• Marie commented on the post, raised 6 years, 6 months ago

    “I was raised by my parents.” Josie announces proudly.
    “Well, I was raised by monkeys!” Aysia screams over her.
    “And? I was raised by Caterpillars.” I giggle.

  • Marie commented on the post, together 6 years, 7 months ago

    Together we will achieve whatever we want. Because together we are stronger. Two stars, shining as one.

  • Marie commented on the post, fried 6 years, 7 months ago

    If I hadn’t of moved from the large, glowing red laser, I would have been fried. You could have stuck me on a stick and called me a barbecue. Edible me.

  • Marie commented on the post, whether 6 years, 7 months ago

    Whether or not he actually misses me is another subject. Right now it’s whether or not he’s being truthful. He hasn’t replied to me on anything in 4 days. And he said he’d be back in “10 minutes” in exactly 4 […]

  • Marie commented on the post, miracle 6 years, 7 months ago

    It would be a miracle if Jennifer ever got out of the rubble. Her legs were covered with sharp rocks from the walls and her back had numerous wooden plinths across it.

  • Marie commented on the post, covered 6 years, 7 months ago

    As his limp and lifeless body was covered with the white plaid sheet, tears formed in my eyes, and warmed my face as they streamed down my rosy cheeks. I’d lost the one true love of my life; to make matters worse, […]

  • Marie commented on the post, texture 6 years, 7 months ago

    The texture of the quilt before me felt soft, plush like and bouncy. I had one person watching me. My eyes strayed to them quickly and darted back to the bed before me. I’m sleeping in a heaven tonight.

  • Marie commented on the post, side 6 years, 8 months ago

    The side of the pool was my only hope of not drowning and I was instantly dragged away from it by Anna. I kicked about and made big splashes behind my body. then i died. k. the end. :) c:

  • Marie commented on the post, half 6 years, 8 months ago

    Half full? Half empty? Neither. In between.

  • Marie commented on the post, misty 6 years, 8 months ago

    The misty day was beginning to bug me. It was thick enough to be a blanket. Spread far enough to be an ocean. It’s a misty day, did I already say that? I’m cooped up inside because we’ve been advised to stay off […]

  • Marie commented on the post, zone 6 years, 8 months ago

    As each of my feet pounded against the hard clay floor. Blurs of white painted lines kept me in the right lane. The finishing line drawing closer and closer. My competitors vanished from my view, my heart is set – […]

  • Marie commented on the post, banks 6 years, 8 months ago

    The soggy banks of the river let my feet sink deeper. All I had to do was reach my bag which happened to be drowning in the middle of the river. Luke was already in, he’d dived, but from the other side and a long […]

  • Marie commented on the post, concept 6 years, 8 months ago

    The concept of the “adventure” was to get something out of it. But our whole group got nothing. We won, and the writers went against their word. All their mangled ideas forced into a forest of which we were […]

  • Marie commented on the post, losses 6 years, 8 months ago

    I’ve had a lot of losses in my time. Family, friends, pets, even cars (yes. cars.) but none were so bad as losing Ryan. He was my life. He didn’t die overall, just only to me. He told me he hated me, and moved […]

  • Marie commented on the post, principal 6 years, 8 months ago

    the principal of the whole operation was to just all emerge well enough to get the area running safely. No one on the team knew this would happen. But it was their only hope once out on the field. All guns […]

  • Marie commented on the post, fuses 6 years, 9 months ago

    The fuses of the room were all linked up, each separate wire dangling dangerously close to the water beneath. Jumping fish in the water use the wires as jumping games, which increases the amount of water on the […]

  • Marie commented on the post, bandages 6 years, 9 months ago

    Murder. I just committed murder. In the process of mercilessly hacking away at his already lifeless body, I manages to cut myself. Using bandages, I patch myself up. Flashbacks of how I killed him attack me at […]

  • Marie commented on the post, detention 6 years, 9 months ago

    Notes are always passed in detention, and most just fuck about without a care. The teacher doesn’t even come, we stay the full hour though… It’s the only time we can be together. Usually, I sit with my book in a […]

  • Marie commented on the post, modem 6 years, 9 months ago

    The modem with all the information on, secret information was stolen. Our slight advantage of winning the war and getting out of our Dystopian city was now gone.

  • Marie commented on the post, railroad 6 years, 9 months ago

    As the private train stopped at the next stop, Fern got out and walked a bit down the railroad, being careful on where she steps. Kane followed her, copying her exact steps. She sat down against the worn down […]