• Vi commented on the post, hardly 4 years, 9 months ago

    It was hardly anything at this point. A little spec in the distance. A little nothing shrinking into the distance. It was refreshing though. It was almost beautiful. It was an amazingly sad thing. To live and not know when you’d be returning. If ever. But at the same time it was nice because it made you remember everything that you thought was…[Read more]

  • Vi commented on the post, stretcher 6 years, 11 months ago

    Wheeled away on a stretcher, some people’s nightmare, but it isn’t one when you’re completely alone, or when you’ve don it before, it’s remarkable how almost nothing becomes frightening when you’ve done it before. […]

  • Vi commented on the post, hood 7 years, 2 months ago

    Hood. She was in the hood. How she got there she didn’t understand. But at this point it didn’t matter. She reflected on how stupid it was to call something a hood, was it really that hard to say neighborhood? She […]

  • Vi commented on the post, suppose 7 years, 8 months ago

    I suppose I should have seen it coming, all of this, but really it was kind of a shock,I don’t know why it was, but it was. The fact that here I was doing the exact same thing as I always did truly did come as a shock to me but upon further reflection I […]

  • Vi commented on the post, expecting 7 years, 11 months ago

    I was expecting something else from that. What I don’t know it just wasn’t what I expected, what I wanted. I figured there’d be something more, there’s always something more. But I guess there’s an exception to that. There wasn’t more this time. All there was now was disappointment, and let me tell you I […]

  • Vi commented on the post, station 8 years ago

    The train station was full but it mattered not. I couldn’t hear the din of the others over the music blaring in my ears, it was always present it seemed, the music, that was probably because I couldn’t leave home with out it, without something to mask the horrible noises of the world around me. […]

  • Vi commented on the post, remember 8 years ago

    “Remember remember the fifth of November, the gunpowder treason and plot, I see no reason that the gunpowder treason should ever be forgot” the words went through my mind, the meter of the poem flowing nicely. Guy Fawkes, an interesting guy, and V for Vendetta, and interesting film, both had peaked my interest even at […]

  • Vi commented on the post, pretzel 8 years, 1 month ago

    Pretzels. He was sick of them, making them every day would do that to someone. He worked for Auntie Anne’s pretzels, he saw so many people every day and he looked down on them as they frivolously spent money as he worked so hard to get it. It was a problem for him this job. […]

  • Vi commented on the post, domestic 8 years, 1 month ago

    She was far from a domestic, but she found herself cleaning, cooking and taking the kids to and from soccer practice. Is this really what I want? She’d ask herself almost daily and always the answer was no. She couldn’t stand the life she had built for herself. But what else could she do, especially […]

  • Vi commented on the post, wasteland 8 years, 1 month ago

    She felt like a wasteland. Like a big emotionless wasteland. That was the way that he made her feel. And it was awful. She hated feeling like that. She absolutely hated it. She wanted to feel loved by him. She deserved to be loved. He owed her that much.

  • Vi commented on the post, glowing 8 years, 1 month ago

    “Whoa! Your happy glow, it’s blinding.” he said.
    “I am not glowing. Now shut it.” she said to him as her cheeks began to flood with colour.
    “You sure about that?” he asked.
    “Yes, I am entirely sure that I am not glowing.” she said shooting him a glare before walking away.

  • Vi commented on the post, bones 8 years, 1 month ago

    You could see all of her bones, she was so thin. She hadn’t really eaten in days. She had lost seventeen pounds in three weeks. It was due to the stress of all of it. He thought he had it hard, he had no idea, he might have been the one that was dying but […]

  • Vi commented on the post, console 8 years, 1 month ago

    He lined up the console. Ready to kick some zombie ass. It was a nice way to spend the night. First mindlessly killing zombies then later switching to go on an epic kill streak, it was the only thing he did anymore. He sat in the cold dark basement, the plasma screen brightly glowing from […]

  • Vi commented on the post, crew 8 years, 1 month ago

    She walked down the stairs and to the kitchen in a borrowed crew neck shirt of his. It was nice and soft, faded to pink with wear. As she looked around the modern kitchen she tried to get her bearings, and to try and figure out if there would be anything edible there. The chances […]

  • Vi commented on the post, birth 8 years, 1 month ago

    Her birth was nothing remarkable, not like the typical hero’s journey. There was really nothing to say about it. Born to relatively wealthy parents, and the pawned off to the nanny. It was hardly anything special. But that didn’t mean that she wasn’t.

  • Vi commented on the post, waver 8 years, 1 month ago

    She wavered for a moment. Her smile faltered, she was remembering someone else. Someone from before. She look to the ground as the memories came rushing back to her. She didn’t want them to. She thought she had managed to forget all of it. But the memory of his funeral was too vivid in her […]

  • Vi commented on the post, heel 8 years, 1 month ago

    Her heel dug into the ground. She didn’t know where she was being taken exactly. But then it hit her, the epiphany of it. They were taking her to the place where it all started.

  • Vi commented on the post, eyeliner 8 years, 1 month ago

    Her eyeliner was running down her face due to the rain. She was laughing as she danced through the breaking sky. She had once scoffed at the girl who did this, thinking that they looked like such messes with their eyeliner ruining their painted on faces, but now, she couldn’t care less, she knew how […]

  • Vi commented on the post, camp 8 years, 1 month ago

    It was summer camp. She didn’t know what to expect. She had never been to summer camp before. So as she was dropped off she looked over her shoulder in a final farewell to her parents, picked up her bags and moved on. No place to start like the present right? Who knew what this […]

  • Vi commented on the post, bandana 8 years, 1 month ago

    The bandana was wrapped tightly around my bleeding leg. It was all I had to stop the bleeding, and I really didn’t want to die out here. I mean where was here anyway? I had absolutely no clue. I just woke up here in the jungle, a standard survival kit at my side, and my […]