• ching commented on the post, circles 1 year, 1 month ago

    here we are, going round and round
    the Ferris wheel, and your eyes
    are like circles
    maybe its because i treasure you so,
    place you in a frozen kaleidescope
    let time, flow in circles

  • ching commented on the post, baguette 1 year, 6 months ago

    long thin french bread
    then they clubbed one over the head
    stale
    it died.

  • ching commented on the post, ancient 1 year, 7 months ago

    its yellow, oxidising, degraded to rubble.
    i stand in her midst, gazing upon
    her majesty.

  • ching commented on the post, known 1 year, 7 months ago

    what she knew confused her even further, she could feel the edges of foundation crumbling like tarts, the seams gradually falling apart and coming undone from the pressure.
    if only she’d known.

  • ching commented on the post, wheels 1 year, 7 months ago

    wheels, wheelbarrows
    fitted on cars, conveyor belts,
    round, they are spinning and spinning
    carry on the load of the modern universe upon its circular self.
    how miraculous indeed.

  • ching commented on the post, defy 1 year, 7 months ago

    its us against them
    me and you against the world
    our passive battles fought daily, victories are muted,
    our existence a defiance from the natural order,
    this is us, the youth.

  • ching commented on the post, futuristic 1 year, 7 months ago

    everything is shiny, sometimes apocalyptic, sometimes grim
    the hopes and dreams of our futures,
    reflect our current fears.
    who knows.

  • ching commented on the post, fallen 1 year, 7 months ago

    you in the mirror, illustrious.
    staring back with your hooded eyes and luscious lips, even in the dying afterglow of morning’s light, you are still beauty.
    you are still irresistible, the pinnacle of dorian grey, fallen.

  • ching commented on the post, key 1 year, 7 months ago

    you hold it in your hands, press it against the light and you gently open the door,
    it yields to you and you step over the threshold, intimidated.

  • ching commented on the post, radius 1 year, 7 months ago

    radius, radiant, radiation.
    you’re in a circle, your smile is broad wide strokes like the green blips on a radar screen.

  • ching commented on the post, revolving 1 year, 7 months ago

    revolving
    everything goes round and round
    gravity in a circle,
    light in squares,
    the center of the earth was once me,
    but as you screamed naked from whence you sprang from,
    my world revolved around you

  • ching commented on the post, spiral 1 year, 7 months ago

    unravelling, falling out of control, floating on air like a weightless parachute,
    descending down the chimney chute
    who knows that climbing a spiral staircase could be so deadly.

  • ching commented on the post, ghosts 1 year, 9 months ago

    there was ghosts in the shell
    ghosts as he walked through the old town
    ghosts lingering down every street and path he took and as he walked he silently wondered,
    if they would still recognise him,
    or if he would still remember them.
    that’s how it always felt,
    taking a walk in his hometown

  • ching commented on the post, shore 1 year, 9 months ago

    shore
    across the road there’s a seashore, and across that shore, there’s an island.
    She remembers because its how her dearest died, it’d swallowed up her beloved, like a jealous lover.
    What else do you want with me, now?

  • ching commented on the post, breakout 2 years, 1 month ago

    its a hit!
    selling more than a few million
    broadcasted nationwide
    humming, on the minds of millions
    to places she’d never dreamed of even singing
    oh the places that a breakout hit can go
    if only it had lasted.