• Luhan commented on the post, crisp 7 years, 6 months ago

    The morning air was crisp as my breath fanned out in a mist in front of me. I couldn’t tell where I was, or what I was meant to be doing. But I figured that was the exact premise of Life anyways, so I continued moving towards nothing, the frozen grass crunching beneath my shoes.

  • Luhan commented on the post, dozen 7 years, 6 months ago

    A dozen thoughts grace her face at the same time, muddled together to form the indescribable look she gives me. She extends her hand, but I back away, not really sure what to believe, as I can tell she isn’t quite sure herself.

  • Luhan commented on the post, near 7 years, 11 months ago

    The drops of rain fell so near, they just about mimicked the tears in her eyes. The only difference was that the slight buds of water held the promise of life while the tears were nothing but the empty regret that accompanies Death.

  • Luhan commented on the post, discovery 7 years, 11 months ago

    It was as if she had found the most meaningful discovery of all time. Everything fit into place, no loop-holes to be found, not one single flaw to be observed. Now, as she pressed her pen to the paper, it started to fade away. Slowly at first, then quicker and quicker until she realized she […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, wings 7 years, 11 months ago

    Dear Thylacine, I regret to inform you that I cannot make it to your party. I have been struck down by some type of bird flu. It’s quite comical, really. Along with the continuous coughing and aching throat, a great pair of wings has erupted from my shoulder blades! I haven’t really tried to use […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, step 7 years, 11 months ago

    She had taken her first step. Not physically, or mentally, but metaphorically. She was well on her way to finding who she was, and she knew for a fact that she didn’t need anyone to hold her hand and lead the way. Of course she still had tethers tied to people, and flimsy bridges leading […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, honest 8 years ago

    As she started to stumble over the piles of worn-out books, he reached for her hand, barely catching it within his own. She looked up, shock grazing her features, before pulling back. “You know, you didn’t have to do that. I always catch myself.” “I know, and to be honest, I hate that. You shouldn’t […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, rise 8 years, 1 month ago

    I’ll die before you, but I’ll rise again. The pain will consume me, but the love will remain.

  • Luhan commented on the post, corner 8 years, 1 month ago

    The corner was dark. Quite dark. Dark enough to gain it’s own form, it’s spirit. One that enveloped and engulfed the dejected feeling that spread from her body. This corner was her sanctuary and the Darkness her friend.

  • Luhan commented on the post, mole 8 years, 2 months ago

    He stared at the unassuming spot on her shoulder blade, gently prodding it with his finger. “You know, this mole of yours is shaped like a crescent moon. It’s quite beautiful.”
    She turned around, taking his hand in hers and dropping them in the space between them. “It’s cancerous.”

  • Luhan commented on the post, tempted 8 years, 2 months ago

    She had been in love with him for years. Years filled with silence, invisibility, and raw emotion. It was as clear as day to everyone near; He loved Her and She loved Him, but their eyes continued to be blinded. Everyday they walked by each other, the breeze their motion created intermingling. She was sorely […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, eyeliner 8 years, 2 months ago

    Her eyeliner reminded everyone of a cheetah. It was smudged around her glistening eyes and running in streams after fusing with her tears. The onlookers watched on as she buried her face in her hands, muffling a sob, and sprinted out as fast as the animal she resembled.

  • Luhan commented on the post, gasoline 8 years, 3 months ago

    The light breeze blew in the dampened air, causing the gauzy curtains to flutter, as if to escape the droplets of rain. “It’s raining, y’know. Gasoline this time.” She said it matter-of-factly, no expression within the statement. “Well, that’s fortunate. Those bodies that rained yesterday will be easier to get rid of when they’re all […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, severe 8 years, 3 months ago

    “Its a severe punishment to be left alone, don’t you think?” he asked, pushing his glasses back up the bridge of his nose. She turned towards him, dissecting his statement mentally, “Not so much a punishment as it is a fear. An eternal unease that appeared long before langauge. Or so I think.”

  • Luhan commented on the post, obsolete 8 years, 3 months ago

    “The human mind, it’s such an obsolete thing.” he declared, turning towards the opened window, twirling the weathered book in his hands. “You say that, but I see you cannot even convince yourself that.” His eyes glanced over at the speaker. “A thing becomes useless when old, as is the same with the mind. A […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, integrity 8 years, 3 months ago

    If the whole of humanity had integrity, the honesty to be true, I might strive to actually be a part of this idealized community in which we imagine to live.

  • Luhan commented on the post, example 8 years, 4 months ago

    His life was a prime example of the interference of a bumbling society.

  • Luhan commented on the post, control 8 years, 4 months ago

    He collapsed at the top of the crumbled stone staircase, coughing from the arduous climb. It was something unorthodox, unheard of even. But he was determined as all people should be. Pushing open the ancient wooden door, his bleary eyes focused on the three white-clothed women before him. They turned around, shock clear in their […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, bench 8 years, 4 months ago

    Sitting on the cold wrought-iron bench, she swivelled back and forth. To those around her, it appeared she was searching for someone. And she was. She was on a desperate hunt for Anakin Skywalker, because as her dad put it, “Only a sweet little girl could keep him from the Dark Side.” and she just […]

  • Luhan commented on the post, lean 8 years, 5 months ago

    You are alone in this world, trapped in the confines of yourself, not being able to truly express what goes on inside. The World will never know You, as it will never know Me. Even though we tend to lean together, we are, in reality, beside ourselves.