my body couldn’t hold its own weight. I collapsed to the cold, stone ground. Helplessly I rolled over to find a door curiously in front of me. Quickly, I jolted up through my ache, and excitedly turned the brass knob. The door opened with ease. With its opening I felt the cool autumn breeze whizz through my hair, its mischievous leaves catching in it. A faint smile skated across my face.
» Posted By Annee On 11.05.2013 @ 5:28 pm
5 hundred 25 thousand 600 minutes, 525600 moments so dear. 52600 minutes.
How do you measure- measure a year?
» Posted By Annee On 09.19.2013 @ 2:54 pm
I sometimes feel like I’m prisoner of my own thoughts. Holding myself back because of words like, “improper”, “crazy”, or “uncouth”. But today, I’m breaking out.
» Posted By Annee On 09.09.2013 @ 3:30 pm
As mother spoke to me contently, I tried to listen and keep my nervous eyes focused on hers. But my mind kept wandering to what I had seen a few moments ago. I had been staring at him, utterly amazed at the beauty of his eyes. When he had looked up at me, I could see the reflection of my blushing face in those wide blue eyes of his. He had smiled and even managed a laugh. But then I had felt a sort of pang in my heart, like a change in my soul, that made me want to see his smile more. And well, his eyes too.
» Posted By Annee On 08.13.2013 @ 9:55 am
I opened my mouth, naturally. I wasn’t aware at all of the many pairs of eyes staring at me intently when I had said, “Captivating,” and instinctively took a step into the water. I wasn’t aware of what it could really lead to.
» Posted By Annee On 07.31.2013 @ 12:58 pm
I always tried to be there. Try to help out, be compassionate. Just serve mindlessly so I could forget about my own problems. I was the willing one.
» Posted By Annee On 07.02.2013 @ 2:09 pm
I simply folded my arms and started to pray. I felt a feeling of surety as I knelt on the cold concrete. And following it, an overwhelming thought that somehow made tears fall.
“It will work out”
I wasn’t sure if it was a thought or was actually said. But it was there. God was there.
» Posted By Annee On 07.01.2013 @ 6:44 pm
I didn’t fell like myself. I was somebody else with it on. A smile was pasted on my face. I was a short man wearing stilts. An ugly face in makeup. I wasn’t…me.
» Posted By Annee On 06.24.2013 @ 10:05 am
I was pushed out of the door into the cold wind of an august day. “Come back when you’ve made yourself useful!” Miss Peru said hastily in a heavy British accent. It was a rushed morning. I was woken up suddenly and forced on a pair of dirty socks and shoes. I looked down at them now.The grey socks’ toe stuck out of my left shoe. I felt the wind blow on to it; making it colder than the rest of my foot.
» Posted By Annee On 06.17.2013 @ 2:29 pm
The tears fell down my face with the trickle of a fountain. It somehow reminded me of pixels. Small pieces of me gliding down my cheeks, as they slowly destroyed me as a whole.
» Posted By Annee On 06.14.2013 @ 12:05 pm
“Get out!” he yelled furiously. I lingered, stopping briefly to look at the ground. I then looked up and was shoved aside by another crowd of people. I could barely see the outline of his face through the mass of rushed people. If only they knew.
» Posted By Annee On 06.12.2013 @ 1:47 pm
This wasn’t right. No maybe it was, I thought silently as I looked deep into his eyes. Quit it. You can’t love him. And then it the feelings were gone, briefly. I had pushed my them away and they were being prepared to be crushed and decomposed with all my other hopes and dreams.
And then they came back. Like a rush of a waterfall, down on to me at once. And I immediately took a step towards him, unaware that I had even thought of the idea. Before I knew it I was in his embrace. And we were kissing.
» Posted By Annee On 06.11.2013 @ 1:19 pm
I was corrected by a rough voice.
” Oh.” I said weakly. I’ll try again, I thought.
” I can get it this time.”
I was given hesitant looks as I walked lifelessly, my back to everyone. They couldn’t see the disappointment on my face.
» Posted By Annee On 06.10.2013 @ 12:02 pm
It seemed like everyone wasn’t themselves today. They were all being more risky, less everything they usually are. Less.. all the positive qualities they have. It was like they were all born in a playground of fools.
Or was it me that was different
» Posted By Annee On 06.09.2013 @ 11:40 am
I felt a poke. Naturally, I jumped. I quickly decided it must be my brother teasing me again, so I turned around and started to laugh. But I was cut off by a cold hand covering my mouth. There were words said, but I couldn’t make out what they were. It was all very, foreign.
» Posted By Annee On 06.08.2013 @ 10:04 am
It was too much. I sat at the back of the theater pretending it meant nothing to me. But it did. It really did. It was like it had been made for me and god tucked it away until this very moment. This moment where it meant everything to me. But I couldn’t help but to simply brush it off, because a montage in a movie couldn’t change my life. In fact, it felt like miracles of any kind couldn’t put a dent into all the crap I go through. So, i left it at that. A coincidence.
» Posted By Annee On 06.06.2013 @ 9:11 pm
I struggled with the word. The woman that had asked me to spell it, was tentatively glaring at me from above her glasses. I thought I studied this.. I could fell sweat drop from my forehead. Through my panic, I continued wracking my brain to find the spelling. The knowledge was stored somewhere. I looked at the woman again. I saw the word. A-N-T-I-T-H-E-S-I-S
Oh no. What now?
» Posted By Annee On 06.04.2013 @ 2:50 pm
He patted my brother on the back with a thump. The man was smiling and laughing, but my brother uncomfortably slumped. I could tell he just wanted him gone.
» Posted By Annee On 06.02.2013 @ 11:16 am
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I put on a face. Everyone had been excited to come except for me. I laughed occasionally, but it all had been fake. I didn’t feel right as we pulled up to the barren field inside of Mark’s truck. It smelled musty, old, and unnatural. I suddenly wished I had said no.
» Posted By Annee On 05.31.2013 @ 3:48 pm