• Alana commented on the post, wall 6 years, 8 months ago

    The wall was so imposing, like it went up forever, blocking out the sun even. There had to be a way around it. Time was running out, they would be here soon. There had to be a way.

  • Alana commented on the post, stunning 7 years, 11 months ago

    It was stunnIng, everything they had ever dreamed of. So why did she have such misgivings about the place? Every cell of her body was telling her to run and get the hell out of there.

  • Alana commented on the post, pouch 9 years, 1 month ago

    The pouch at his waist contained all that he would need from this moment on, all other worldly possessions were now unnecessary.

  • Alana commented on the post, den 9 years, 1 month ago

    They were hiding out in the den again. She liked this time they spent together, alone, away from all his mates. She knew she was just one of the lads to him, but for her …

  • Alana commented on the post, stroller 9 years, 1 month ago

    The stroller was running away with her, who knew these things were so heavy and unwieldy, especially downhill

  • Alana commented on the post, calling 9 years, 1 month ago

    She could hear him calling her, somewhere in the distance. Her attention was elsewhere though, she couldn’t take her eyes from the marvel in front of her, drawing her in, closer … closer …

  • Alana commented on the post, raise 9 years, 1 month ago

    He tried his hardest to raise the barrier and let her through but there was no shifting it, they were trapped on opposite sides and the end was coming

  • Alana commented on the post, trees 9 years, 1 month ago

    The trees were closing in on her, cutting out the light. She no longer new which way was north and the panic really began to set in, her breathing becoming ragged …

  • Alana commented on the post, rustling 9 years, 2 months ago

    The rustling of the newspaper was driving her nuts. Why did he insist on reading it in bed? She had been kept awake all night by his snoring and he couldn’t even leave her in peace now!

  • Alana commented on the post, overhead 9 years, 2 months ago

    The lightening overhead illuminated the scene below the window momentarily, the quick flash of metal hinting at the danger on it’s way

  • Alana commented on the post, understood 9 years, 2 months ago

    He didn’t understand, how could he? No-one could, not unless they had lived through it themselves. And very few had, very few could ever survive that.

  • Alana commented on the post, under 9 years, 2 months ago

    It was under the bed, how on earth it had gotten there she had no idea. She was sure she had put it away in the drawer. That was the second time this week …

  • Alana commented on the post, stood 9 years, 2 months ago

    She stood there, mouth agape, looking for all the world like she was screaming, but no sound escaped her lips

  • Alana commented on the post, chaos 9 years, 3 months ago

    The whole road was in complete chaos. There were flashing lights and crying children everywhere. What the hell was going on? Where was the hell was going on? Where was Bethany?

  • Alana commented on the post, mud 9 years, 3 months ago

    The mud was splattered all over the carpet, walls, coffee table. Where had it all come from? It had been clean when she had left the house only 20 minutes ago.

  • Alana commented on the post, pawn 9 years, 3 months ago

    She felt like a pawn in some sick game, being battered from pillar to post for someone else’s amusement. She’d had enough,it was time to fight back.

  • Alana commented on the post, salute 9 years, 3 months ago

    He saluted her as he turned his back and walked away. The sheer arrogance of the man made her blood boil, he’d get his, one day soon, he’d regret it.

  • Alana commented on the post, trend 9 years, 3 months ago

    The jeans she was wearing were bang on trend, it was just a pity about the the 1960’s jumper she was wearing tucked into them

  • Alana commented on the post, carve 9 years, 3 months ago

    He tried his hardest to carve their initials into the tree, it always looked so easy in the films, but the blade of his cheap penknife was working against him, mocking him

  • Alana commented on the post, spike 9 years, 3 months ago

    The spike was sticking out at an unearthly angle, the blood dripping back down towards the body, trying to get back in