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sweat seat
heart leak
underwater preach-
er pounding to the beat
drip up your neck onto your thighs
sting your eyes, worthless surprise

» Posted By Adeona On 03.03.2012 @ 12:31 pm


is it all free will or is it actually all force?
Do you want to be forced? Will you make a decision otherwise?
Is it better to retain your will and choice but not get everything done
or is it better to be told and then please everyone?
Autonomy or compliance?

» Posted By Adeona On 08.25.2011 @ 11:33 pm


lock you in
perfect control

hate poetry
stop making rhymes
I can’t lock nothin in

can’t do shit about my life
except me
nothing else I have a say in.

I cry and nobody cares
stupid teenage problems

» Posted By Adeona On 04.28.2011 @ 10:31 pm


performing the day’s work

smiling when needed

emotionless and cold

burning on the inside

for some expression
for some freedom
late at night when you are sad
but then you wake up and it’s


» Posted By Adeona On 04.19.2011 @ 10:11 pm


Well, plans scare me right now,
Whether about college in the fall
Or this concert we’re going to this month
Or even school this week (tomorrow)
Next season
And it all starts tomorrow.

» Posted By Adeona On 04.03.2011 @ 12:41 pm


I seem like I am “almost” everything I can/want to be. Almost pretty enough. Almost eating well enough. Almost finishing everything in school. I get a B, not an A. C-, not a B. “Almost got there,” you say. “Try harder next time?” “Come on, you have so much potential. Stop being ‘almost’.”
Looks like I’ll always be almost there.

» Posted By Adeona On 03.07.2011 @ 5:15 pm


long keychains are dumb
everything is dumb
why do I think I am so much better than anything I deem “dumb” “stupid” or “unworthy”?
I have been told too often I am of great worth, and told too often by myself
but I’ll think I’m just another potato in the bag if I consider and accept that I am worth the same as every one of his ex-girlfriends.

» Posted By Adeona On 02.27.2011 @ 10:19 pm


I admit
I cannot save you

I admit
you may hurt more than you help

I admit
I can do better than this

I willingly surrender
that I need to do greater

that I can do greater

that I shall do greater

I have an untapped potential to change
my own world,
radiate outward,
through family,
friends, schools,
towns, nations,
the world.

» Posted By Adeona On 12.06.2010 @ 9:53 am


Give me an elixir
To warm this heart
To quell its pulsings
of irresponsible wants

Pulse through my body
Cure my mind
Calm my soul
of tremors and disloyalty

» Posted By Adeona On 11.03.2010 @ 11:17 am


Threre weeks. I thought we wouldn’t last longer than three weeks, that I’d go back to him in time. That his heart would be tugging too strongly on mine and the memories too great. I still don’t know who’s better for me, or rather, whom I’m better for.

» Posted By Adeona On 10.24.2010 @ 11:30 am


Horses gallop and clip-clop along the cobblestone roads of the wooden town. The rain mists by and hurried umbrellaers whisk from one doorway to another, never stopping to notice the mellow horses shaking their tails.

» Posted By Adeona On 09.10.2010 @ 12:46 pm


oh joy, you have a baby now! have a wonderful time with this responsibility. i hope you had fun with your sex, too.

» Posted By Adeona On 09.07.2010 @ 3:26 pm


eternally isn’t something that i can decide on right now ask me again when i’m older and more able to deal with it . but if what i’m with when i’m older is determined by what i do now isn’t my eternity decided now?
so much pressure to guess right

» Posted By Adeona On 08.16.2010 @ 11:32 pm


the tide comes and goes.
Just like how positive i am about this relationship.

is it here? is it there?
our anger collides and we create another wave
another wave that will bite with its cold and salt

i hate it

» Posted By Adeona On 06.22.2010 @ 11:34 pm

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