• Jacki commented on the post, fort 4 years, 5 months ago

    The fort stood tall and proud, its rough hewn sides protruding from the forest like some sort of god smitten mountain rebelling against the natural ebb and flow of the hills surrounding.

  • Jacki commented on the post, disregard 7 years ago

    She threw down the scarf in complete disregard, her eyes wide in disbelief. Her lips curved in a smile filled with the radiant joy of sheer surprise.

  • Jacki commented on the post, hallowed 7 years ago

    The hallowed ground was silent. Only ghosts wandered this earth anymore. Forgotten in the mists of time they lingered still silent pillars upholding a dream of history. No one could recall their name. They […]

  • Jacki commented on the post, chapped 7 years, 1 month ago

    My lips are chapped. They sting in the cold frigid air that whips my hair into a golden frenzy about my face. I give up trying to keep the tangled locks tame, there is no point. Not any more. Not since it […]

  • Jacki commented on the post, catcher 7 years, 1 month ago

    CATCH HER!!
    She fell through the air, her body limp within the rushing air, her golden hair a halo about her head. He reached out her arms to grasp her, hold her, save her…

  • Jacki commented on the post, drifting 7 years, 1 month ago

    Drifting off, away. Far away. I watched as earth faded to a tiny sapphire marble. The stars drew near until all around all we could see were the tiny pinpricks of distant promises.

  • Jacki commented on the post, temper 7 years, 2 months ago

    He threw a fit. A tiny body of enraged energy, despairing and furious, a wild tempest about the room. First he managed to get his diaper off, screaming, his tiny face bunched in folds of infantile fat his green […]

  • Jacki commented on the post, trunk 7 years, 2 months ago

    The tree must have been thousands of years old, its trunk was as wide as five full grown men arms’ length. Leander marveled at it, it must have seen so much history, this tree, so much pain, happiness, and life. […]

  • Jacki commented on the post, ratings 7 years, 2 months ago

    Ratings. The ratings were high this season. Ugh this is a horrible word. Too modern. The ratings were low. The ratings were actually sideways… it’s just the world is partially on its side so they looked up […]

  • Jacki commented on the post, torch 7 years, 2 months ago

    It burned brightly against the night. Brilliant it stood between them and the darkness. A sea of shadows out before their feet they were afraid to move lest the waves of night come crashing down on them. They […]

  • Jacki commented on the post, pastel 7 years, 2 months ago

    The light colors soothed her. The pale blooming rose, the dew colored sky blue, even the usually spitefully bright yellow was a muted canary cream. It was lovely in the small room. Comforting.

  • Jacki commented on the post, pattern 7 years, 2 months ago

    It was a pattern. He knew it. He could feel it. This guy didn’t do something without a purpose and his purpose was this pattern. Though James couldn’t see it, the pictures spread out all before him. He just felt it.

  • Jacki commented on the post, recycle 7 years, 2 months ago

    It was a recycled thought. Again and again it popped up into his mind. He couldn’t stop it. Again and again it played in his mind just behind reality. As if there was a film before his eyes and if he drew […]