• LynnNolan commented on the post, platinum 7 years, 3 months ago

    i could see the city up ahead. It was shinning like a platinum star that had fallen to earth. I could almost taste the water that i planned on guzzling as soon as i get there. I had just walked through what felt like the sahara.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, shuffle 7 years, 4 months ago

    he could feel the cards in his hands as he watched the man across the table. he began to shuffle them, while thinking of ways to get out of here.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, chorus 7 years, 10 months ago

    i could hear the song in the background. they were just getting to the chorus. I had about 3 min before the croud would be aware that they were being robbed.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, trailer 7 years, 11 months ago

    i could see the trailer swaying madly out behind the truck as we speed down the highway. all i could think of is that this thing is going to fly off and kill someone. i looked back at dad driving the car, and i could tell now wasnt the time to bring it up.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, styrofoam 7 years, 11 months ago

    the chunks were floating everywhere. there was nothing left of the oat at all. the missle had demolished the whole thing. all the was left were huge chunks of what looked like styrofoam floating everywhere. and right there in the middle clinging to a large piece of debris, was the Captian!

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, gasoline 7 years, 11 months ago

    we pulled over to the side of the road. all i could smell was gasoline. he got out of the van and we sped off. no one spoke. in the rearview mirror i saw a large burst of flame where we had dropped him off. “my god, he really did it”

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, severe 7 years, 11 months ago

    the wind was relentless. i could feel the sever sting of the rain as it pelted my face. i could just make out the boat being tossed around on the waves. I hoped it would be here soon and i could put this whole day behind me.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, average 8 years, 4 months ago

    i have seen people like her before. not to tall not to small, everything about her was average. her hair, her weight, everything. but for some reason i can not stop thinking about her.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, element 8 years, 8 months ago

    there was one crystal that represented on of the four elements. Earth, Air, Fire, Water. I took these crystals from the wizard that lives on the edge of town and i plan to use them to rid our town of these beasts.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, generate 8 years, 8 months ago

    i have to try and generate some motivation to get this done. i can feel my will power draining away.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, spike 8 years, 8 months ago

    the sound of the spikes being sharpened could be heard all over town. The heretic was to be impalled this afternoon. We did not know this man so most of the families were getting ready for the festivities that would follow the ceremony.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, beach 8 years, 9 months ago

    sand and surf
    water so blue
    feeling the waves hit my toes
    gulls cry

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, tide 8 years, 9 months ago

    the soldiers raced up the hill and down the other side out of view. running towards the battle ahead. hopefully this victory will turn the tide

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, bleach 8 years, 9 months ago

    All i could smell as i entered the house was the bleach. the mother had used it to wipe off the childrens blood that still clung to the white sideboards in the childrens rooms.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, without 8 years, 9 months ago

    i am going without you. she said as she ran out the door and got into her friends car. i watched her drive away up the street and went back into the house. I picked up the phone and called my other girlfriend to come over. mission accomplished.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, matching 8 years, 9 months ago

    the woman and her son were walking down the isle of the supermarket and they were wearing matching outfits. I was working at the counter and i could not stop laughing. I had to have a manager come over and relieve me in order to compose myself

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, fallout 8 years, 9 months ago

    after the fallout we all gathered in the center of the campground. the fires were burning all around and you could still hear some distane gunfire. we all silently looked around us, the bodies of our friends, who until a short time ago were laughing and dancing now lay lifeless and cold upon the ground.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, driven 8 years, 9 months ago

    i cant believe i have driven all the way out here and he isnt even ready. I can see him running back and forth in his room getting ready. Why do guys wait untill they hear you beep outside before getting dressed. oh well

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, brave 8 years, 9 months ago

    the waves crashed against the side of the small canoe as we tried to brave the open waters. The water had already begun to trickle over the sides as we paddled with all our hearts.

  • LynnNolan commented on the post, wand 8 years, 9 months ago

    the kid just waved his wand at me. i think i should teach hiim a lesson.