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He had disregarded her as some unholy peasant. There for she saw him commit the crime. He didn’t think that someone so small and insignificant could get him caught. What he didn’t realize though was that she was wife to the general of the army. His mistake, her reward.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 05.14.2012 @ 7:52 am


The torture was unmerciful. I fainted from the pain every once in a while and when i woke up they would start again. That wasn’t the worst part though, the worst part was the things they made me eat. The tastes filled my mouth and made me gag. I would rather eat live monkey brains than the stuff they forced down my throat. I wouldn’t tell them though, I wouldn’t give in to the pain. I would rather die first, I would prefer this fate, than the fate that would await the world if I told.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 05.08.2012 @ 7:47 am


I was taught to listen. Listening is everything in life, when you listen you learn. When you learn you gain valuable knowledge, when you gain knowledge you gain wisdom. When you gain wisdom, you gain the right for freedom. Freedom is something everyone wants, so you need to listen to be free. This was how i grew up, hearing these words over and over, that is why right now, I’m a fabulous listener and an even greater learner, people come to me to gain knowledge and hear my wisdom. They come to me to learn how to be free, and when they ask me, “How can I be free like you?” I say, “Learn to listen and your life will be worth living”. The ones who listen to my advice live efficiently, those who didn’t listen were trapped in their own fantasies of life.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 05.04.2012 @ 8:15 am


They were to separated for their love was forbidden. He was a comener and she was royalty, it was forbiden. They had met in the strangest of circimstances when he snuck onto palace grounds to rob the castle for riches. She had caught him and he had begged her not to turn him in. He told her he was starving and just wanted enough money to get some food. Understandingly she had let him go. He ran away never thinking of seeing her again. They did though, she was passing through his village on a travel. she stopped there for the night and they met again. Over months they kept meeting in odd places none of them expecting to see each other. Eventually he got a job in the castle and they saw each other more often. They fell in love eventually. One night they were caught and her father had never been angrier. they were separated then because their love was forbidden. She was sent away to another kingdom to marry a prince for an alliance. He was kicked out of the castle and banished. He was going to travel though, he was going to find her, before it was too late to stop the wedding.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 05.02.2012 @ 7:55 am


The earrings were priceless and just having one of them would set Tate for life. This was his plan, to get set for life. He just had to make it around the world’s best security and the world’s most guarded building. The man had told him it was impossible, they would shoot first and ask later. You had to be insane to ever even attempt something that stupid. That was Tate’s specialty though, being insane and stupid was easy enough for him. He just needed to find fifteen people as insane and stupid as him, this was going to be a challenge Tate was looking forward to.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 04.18.2012 @ 9:53 am


The creature had bitten me and i felt as if flames were creeping up my arm and over my body. The old man had warned me of this happening, the creature bites its victims, its venom could kill a man instantly. Thank goodness it was only a baby but i was still paralyzed. I couldn’t move a muscle, i couldn’t even blink. I could just watch in horror as the creature put its fangs against my throat, and i couldn’t even scream as it started sucking my blood.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 04.12.2012 @ 7:49 am


The pins hurt in my arm. I can’t believe i took that stupid dare! I should of known that Jerry would trick me like that, I could of died. People like him don’t care though as long as they get what they want. I can’t give him what he wants and even if i could i wouldn’t not now. Not now that i know his secret, and his plan. If it weren’t for my broken arm i would kill him now, but i have to be careful and step wisely around this. Before it’s to late i must stop this.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 04.10.2012 @ 7:44 am


I looked behind me, i didn’t see anything out of the ordinary. Stop being such a scaredy cat i thought. All these stories of The Hood is just giving you the creeps, they aren’t true. Then i heard a whisper, i felt a chill spread through my body even though it was 80 degrees. i felt something brush by me. dont turn around dont turn around i kept saying but i did, i turned around. i regreted it instantly. there it was, The Hood stood before me and that ment all the stories were true. I was going to have a fate worse then death now. “Come”, the Hood said, “let us finish this”.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 04.05.2012 @ 7:47 am


The steps creaked as I stepped on them. I jumped when i heard a rat scuffle by me. I wasn’t sure why i decided to take the dare, it just felt right at the time. Now i regret it with my every shaking part of me. I open the door to the attic very slowly and peer inside. There is nothing in the room, except a truck sitting in the middle of the room. I take shaky steps toward the trunk. i slip the rusted key into the lock and turn it until i hear a click. i hold my breath as i open the lid, i look inside and scream.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 03.23.2012 @ 7:48 am


i grip my gun as tight as i can and slowly look around the corner. I curse as a bullet wizzes by me, is there any way to get out of here alive? i dont think so, but i can’t give up. i have to get the message to headquarters or we are all dead meat. another bullet races by me. i wonder how i got here in the first place. oh well that is what happens when you become a proffesional. now i just need to stay alive.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 03.06.2012 @ 6:45 am


the man drew terrified, he didn’t have a lantern to light his way so now he was stuck. Stuck in the wilderness where you don’t want to be stuck. The man tried putting on a brave face to show courage he did not feel. Then the howl came whispering through the trees to the man’s ears. he was doomed and he knew it, if only he had brought an extra lantern………

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 03.02.2012 @ 6:43 am


a generator is something that provides light or heat, in some situation generators are life savers to many different people, they give us the heat we need to live.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 02.29.2012 @ 6:42 am


i love solving mazes its always fun because you have to make the choice of the right path. i love corn mazes , even though i’ve never been in one, its 3-D and a real adventure especially when you have chainsaws chasing you around everywhere. the labrinth is a maze that no one can solve or so it is said and if you enter it you are stuck in it forever and then you get eaten by the minotaur. Mazes are amazing in my opinion and they are always full of suprises.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 02.13.2012 @ 6:45 am


I remember reading the book “The Gospel According to Larry” a couple months ago and about how there was a whole festival that was commited to getting rid of comercial merchandise or something of the sort

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 02.01.2012 @ 6:42 am


liberty is what makes us… us. america is full of liberty as paul revere stated “Give me liberty or give me death!” it puts a lot of thought on the subject of freedom. we are such a strong country as long as we keep our very hard earned liberty. with out liberty we are nothing we couldn’t ever accomplish anything or make our dreams come true. so whatever happens in your life remember that you have liberty others do not and it makes us the amazing country we are. :)

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 01.20.2012 @ 6:47 am


When you conceal something you hide it. I love to conceal all of my candy so my brothers can’t get any of it…. that doesn’t work though and I just end up coming home from school to find all of my candy gone and I’m left to clean up all the wrappers, talk about unfair!

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 01.13.2012 @ 6:48 am


lilies remind me of the time i was at a small pond with my entire family…. those days were happy and we had fun picking the lilies and feeding ducks. it was a spectacular view of a waterfall and frogs were jumping everywhere.

» Posted By Angel At Dawn On 01.09.2012 @ 7:33 am

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