• LB commented on the post, copper 8 years, 11 months ago

    The smile came over his face like a thin copper wire strung across two poles. It was entirely the most frightening leering grin a person can contort his face to make. And I shuddered in his presence just as a spark of electric current conducted down my spine.

  • LB commented on the post, copper 8 years, 11 months ago

    thE SMILE CAME OVER HIS FACE LIKE A THIN COPPER WIRE STRUNG ACROSS TWO POLES. iT WAS ENTIRELY THE MOST FRIGHTENING LEERING GRIN A PERSON CAN CONTORT HIS FACE TO MAKE. aND I SHUDDERED IN HIS PRESENCE JUST AS A SPARK OF ELECTRIC CURRENT WAS SHOOTING DOWN MY OWN SPINE.

  • LB commented on the post, juice 8 years, 12 months ago

    The grapefruit juice dribbled down my chin in a sticky river. I cherished the flavors of tang and honey and heaven all encapsuled in tender bites of fruit. It was the most delicious thing I’d eaten in years.

  • LB commented on the post, cowboy 9 years ago

    The cowboy hunched down over the neck of the horse and shaded sunlight from his eyes by tipping his hat lower. He was silhouetted against a vast landscape. And somehow that made him all the more fearsome. I couldn’t see his gaze, but I’m sure lust glimmered in his eyes.