• Max King commented on the post, wand 8 years, 11 months ago

    the fluorescent wand slowly fell, picking up speed as it hurtle toward the ground. it hit, the sound like a needle a small, tink, and then it snapped, the energy arcing to the surround buildings.

  • Max King commented on the post, hawk 8 years, 11 months ago

    the lazy redtail circled over the field. its eyes glinted in the harsh sun as it grabbed updrafts and rode the currents and drifted aimlessly through the air.

  • Max King commented on the post, science 8 years, 11 months ago

    the complex science of alchemy was passed on from one generation to another through the ages. constantly refined and changed very few know the area in its true form.

  • Max King commented on the post, century 8 years, 11 months ago

    the end of the century was looming. the inter solar community was gathering the neccessary equipment for the final jump of the colonizing ships, and all eyes were focused on exodisplays with live feeds from nearby sattellites.

  • Max King commented on the post, train 8 years, 12 months ago

    the rails were rubbed smooth from the constant traffic, they were quiet and they only whined the arrival of an approaching train once or twice a year now.

  • Max King commented on the post, pillar 9 years ago

    the cement pillar rose out of the ground, displacing tons of desert sand. the tremendous column continued to rise as glyphs began to glow on the side of the monument, spreading the strange light for miles.

  • Max King commented on the post, kite 9 years ago

    the small orange and blue kite fluttered in the wind
    it was tossed and turned, flipped end over end
    then, dashed to the ground
    the small boy holding his mothers hand ran over to the wreckage, wailing his distress

  • Max King commented on the post, dress 9 years ago

    her velvet and lace dress fluttered out in the wind
    the swirling gusts caressed the fabric
    the deep blue fabric sweeping over the sky ’till it is night

  • Max King commented on the post, destiny 9 years ago

    he was falling falling, falling, the darkness engulfing him as he fell into the pit, he was contemplating his life, his destiny, his path. he lingered on the topic of his impending doom when…

  • Max King commented on the post, wealth 9 years ago

    “as you can see my wealth is quite exspansive,” the lord of the home was strolling through his house with a continuos link to a video conference. the smooth marble walls smooth curved around the home.

  • Max King commented on the post, withheld 9 years ago

    he withheld valuable informatino, and there fore he himself was withheld. the cell they shoved him in was cramped and small a 3×3 hell hole.

  • Max King commented on the post, depth 9 years ago

    falling, falling falling, down down down to the deepest depths of the subconcious his body lay slumped on the ground as he fell within his mind,

  • Max King commented on the post, chained 9 years ago

    he was layin down on the wall, as best he could. ht emanackels and shackles attached to his arms and legs only allowed him to lean on the grime on the wall