• mouse commented on the post, freezer 5 years, 8 months ago

    cold burning ice
    your words mean nothing
    take me away
    thoughts breed nothing but fire when
    you speak
    don’t talk
    ive found someone new
    younger but more mature
    take a breath
    take a break
    let the frost build up while you smile and wait
    i’m not the one
    just afraid to be alone
    take me now
    i’m too drunk to regret

  • mouse commented on the post, creativity 5 years, 10 months ago

    swells
    grows
    crumbles
    beneath
    simple
    sicken
    drunken
    splutter
    sizzle
    fizzle
    forget it all
    drunken
    drizzle
    paint over it
    tomorrow
    forget.

  • mouse commented on the post, stampede 5 years, 11 months ago

    truth glides
    fearful calm
    slow seductive
    lips
    panicked words
    rush out- wild
    small feet move quickly
    stifle trample dust

  • mouse commented on the post, hoping 5 years, 11 months ago

    she’s floating still
    distilled
    down a river
    or lake
    you never can tell
    maybe she stopped
    drinking hoping
    there was another way
    to cope

  • mouse commented on the post, piano 5 years, 12 months ago

    fingers slide over
    pale flesh, beautiful
    rhythm; your forte

  • mouse commented on the post, hell 6 years ago

    arriving
    was not what i’d expected
    empty
    no fire, no demons or such
    this day
    very similar to those before
    still living
    the same, except
    empty.

    this life is
    hell
    without you.

  • mouse commented on the post, senator 6 years ago

    empty words
    promises
    pockets

    the world
    they’ll give it to you
    if you

    trust
    but how can they all
    have the world to give?

  • mouse commented on the post, complexity 6 years ago

    i’m always lost
    there’s complex after complex
    small winding roads
    a tiny city
    complex with avenues on left and right

  • mouse commented on the post, ravenous 6 years ago

    flesh fresh
    birds circle
    ravens roving
    craving carving
    starve cut
    rip ravenous
    raven fresh
    flesh raving
    squawk squeal

  • mouse commented on the post, chivalry 6 years, 1 month ago

    chivalry is dead…

    but women killed it.

  • mouse commented on the post, distress 6 years, 1 month ago

    wearing a nervous nice dress
    shoes shine teeth white
    thirty minutes early
    wait
    in a dark chair
    feet tapping
    fingers pick at cotton threads
    fumbling
    thumbing through magazines
    eyes glaze over glossy faces
    stress distress confess
    never done this before

  • mouse commented on the post, sundried 6 years, 1 month ago

    tomatoes
    wrinkly
    sweet

    summer clothes
    wrinkled
    torn

    one of those
    wrinkling
    brown bodies

    all drying
    changed
    wasting

  • mouse commented on the post, fasting 6 years, 1 month ago

    grumble gripping, ill
    inhale your fill
    see their smiles
    see you’re full

  • mouse commented on the post, delve 6 years, 1 month ago

    deeper into under
    through
    questions

    delusion deluge
    delving into someplace
    i shouldn’t

  • mouse commented on the post, wrought 6 years, 2 months ago

    iron
    an iron fist
    beating, beaten
    misshaped
    perfectly
    listen follow

  • mouse commented on the post, backlit 6 years, 2 months ago

    silhouettes writhing
    slowly
    one candle and the moon
    i shiver silent
    not like me to watch but
    i’ve been alone for days

  • mouse commented on the post, gamer 6 years, 2 months ago

    a game
    he plays
    plucking
    strings
    guitars,hearts.

    a game
    i lost
    heart in his hands
    playing, plucking
    letting go

  • mouse commented on the post, steady 6 years, 2 months ago

    his
    shaky hands
    hold steadfast
    steady
    nervous trigger
    finger quivers.
    shouting out
    apologies
    in a voice
    not his own

  • mouse commented on the post, decoy 6 years, 2 months ago

    took me by the hand
    led me astray-
    not what i wanted.
    destroy me with a decoy
    of what i thought
    she might be.

  • mouse commented on the post, joyous 6 years, 2 months ago

    joyous rejoice
    stress test rest
    depress
    joy
    study test test
    soon we’ll be lawyers,
    join us
    joyous stress
    test rest
    stress