• Dave commented on the post, actual 6 years, 5 months ago

    actual nonsense
    actually, that’s nonsense
    actualize the nonsense
    actual nonsense

    act chew whole

  • Dave commented on the post, jelly 6 years, 11 months ago

    jigglypuff
    jiguleeee
    puff.

    jelly on top
    ja elly
    on top.

  • Dave commented on the post, treaty 6 years, 11 months ago

    hey brother…
    two.

  • Dave commented on the post, shorthand 7 years ago

    cough
    cough
    shorthand

  • Dave commented on the post, tasting 7 years ago

    you taste the fire
    you taste the rules
    i taste the rebellion
    and i’m the fool.

    tasting.

  • Dave commented on the post, poster 7 years ago

    the poster on the wall has him on it,
    and he stares back with silent eyes.
    mute eyes.
    and they won’t tell me a word

    and then i see him at school
    and his eyes have no emotion
    and he reminds me
    of my […]

  • Dave commented on the post, rainy 7 years, 1 month ago

    hot, cold, wet,
    rain comes down.
    the sky is loud,
    when rain comes down.

    rainy.

  • Dave commented on the post, collar 7 years, 3 months ago

    He holds my collar,
    He keeps it tight.
    I take it off,
    run into the night.

    His hands will slip,
    His eyes will fall.
    The collar will drop,
    the end of it all.

  • Dave commented on the post, sacrifice 7 years, 6 months ago

    Let’s feed them rice
    And count them twice
    And we will never
    Sacrifice
    Another one
    Under the sun
    And so we won,
    The sacrifice!

  • Dave commented on the post, riots 7 years, 6 months ago

    Let’s start riots,
    We can be riots
    Let’s be perfect together
    Let’s name pirates
    They can be the highest
    We can love together
    Forever

  • Dave commented on the post, pretzel 8 years ago

    The word that doesn’t go deeper
    You cannot make out love
    And though you see many descriptions
    Pretzel is just too tough

  • Dave commented on the post, shape 8 years, 2 months ago

    Shape.. .
    shape me right.

  • Dave commented on the post, wanted 8 years, 2 months ago

    Running through the woods at night Wondering who could have the might Why would anyone choose your fight Oh, that’s right You’re a wanted knight Slowing yourself to a walk Settling your eyes on children’s chalk You don’t dare move your mouth to talk For you are being stalked Slide yourself through a doorway He […]

  • Dave commented on the post, gym 8 years, 2 months ago

    “Gym.” “I cannot think, for you have answered my prayers, Jim,” I heard Nora say. “Wait, Nora. . .,” our teacher said, almost too surprised, almost showing her embarrassment FOR Nora. “No, for he is the word fulfilling the last meaning to life,” Nora reasoned. “Sweetheart. . .,” the teacher said, losing patience. “Do not […]

  • Dave commented on the post, scarves 8 years, 2 months ago

    Scarves, not scars. Scarves. . .

  • Dave commented on the post, wondered 8 years, 2 months ago

    Wondered how long it lasted.
    Wondered how long it happened.
    Wondered how long it mastered.
    Wondered how long they dampened.

    Dying, dying, dying, and dead.

  • Dave commented on the post, almost 8 years, 2 months ago

    Nothing is happening Because no one will help And everyone is listening To no one but themselves ‘Cause people are enlightening Nothing like myself It’s time and humans aren’t ready C’est La Vie It’s all mine and I’m keeping steady Good luck to all Sad you won’t hear Here’s a good and bad call: We’re […]

  • Dave commented on the post, swept 8 years, 2 months ago

    Swept me away from a dream.
    Clear as day you
    Swept me away.

  • Dave commented on the post, control 8 years, 2 months ago

    I’m in Nothing can take me out of Everyone seems to want to take But I always come above ‘Cause I’m in Control I’m in control Never leaving control Living with control It’s what I hold because I’m in control Control Jealous because you’re not Mad ’cause I just got In control Embarrassed ’cause you […]

  • Dave commented on the post, final 8 years, 2 months ago

    My last call
    A wake up time
    If I come in
    I’ll surely shine
    Nothing happens
    For nothing at all
    And if I live
    It’s my last call
    The worst stage to fear
    The worst way to fall
    The saddest story to hear
    The final recall